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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: June 03, 2008 01:14 EDT
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Nice, you updated and I'm glad you did cause my vacation was horrible and it's nice to finally come home and read something good.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: May 27, 2008 12:51 EDT
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Awesome Kanako finally got some action...six more to go. But we can't forget about Granny's plans, and what of Shinobu's psycho teacher? What about Shirai & Haitani? Hopefully they won't disturb things around Hinata Inn. Great Job looking forward to more!!
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Title: Kanoko down more to go.
Reviewed By: zerothehero On: May 25, 2008 18:43 EDT
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Loved the chapter. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2008 00:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter. You seemed to have avoided the problem I am now facing with how the other girls sre going to react when they find out he has already taken one of them as his lover. coninue the good work and I hope to have another chapter up soon.
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Title: almost there
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: May 24, 2008 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for another chapter, and it seems like this story is coming down to the final stretch. will miss it when you are done with it
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Reviewed By: dragon_cloud16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 16:10 EDT
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Some good chapters and the ending seems near. I like how you alter the storyline's in your fanfics to get the result's you want while keeping them to their roots.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: May 12, 2008 10:29 EDT
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It seems we are getting close to the wedding I see, I wonder what's going to happen to the teacher and what's Granny Hinas' plan. Your leaving me in suspense here, Great Work!
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Title: O yeah
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: May 09, 2008 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its finally getting to the crux of everything, the resolution of it all. and it seems like all of keitaro's worries and hesitations are going to get completely destroyed in no time at all. let the weddings begin. shinobu will finally get what she deserves
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Reviewed By: zerothehero On: May 09, 2008 15:55 EDT
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Yeah it's getting good now .Their finally getting down to the brass tax of the marriage. I can't wait for the wedding and h-scenes.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: May 09, 2008 00:06 EDT
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Wow...and again awesome update love how this is turning out so far. I wonder what the girls have in store for keitaro? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sentiment Remains On: May 02, 2008 23:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! Why did the chapter end it was getting good...Please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 04:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good. You remembered that while Naru has a unique cooking style, the others remark that it's good, it just doesn't look that great. Most writers like to make her a fandom Akane clone, which isn't entirely accurate. I'm quite impressed by someone getting it right for once.
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Reviewed By: Sicksorrow On: April 21, 2008 10:34 EDT
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Nice update and once again, Love the story and please keep up the good work, and always remember don't let life or anything get you down. Looking forward to more updates.
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Title: 25
Reviewed By: Tezzqa1502 On: April 21, 2008 08:43 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You really do like to stretch things out, don't you. And I mean that in the nicest possible way. You're writing a bloody excellent fic here. It's just that at the end of every chapter I am left craving more info. What was the agreement between the girls? What is the curse? What is Shinobu's ex-teacher going to pull? Whats in the Annex? What are Kaolla's people up to? Have Tsuruko & Motoko flipped a coin yet? Just how many marriage ceremonies are going to be involved with Keitaro being wed? -- But enough ranting. As I have said, you are producing an awesome fic here! I'm just getting impatient, is all. -- It was nice to see Naru truly benefiting from her therapy. I'm surprised Keitaro didn't faint as soon as he heard her being so rational. Or maybe he did? I wonder how he will handle her being the new voice of reason at the Hinata. Her and Shinobu, that is. You go girl! As usual, eagerly awaiting further updates. Keep up the excellent work!! T
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: someoneelse On: April 21, 2008 00:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO... where is the rest of this chapter? i was expecting things to blow up and stuff. in any case thanks for another update. looking forward to next time
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