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Title: Can't wait for the next
Reviewed By: Jehuty Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 21:28 PDT
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the only complaint and I know this may sound irritating is, you might want to add more genre to the catigory other then Hentai. I'd recommand romance and drama. I'm not trying to offend you. I absolutely love the story, but it seems to be turning into more then a basic hentai fic. Anyway, keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 21:45 PDT
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i forgot to mention, i love how you write soi being jealous! i bet it is hard to write that since she has such a strong facade that it is hard to portray her as being jealous. but can i request for a lemon between her and toshiro??? PLEASE! :D
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 21:43 PDT
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i read this chapter about four minutes after you posted it, but i only found time to review it now. you never cease to surprise me with your pairings! i think that is what i love about your story. it has surprising pairings that throw you off. and the characters are not out of character. ok i admit i am not the biggest bleach fan(like how i am with inuyasha) but i don't find myself thinking that isn't what that character would do. hopefully you will be able to update faster. i am a greedy reader ;)until next time!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 08:34 PDT
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Damn it, you got me again. See this is why I keep reading this you twisted son of a biscuit eater. Though I am a little disturbed that it appeared that Kiyone was trying to entrap Toshiro since it was obvious she was trying to seduce him (a detail she conveniently skipped over with Soi). Though I found the exchange between Soi and Kiyone awfully entertaining, kinda Abbot and Castello like. And this epidemic of pregnant women in SS is just Aizen evil plan to corner the daycare market in Seireitei. ;p
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 11:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yamamoto has declared martial law... how American of him. ;P Anyway, Kiyone is giving off those Fatal Attraction vibes. Are all the women in Toshiro's life psychos? Nice chapter, let's see some more.
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2008 21:58 PDT
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you always have a way to surprise the readers! here i thought there couldn't be a shocker, then boom another twist for our poor toshiro. i love how he wouldn't let me blackmail him! update soon!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 09:07 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say but very, very excellent. I love how her emotions are just running wild. I bet she absolutely HATES being so confused about her feelings towards her baby's daddy. I...okay I have to be honest here...I seriously HOPE she keeps the baby and she tells Toshiro. That way he won't marry Momo and they'll all be one happy family. lol. Okay I said it *now blushing from embarrassment*, cheesy I know...but not all stories have sappy, happy endings...right? Anyways, nice work and I know you hear this all the time but I'll be anxiously awaiting your next chapter ^_^ n8tivegurl
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2008 22:27 PDT
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Joy gives me my last regret Freaking brilliant use of that line. Very haunting. Anyway, nice chapter and now we know where the sob didn't come from. Now that we've seen events from Soi's POV, I get the feeling things are about to get reeeal interesting. Great job.
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 14:46 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it! Boy, Soi is so stubborn not to mention scared. Will she tell Toshiro? I hope she does. The captains's meeting will be very interesting to see now that she knows that she's pregnant and the baby's daddy is in the same room as she is. Yep very interesting indeed. Hope to see another update soon.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 18:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!! plz! plz! continue this story and diferent circumstances. Agian didn't think of these pairs would match but great story regardless. would like to know how this goes along and looking forward the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 23:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh shi-Er, oh my. Cat's out of the bag and Retsu is there to hold it right in front of Soi's face. Loved this latest chapter. It dealt with all of the questions I've had (okay most of them, the implications of that sob from a few chapters back is beginning to worry me) and it looked at the layers of flaws and tendencies of Soi. Though making Soi a cutter O_O never would have pegged her for one, but then again she does do a lot of suppressing. Okay, hurry up with the next chapter ya bastard. ;)
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Title: cancerchick16
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2008 17:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love yoour story never thought that these two characters would make a match but its really good. Your writing is excellent plz continue with Different Circumstances its really good. Agian i enjoy your stories and look forward for more.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 17:31 PDT
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*shakes fist* Damn you Orion, you're doing this to torment me for taking so long to update aren't you? Grrr... ;P Anyway, geez, what the hell is going on with Isane? I have my suspicions, but I'll bite my tongue. And something is definitely going on with Soi, Retsu must have said something to her to make Soi so much more subdued. I've got some suspicions about what's going on with Soi other than the speculation that she's pregnant but again I'm going to bite my tongue. Argh, damn it, write the next chapter, I want to know what the hell is going on with her! Interesting soundtrack, but Good Charlotte? Come on. ;)
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Reviewed By: ceira aka n8tivegurl On: March 25, 2008 08:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, I like it. I hope they get that passageway up soon because Zaraki seems to be hell bent on getting Matsumoto back with or without the Captain-General's approval. I bet once he gets there he's going on a bloody rampage huh...I can't wait to see that!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 12:13 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hmmm, sorry I haven't review your story, I just had to finish it before I left a review. Force of habit, sorry. Anyways, I really enjoyed it so far...I only hope that Soi & Toshiro can settle their fight to rescue Ran from Gin and the others. Oh one more thing, is Soi Fong pregnant? While reading your story I noticed some signs of a possible pregnancy...it would be pretty interesting if she was...*hint hint*. J/K. I'm looking forward to another update. Bye for now.
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