| "For The Love of a Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Title: OOO
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2009 18:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH love is in the air, well in the air the of seretei anyway. I can't wait till this story catches up with different circumstances watching the cause of events in another story is very interesting. It's nice to get different perceptions of the same event it gives more of the feeling of understanding and not missing the last piece of the puzzle. Anyway your stories are always a great pleasure to read looking forward to future chapters.
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Title: ldymoon
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 20:12 PDT
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Ah another great chapter, can't wait to read the next one! Tho, I could totally see Toshiro's face when he figured out 'who' gave Soi the gift lol.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2009 07:11 PDT
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Geez, Shunsui is pretty dense. At least he's staying true to his womanizing ways either that or he's in really deep denial. Then again everyone in this story is in deep denial of some sort. BTW, what's a hornet doing in Shunsui's house? Anyway, now Toshiro is armed with his awesome present and will be having that conversation with Ran we saw in Different Circumstances. It'll be interesting to see Toshiro side of that one.
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Title: ldymoon
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 19:50 PDT
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I was so happy to see that this story was updated in my mail box I literally yelled out "YAY!" and my husband gave me a weird look. lol. I don't know what is going on with Byakuya and Kiyone but that's a story I'd like to read. I also liked how the 3 Captains in the end were in their own worlds talking about seperate things but it all fit together smart dialouge there. Look forward to the next chapter as always!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 23:33 PDT
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God damn, Byakuya is a bastard. What's his angle here? Why is he trying so hard to distance himself from Kiyone. Though I really like how you make the reader compassionate for Kiyone but at the same time feel pity for her. Toshiro's right, she was downright pitiful. Really I kinda felt sorry for Soi since she gets to see what it's like ot have someone rebuff you. Maybe that will open her eyes? Knowing you, it won't amount to much but then that's what makes this story entertaining, Toshiro and Soi's little mating ritual dance (except with the possibility of eviserating). Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 04:09 PDT
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Another Good update. A few minor Spelling errors but other then that greatly written. Now if only we could see where all leads to. The Fruit basket idea was great. Hope you update soon. ~~Mors
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: June 27, 2009 21:37 PDT
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Oh i'm always waiting for the update on this story and i'm never dissapointed. I can't wait to see how it all turns out but I don't want it to end to soon either! lol. and oh, my stomach turned with omeda as well and your description didn't help any either. :P
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Reviewed By: Darkwolf22 On: June 26, 2009 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story. The plot is very different and new. I never imagined some of the couples, like Hitsugaya and Soi Fong, Unohana and Hisagi, Shunsei and Isane, and Byakuya and Kyone. I really liked the part when you compared how the children of the couples. It was really funny. Also, the plot is very suspenseful. I'd like to see how Hitsugaya and Soi Fong will interact. Will they get together or will it all fall apart? Anyway, thank you for writing such a nice story.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 14:53 PDT
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Ah now we see why Soi knocked Toshiro out. I get the feeling the message Toshiro gets the next morning is going to be bad news. I sense the secret admirer is more meddling from out favorite hairy captain. When will he ever learn? Welp, once again another great chapter and no matter how much of a bitch Soi is, at the end of the day you just want to hug her despite the fact she'll sever my spine.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: May 29, 2009 20:39 PDT
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You know I love this story! he's one of the characters i crush on for real even tho he looks like a boy i know that he's a man he's over 800 yrs old! lol. and i love this pairing. now...i love that he was thinking about kids his kids playing with matsumoto's kids and i was rotfl! it was halirious to see him thinking about his kids being bullied by zaraki's or even marrying them! loved it! can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 04:39 PDT
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Another Good chapter you have written here. I do like that Toshiro is trying to makes things better with Soi. I Still think Soi pinning Toshiro to wall might be a good thing. I cant wait to your next update. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2009 22:13 PDT
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Instinctively, Toshiro felt he was going to want to hurt someone, very soon. Hehehe. I like how you've been able to incorporate funny moments like this throgh out the story. I take it the message is an announcement of Omaeda's proposal. I felt kinda bad for Toshiro when he confronted Soi after the meeting. I've had moments like that and even gotten slapped for it too. His reasoning for not giving her fruit or the statue were wise reasons. Very wise. Finally it looks like he's going to be actively trying to win her back. All I have to say is, Go for it Toshiro! Show that Soibitch who's boss! Yeehaw! Another great chapter, but I agree Friend is like Different's slower cousin no one openly acknowledges at family gatherings. ;) *takes a sip from his sake jar and smiles lazily*
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Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 13:42 PDT
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OMG!!!! ILL!!!! I WANTED TO SLAP THE MESS OUT OF HIM TOO HE WAS TAKING WAY TO LONG TO GET ON WITH WHAT HE WAS SAYING BUT THEN....I WAS LIKE ILL!!!!! ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER I THINK I'M SICK NOW THO LOL
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 22:45 PDT
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Toshiro wouldn't believe that, would he? He could count. Heh, I love how you keep putting these little zingers in each of your stories. Well now Byakuya is going to have to face the music and Soi's going to have a front seat. Ooo, this will be entertaining. Then there's Omaeda's little bombshell. To be honest, I think this was all his little scheme to get out of work for a month or two or three. Loved the brief interplay between Soi and Toshiro, really captured the heart of what makes them work but also makes them disfunctional. Geez, Soi's got herself a problem but somehow other people's problems keep getting in her way. Heh. Great chapter Orion.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 20:55 PDT
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Great as all ways. I am glad to see that you have updated it all ways makes for a better day. This chapter was a great piece I think it is funny how you had Oomaeda propose to her. Maybe now she will get the nerve to tell Toshiro before she does something stupid. Well i hope you keep up the good work and Have a good Easter. Even though I think it is over now. =D
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