| "For The Love of a Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: November 17, 2008 21:43 PST
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*yeah* loooovvveeeddd it! I hope Toshiro won this round of supremecy. lol. can't wait for the next update. ^__^ yum yum goodness!!!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 22:08 PST
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Wow. That was... intense there at the end. Now we see the pandemonium that occurred when Ran returned that hinted in Different. Now comes the parallel between the two and I hope we get to see how Friend fills in the gaps of Different.
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Reviewed By: PBallPsycho [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 19:23 PDT
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Awesome chapter. Just read all of For The Love of a Friend and Different Circumstances. You have an amazing talent in writing and I eagerly await future updates, as well as the third story you seem to be hinting at.
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Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 19:33 PDT
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lol now we know that Toshiro was no longer sleeping lol. But, he's a smart character and you pegged him in this chapter with that slyness, ooh never thought he could be so dang sly!!! love it. This is my favorite couple up to date. hmmm wonder what Soi's lutienent was smiling about and spaced out about, I can't imagine who you paired him up with. lol. Can't wait for the next update!!!
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Title: Great Just Great
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 22:40 PDT
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That was a great update. I now see why you are s instead of Z thank you for addressing such a trivial issue. The smut in this chapter was great i'm not to sure I believe to much in the dream. If Soi actually believed he was sleeping she is dumber then we all think. Well all i can say is keep up the great work and update for us again soon. One thing will you be playing catch up with Different Circumstances again? ~~Mors
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Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2008 08:56 PDT
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I haven't reviewed lately have I? Sorry! Anyway, thanks for the smut, all the angst was giving me heartburn. lol. I'm so ready for them to make up and plan for the baby but I know that's a ways off, according to Different Circumstances. I'll wait.
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Mors' [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2008 09:31 PDT
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This is a very good story and is well written. Their is a few spelling errors mostly words that involve a z like realize. I was weary to read this story at first. Thinking that all it was going to be was a sex scandal, but you have done well to form a relationship between the pair. But i can tell you like to make people suffer. Having all the women throw them self at him, why the one he wants is libel to kill him. It is a great story now if you can just update and finish it so we can all see how else you can torture the two. ~~Sieg
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Reviewed By: JadeEye On: October 08, 2008 22:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well damn, this fic is totally diffrent from what I expected. At first I didn't like Toshiro/Soi pairing but I have to say its growing on me. I do have to say that the Byakuya/Kiyone pairing baffled me. And whats up with all the pregnancies? Momo is damn infuriating, Kinda agree with Soi Fong, she should just die. Hope Matsumoto gets back soon. Oh, yeah, Rukia isn't with Renji, is she? Its all a smoke screen.
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Title: ldymoon (nsi)
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 15:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, NOW I'VE READ BOTH STORIES AND I AM WAITING TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER TO THIS STORY AND MORE OF MATSUMOTO AND ZARAKI AND OTHER LITTLE STORIES THAT INCLUDE ALL THE PEOPLE GETTING IT ON IN SEREITIE (DID I SPELL THAT RIGHT?? LOL) THIS STORY IS SO GOOD AND SO ENTRANCING, THE SOAP OPERA OF ANIME!!! LOVE IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 14:29 PDT
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Wow, you are not giving Toshiro a break this chapter. Every woman he does not want is throwing themselves at him and the one woman he wants thinks he is having a new lover. I feel bad for the guy. Hopefully the next chapter he can get some. Maybe Soi will stop by the room and just have her way with him! LOL Until next time.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2008 20:49 PDT
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First, you chose 'A Better Lie' for this chapter? Usually I reserve that song for beat downs. Though I suspect Toshiro is pretty close to giving one in this chapter. And we get our first glimpse of Rukia. Would be interesting to see more of her *wink wink*. Anyway great chapter and more revelations and more drama! Awesome. More please, I implore you!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 00:56 PDT
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the drama you give them is hilarious! i love how you portray soi as any other female character when forced into a stressful situation. it is so sad that she assumed he was gay. he is too cute to be gay lol looking forward to your next update.
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Title: GOTTA LOVE IT
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 18:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG plz plz plz continue this. i was hoping she would carry the child. The whole thing kiyone and kuchki was straght out left feild but good nonetheless. Omg plz bring it up to date with diffrent circumstances cuz my mind is buzzing possibilites till i read the next chapter. This is very well written by the way and i am sure it is as fun for you to write as it is for me to read. sorry if my spelling sucks kind of running on empty. Anyway plz update
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2008 08:05 PDT
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BWHAHAHAHA! This is rich. All that's missing in this chapter is mpreg. *evil grin* You pulled this off rather well and it serves a purpose to convince Soi in her decision and as well as admit her true emotions. Nice job. Though I was chuckling more than anything else by the end even with the melodrama, is there something wrong with me?
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 21:28 PDT
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Hmmm, the plot thickens. Well, somewhat. Here we got a better perspective of Kiyone's actions through Toshiro's eyes. As well as a revelation about Shunui though I don't understand why he's so desparate to know who Toshiro likes. Though I have a better understanding as to why Shunui wants to ditch Nanao. It would be interesting to see what's going on with Isane and Yumi. ;)
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