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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: May 12, 2008 10:29 EDT
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It seems we are getting close to the wedding I see, I wonder what's going to happen to the teacher and what's Granny Hinas' plan. Your leaving me in suspense here, Great Work!
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Title: O yeah
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: May 09, 2008 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its finally getting to the crux of everything, the resolution of it all. and it seems like all of keitaro's worries and hesitations are going to get completely destroyed in no time at all. let the weddings begin. shinobu will finally get what she deserves
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Reviewed By: zerothehero On: May 09, 2008 15:55 EDT
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Yeah it's getting good now .Their finally getting down to the brass tax of the marriage. I can't wait for the wedding and h-scenes.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: May 09, 2008 00:06 EDT
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Wow...and again awesome update love how this is turning out so far. I wonder what the girls have in store for keitaro? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: May 02, 2008 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! Why did the chapter end it was getting good...Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 04:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. You remembered that while Naru has a unique cooking style, the others remark that it's good, it just doesn't look that great. Most writers like to make her a fandom Akane clone, which isn't entirely accurate. I'm quite impressed by someone getting it right for once.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: April 21, 2008 10:34 EDT
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Nice update and once again, Love the story and please keep up the good work, and always remember don't let life or anything get you down. Looking forward to more updates.
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Title: 25
Reviewed By: Tezzqa1502 On: April 21, 2008 08:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You really do like to stretch things out, don't you. And I mean that in the nicest possible way. You're writing a bloody excellent fic here. It's just that at the end of every chapter I am left craving more info. What was the agreement between the girls? What is the curse? What is Shinobu's ex-teacher going to pull? Whats in the Annex? What are Kaolla's people up to? Have Tsuruko & Motoko flipped a coin yet? Just how many marriage ceremonies are going to be involved with Keitaro being wed? -- But enough ranting. As I have said, you are producing an awesome fic here! I'm just getting impatient, is all. -- It was nice to see Naru truly benefiting from her therapy. I'm surprised Keitaro didn't faint as soon as he heard her being so rational. Or maybe he did? I wonder how he will handle her being the new voice of reason at the Hinata. Her and Shinobu, that is. You go girl! As usual, eagerly awaiting further updates. Keep up the excellent work!! T
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: April 21, 2008 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... where is the rest of this chapter? i was expecting things to blow up and stuff. in any case thanks for another update. looking forward to next time
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Short and also neat in that we FINALLY hear what we've gotten hints on all through the story. I'm just wondering who's next with Kei and when will we know Haruka's preggers! Oh ... Where is thwe weirdo "EX" teacher?
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Reviewed By: DKGafgar On: April 19, 2008 09:12 EDT
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*sound of screeching tires* ...Wait, what? How did those two suddenly become hostile to Keitaro - oh, anime. Geez, were the two versions THAT different?
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Reviewed By: DKGafgar On: April 19, 2008 08:53 EDT
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It took me a while to figure out a few minor things I'd noticed popping up here and there, like Tsuruko not knowing about Motoko's little novellas. The difference in Kanako's introduction to the Hinata cast was what finally made me get the picture that this is based on the anime (which I've never seen) as opposed to the manga. No wonder I kept doing double-takes. Carry on then.
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Reviewed By: DKGafgar On: April 19, 2008 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*BLINK* Is Haruka dressed like REVY in this chapter?! INSTANT WIN.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: April 17, 2008 12:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since I've been on Fanfiction there is only one harem story that's complete but it's soo short and not as good as this story here. Your story is an example of how a harem story should be written. Great work.
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Reviewed By: Derbisol On: April 07, 2008 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive read all of this over the last few days and its amazing, you have to write anotherchapter, i cant ger enough of this story!
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