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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: July 04, 2008 14:01 EDT
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Wow it's really great you updated and giving us two chapters no less which were nice to read. Hopefully all the outside forces won't ruin Keitaro's love life (Teacher, Therapist, Kentaro and the Others) Nice job so far looking forward to more.
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Title: What a Romp (no pun intended)
Reviewed By: USAVet [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been a fun story so far. I find myself climbing the walls waiting for the updates that seem to come somewhat sporadically. Understandable though as I have to write quite a bit both for full time work and school. Keep plugging away and please don't torture us with the long lags between updates. I'm looking forward to the next first time. I'm not sure who it will be. Keep up the great work
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Title: Legacy
Reviewed By: pak40l46 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best FF's I have ever read. Thank you for making this enjoyable for adult consumption. I get sick of people being afraid to show actual affection of their characters for each other. Yes, I like the fact that you have put Keitaro and Haruka as lovers, I hope that continues in future chapters. I would also like to see him in liaisons with Shinobu and Kitsune, maybe Motoko also. It is also good to see someone with a good imagination and not using the same old story lines as others have with these characters. Also I like the fact that Haruka is his cousin in this story and not his aunt. She does make a good soulmate for him. But, be that as it may, tweeking the story line(s) as you have made me addicted to this story. I have read it through 3 times and I enjoy it more each time through. I await your next installment. Chris
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Reviewed By: Painter AL [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 03:34 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Weapon-01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've just finished 29 chapters in the past five days, and though I'm not a big Love-Hina fan (even in H-fics) This is a very well done story. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrolw On: June 19, 2008 18:39 EDT
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Wow pretty cool Naru and mutsumi getting it on...can't wait to see whats next.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: June 15, 2008 05:34 EDT
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I must say I'm enjoying the updates so far and your writing is still top notch love the h-scenes (Naru & Mutsumi awesome!) anyway hopefully we'll see some of the other girls next like, I guess Motoko would be nice to see snce she's gonna be married to Keitaro I think.
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Reviewed By: denisud On: June 12, 2008 11:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seems all the girls are gonna get their 'turn' as the day goes on. So whats gonna happen after dinner, Will the three Stooges burst the good thoights the Hinata Inn's guests have, and will we see More of Motoko next? ;-) Great job!
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 22:32 EDT
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Another chapter that continues to slowly link other chapters together and keep the plot. I hope that you'll get the next chapters out soon.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: June 03, 2008 01:14 EDT
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Nice, you updated and I'm glad you did cause my vacation was horrible and it's nice to finally come home and read something good.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: May 27, 2008 12:51 EDT
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Awesome Kanako finally got some action...six more to go. But we can't forget about Granny's plans, and what of Shinobu's psycho teacher? What about Shirai & Haitani? Hopefully they won't disturb things around Hinata Inn. Great Job looking forward to more!!
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Title: Kanoko down more to go.
Reviewed By: zerothehero On: May 25, 2008 18:43 EDT
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Loved the chapter. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. You seemed to have avoided the problem I am now facing with how the other girls sre going to react when they find out he has already taken one of them as his lover. coninue the good work and I hope to have another chapter up soon.
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Title: almost there
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: May 24, 2008 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for another chapter, and it seems like this story is coming down to the final stretch. will miss it when you are done with it
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 16:10 EDT
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Some good chapters and the ending seems near. I like how you alter the storyline's in your fanfics to get the result's you want while keeping them to their roots.
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