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Title: 11
Reviewed By: Tezza1502 On: February 06, 2008 07:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! Been reading this since the start, so I thought it was about time I dropped you a line & told you how much I am enjoying your little fic. The premise (i.e.: harem-fics) is as old as Love Hina itself, but that in NO way detracts from just how good this is. I am enjoying how you are tieing all the girls together for Keitaro. Man, is HE in for a surprise when he gets back. Then again, so are the girls. 'Cousin' Haruka has been well and truely breaking him in for the others, hasn't she! There will be some raised eyebrows when say, Kitsune goes to flirt with him like she usually does when he returns. No nosebleeds this time! And Naru's in threrapy, while Kitsune tries to scheme herself in on it all. Plus, on the horizon we have a possible showdown with Shinobu's teacher. All in all, a damn fine read. Can't wait to see where you take us. T
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Title: GO SHINOBU
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: February 05, 2008 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter and thanks again for the quick and long updates. GO shinobu. its great that shinobu is finally getting a say in things. i hope that kanako is going on a seek and destroy mission against that idiotic teacher.
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems Keitaro will need 64,000 V-8's! ;-) Still I think the dynamic can work and I can't wait to see what happens to that Doornob of a Homeroom teacher. BTW who' get preggers first?!?!? Nyamo? ;-)
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 18:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, the whole Molmol marriage law allowing multiple spouses has been done before. But still it is interesting since they all are agreeing on it. But Naru will still be a problem since she still hasn't made up her own mind. But we'll just have to see what this will lead to.
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: deepmisc On: February 01, 2008 00:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best written and most interesting fics that I have ever read.While I initially thought the content would be pretty predictable, the introduction of a few new characters such as the teacher serve to keep things interesting. Not that the original plot wasn't interesting enough.. Keep it going!You obviously have a talent for writing..
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Reviewed By: anon2 On: January 28, 2008 17:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Minor spelling errors but nothing glaring. It's got great writing and a great plot. Hopefully you'll get some more titbanging and some footjobs in there. ;D
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 22:42 EST
Comment/Review:
It was a great chapter and it shows possible sub-pairings of potential alliances between characters with Naru,Kitsune, and Mutsumi teaming up for Keitaro. Motoko and Tsuruko are going for it. Shinobu, Koalla Su, and possibly Nyamo are a team now. Kanako and possibly Haruka could join in. Hopefully, you'll have a good way to make this a believable harem story. And besides, we know that Naru does love Keitaro, she just has problems admitting to that.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 19:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so obvious this will be a harem pic and the way its building up i see a few of the girls pairing off do kei won't be overwhelmed. Still Lucky SOB! Great story!
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Title: another fine chapter
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: January 17, 2008 22:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the quick and enjoyable update. I am assuming that the keitaro group will be heading back to hinata soon. cant that annoying teacher be blown up already? get su and nuke him a few times please.
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Reviewed By: Drol On: January 14, 2008 19:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot and Awesome don't even come close to describing the glory of this story.
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: January 13, 2008 01:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good to see that characters that are usually neglected having a bigger role. these two chapters were, like the rest of the story, an enjoyable read. hope it continues. thanks for the nice updates.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whats interesting was the fact that 2 of the minor characters have or are sharing 'time' with kei, while the girls are still working out their shared problems with the various marriage entanglements and 'Naru'! Hope we see them involved with Kei soon. Oh and nice touch on the ACC teacher! dennisud
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2008 17:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly wish that I could write this well. my little story has taken forever and does not seem half as well developed as yours. You are an artist with words and I hope to see more of this soon.
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Reviewed By: Ace10 On: January 09, 2008 00:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. I can't wait to see more. I have a request can you put Naru in situations more pervert?
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Title: Shadow Flash
Reviewed By: Yellow Flash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 14:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, Please hurry up whit the next chapter.
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