| "For The Love of a Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 113 ] |
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Reviewed By: Adrasvaiyen1 On: March 12, 2008 14:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, very awesome....Do you have a personal grudge against nanoa, or something? anyways, I think you should take your time catching up with DC. The more story the better.
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 00:03 PDT
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haha i love all the ways you force soi and toshiro having to see and intereact with each other. can't wait to see what else you have in mind for them.
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 21:31 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Toshiro found a friend! Maybe with Shunsui's help Soi and Toshiro will get back together. But I am disappointed that you wrote Shunsui as someone who hate his lieu. I always thought she kept him grounded.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 11:00 PST
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Hmmmm, it's interesting to see how two parallel stories have been developing. What's funny is that even thought Different Circumstances is way ahead of this one, it hasn't quite given away what's going on. It's actually been quite a game going back and forth between them trying to figure out what's going on behind the scenes. Though Yamato and Nanoa? Eek. And like I said before, if you do pair Ichigo with anybody just verve as much as you can you've got my support.
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Title: He Got A Friend!
Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 08:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yah, he gets a friend. That's sweet. The stories are at the same time frame and everything now, right?
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Title: Happiness comes from reading between the lines
Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 08:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She's pregnant and it's good for plot! Oh this is awesome. I'm on pins and needles waiting on the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 23:19 PST
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Soi is pregnant isn't she? I am anxiously waiting for your twist and turn in their relationship now! I love how you finally gave Toshiro some balls to defend himself against Soi.
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2008 23:03 PST
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Since this series of stories is about odd pairings, how about pairing Ichigo with Nel? Or Tatsuki? I don't know I'd go for left field no matter who you choose. BTW, really liked this chapter and I like how the two are dealing with their emotions. Very disfunctional. Makes for good drama.
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Title: Outstanding Piece of Work
Reviewed By: BerserkRonin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2008 13:17 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding! you managed to take two characters that people knew very little to nothing about and managed to show something unique to us, I never thought of SoiFong and Hitsyuga as a couple before, but it really opened my eyes. I appreciate how well you showed hitsyuga devotion to the ones he cares about, I'm not that big of a fan of his, but this story really increased my interest in his character. Soi Fong I always had an interest in because of how harsh she was to everyone, but I think with the right kind of guy, or someone who can kinda take her down a notch she'd be an exceptional and caring lover. It was pretty cool seeing Hitsyuga fight back after having a build up of tension from her. I'm exceptionally interested in seeing what happens between the two of them and also the other characters in the story, will toushiro and Soi be enemies? or make up? you have an outstanding writing style and have caught my interest. I'll be logging on each day to see what ele your story has to offer...although it'll sadden me when it's finally over...that's the only depressing thing about a story is that there must always be an end...
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 21:45 PST
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^-^ ah! reviews! theyre quite a couple...
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 12:24 PST
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*smirk* Yes we all like reviews. Heh. Anyway, I really love these two. I don't know I just love to see them fight, they're just so fiesty and they really go for broke and keep coming back for more. It's almost like watching fireworks.
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 04:49 PST
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I love Toushiro's character in your story and I love your long chapter.
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Reviewed By: polaris_sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 03:00 PST
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I'm waiting for food festive that make Soi change her mind to further their affair and I hope Toushiro will bring whipped cream/honey/chocolates ;p
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 19:58 PST
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Toshiro needs to come up with something to convince Soi to stay with him! How can he marry Momo when she is obviously in love with someone else?? I hope you will update soon!
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Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 21:59 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to pop in and say you're doin' great. I like this tense between the two, normally cold, controlled characters.
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