| "For The Love of a Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: miaow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 03:34 PST
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how did Toshiro know that Soi has his baby? i mean, after that 'time' which Toshiro thought he was dreaming, he didnt even come close to Soi. or maybe its the reiatsu? i hope Toshiro can clear any misunderstandings with Soi. it is getting too angsty!
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 14:41 PST
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This was a very interesting chapter. The fight scene was well choreograph which is surprising being Zaraki and Toshiro. Does Toshiro know that Soi is pregnant? Well yet again another chapter update soon and we will love to read it.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2009 22:26 PST
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That was an awesome fight scene. Well paced and I could follow the action easily. At first I thought it would a hackfest but it turned out more to be swordsmen ballet. Not that Zaraki and Toshiro were wearing tutus or anything... Anyway, I liked the end of the chapter with Toshiro spilling the beans to Zaraki along with Toshiro figuring out that Soi's taunting had a purpose. Though, why is Kira still hanging around Soi? And finally, triggers eh? Hmmmm...
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Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 20:58 PST
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How dare he! She didn't need to rely upon fruit to seek gratification. All the same, part of her mind wondered about it, would it be necessary to peel it first, or would it better to... OMG I was rolling here she is totally upset and than asking at the same time should she peel it first! I busted out loud with laughter and made my dog come over to me and sniff me up to see what the hell was a matter with me laughing so loud when everyone is asleep. Thanks for that and thanks for another really good chapter. Wow, I wonder what in the world Aizen did to Nano-chan (I know I didn't spell her name right :P) lol. I think I have an idea, tho, I'm not sure. Til next chapter.
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Title: Funny
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 17:18 PST
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That was a great chapter. I have to say the part were Soi Fong is trying to find a way to ban bananas was just plain funny. I have a Feeling what is wrong with Nanao but I'll wait to see if you will confirm my suspicions. It was a interesting thing to bring Kira into it he seemed to be able to help straighten Soi out. My only thing is Soi Fong doesn't seem like one to shy away from something. I think she should go pin Toshiro to a wall and make him apologize and maybe tell him shes carrying his baby. Well Keep up the great work and we will all be happy to keepe on reading.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 00:59 PST
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Well fuck, it's nice to see Nanao involved in the story but geez, a few lines after her introduction she apeshit crazy. Like Lady MacBeth apeshit crazy. I have my suspicions but I'm not entirely sure though I'm sure it has something to do with the vizard incident. Hmmm, me thinks further re-reading is in order. *mutters* Damn I thought I read it pretty closely the *first* time.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: January 03, 2009 21:01 PST
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I liked her point of view. I can't wait to read more and I definately can't wait to read when they get together finally and than I'll be sad this story is over, but, I'm looking forward to your other stories cuz I'm still curious as to who you have in mind for yamachika. lol.
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Title: TEARS
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 12:23 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOO sorry i havent reviewed lately finals and all. but during school craziness loved to read this fic and the other with Rangiku though cant find it. plz tell me how to find it *tears* i need to know the rest. plz bring up to date i would love to know how it gets to that point love your stories.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 21:27 PST
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Heh. Ya know it's ironic that Toshiro rants on Soi about being selfish and how painful love is when she's crumbling from within for his sake. True it was angsty, but that's where character development's sweet creamy nugen center lies (or is that lays?). As for POV, do a split where the fight between Toshiro and Zaraki parallels whatever the hell Soi does next.
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Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 22:35 PST
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Well that was another great chapter. I like the warning, but anything you write might it be angst or fluff is still to great to pass up. I didn't know that cows cry when they lick a salt lick. Who would have guessed. On the next chapters perspective I'm not to sure which one you should choose. The fight scene between Zaraki and Toshiro would be nice to see it might even get him butchered. =D Well keep up the great work and Happy Holidays. ~~Mors
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Title: ldymoon
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2008 21:15 PST
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I know there is a good reason for Soi to be that cold to him, but, there are still soooo many things I can't wait to find out. So, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Have a great Holiday.
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Title: Another Great Piece
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2008 22:31 PST
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Well that was very intense I think the setup you have done between Zaraki and Toshiro will be great. I do hope you update soon I love this story. Well keep up your great work.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2008 22:26 PST
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Oi. Now that's intense for ya. You've set up the Toshiro vs Zaraki fight perfectly. When it was mentioned that Toshiro had fought Zaraki, I had thought it had been a fight Toshiro stumbled into. However it appears either he was angry enough to do or Soi manipulated him into fighting Zaraki as a distraction which if that's what she was doing was genius. Though on the other hand this might be a classic miscue between Toshiro and Soi. God, their miscommunication reaches epic levels much to our enjoyment.
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Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 21:55 PST
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Thanks for another good chapter! To be honest, I don't dig all of the angsty-ness either, but I'm assuming it will get better soon, so push past the wall and get us there, eh?
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2008 19:00 PST
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Another great update like all ways. You must keep updating we would all like to see how it ends. I like that they are semi back together again that is a plus. Now lets hope they can come to terms with their love and realize it is not just lust. Well keep up the good work and update soon. ~~Mors
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