| "Wild Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 65 ] |
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 22:12 EDT
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Duo's reaction to Trowa was priceless! And I just knew he'd get himself into some kind of mess for hiding Scythe in the river. I find it supremely amusing that Trowa went from 'Really scary, don't want to meet that guy!' to 'damn I owe him big for saving my butt three times' in Duo's head in the span of about five minutes. Gotta love re-evaluated first impressions. I can only imagine the dressing down dear Duo will be getting from 01! Not only did he leave his suit in the wrong place, but I'm sure that was his cranky warhead that blew seven minutes too soon. Such fun! Thank you for writing! I'll be looking forward to your next update! -jess
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 20:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad you updated - an interesting combination fic - the "usual" and the "unusual"... I like the fact that the pilots are more independent thinkers.
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Title: ch8
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 14:58 EDT
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Hmm... I can't help but worry about the slight change Duo made to the plans. Particularly since he doesn't know what exactly Heero is going to be doing. I also worry a bit about the warhead he gave Heero. Not that I don't think he can handle it but more that it will do something particularly awkward at an inopportune time. It was rather clever of Duo to wrap those nasty bits of shrapnel up with his other bombs. I can't wait to see what happens next! I have this sneaking suspicion that something is going to go horribly pear-shaped and soon. Thanks for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 16:53 EST
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Sweet. Definitely a fun start to mission mode again. Neh. COntinue to update, this style works very well for this story. Ja ne.
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Title: chap7
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 14:22 EST
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Well Duo seems to be taking all of this in stride. I loved his little 'conversation' with G's recording. It seems the good doc knows Duo pretty well, heh. Though it is interesting that his intel isn't perfect and that he didn't know Duo had met Heero. Interesting indeed. I laughed when Duo stole the music player. His quest for tunes seems to be a running theme. Duo always did strike me as the kind of guy who has his very own soundtrack to life. And it was clever of him to get fuel and explosives in the same trip. I rather liked that scene. I suppose I'll have to wait and see how the three of them work together and to see whether Duo will still be creeped out by Trowa in person. heh. Thank you for writing! As always, your curious fangirl, jess
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 07:46 EST
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Well now this is interesting. I wonder if he'll be able to get in contact with G and figure out how to ask him about this lovely new development. I also wonder if his research about wolves will come in handy a little later. Well I'll be watching for more. Thanks for writing! --jess
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 18:37 EST
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Hmmm, fun little chapter. It establishes some more complexity, but basically acts as a filler chapter, almost, establishing a rapore between quatre and duo. Neh. Not a bad idea, and execution is okay to boot. Neh. Update again soon, rapid chapters mean more reviews from me, ja ne.
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 17:54 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapt! Very interesting
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Reviewed By: elementalmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 01:20 EST
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You're cranking this one out and it just got really interesting. I was wondering when the others would show up and the meeting didn't disappoint! Great job! I can't wait to see more!
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 20:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! The other pilots finally appeared! Very good chapt.!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 20:14 EST
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Hmmm, fast update, always sweet. Especially when Duo thinks he might be losing his mind! Neh. Anyway, now everyone knows about the alarms, but no the reason. And maybe the pilots were chosen for more than just being clever and moldable kids. Neh. Anyway, update soon, this fast again would be GREAT! Ja ne.
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Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 17:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting story! I cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 11:54 EST
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Hmmm, recovering from a hard night's transformation, and then immediately onto an easy mission, huh. What an interesting way to start things up. Anyway, love the story, and I just want to read more of it. Please update again soon (faster than 2 months next time!), ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 17:21 EDT
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ooOOooo! I wonder when he comes back to himself! Will he remember what happened? Will he be able to change when he wants to or is a only by the full moonlight thing? What happens next? When will he meet the others? Will he know that the others are different by their smell? Does he even have higher sences now? Or again, is it only when he changes? Update soon, please! ^_^
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Reviewed By: grey_lady On: October 25, 2007 12:59 EDT
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So, 10/10 out of everything. This is very interesting, please keep it up! ^^
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