| "A Matter of Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 23:29 CST
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review for 2 chapters as s#!+ happens. . . you mentioned something about motivation. . . happy healthy apology for being remiss last chapter and encouragement (bribe) to continue: chocolaty goodness! . . . ::chocolate coma:: + 12 oz silken tofu + 12 oz melted chocolate chips + whipped to a fluffy froth + refrigerate till cold ~ yummy! ... chocolate, the universal motivator! ~ a pleasure, ginny
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Reviewed By: skath On: February 05, 2008 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is by far the very best fanfic i ever read keep it up
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The explanation sounds so much like Inuyasha that it comes across as believable. I am glad that the two of them worked out the largest hurdle to them getting back together. I am sure that Kagome will forgive him for his lapse in judgment and insecurity. Now names should be fun, I can't wait to see what Sesshomaru will say about them. It is good to see the brothers buried the hatchet somewhere besides in each other. I bet Kagome is curious on how that happened. It is also good to see that Sesshomaru mellowed with age but still manages to get a few digs in on Inuyasha.
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Title: psyco_chick32
Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 07:57 CST
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Awww *squee* What a happy fluffy scene! And you CAN'T be done yet, because I need to know what's up with InuYasha's housekeeper!! Either way, very cute fluff night for Kagome and InuYasha :)
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 03:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... good that kagome met sesshoumaru & rin already... glad that inuyasha finally told kagome his truth or his reasons... hope with inuyasha's confession things will get better and easier for them both... hope they start acting like mates soon... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... and to think that they were getting along fine... i guess the issue about them hasn't really been discussed... kinda sad that they are fighting... wonder what else will happen at the party... seems that they just went separate ways when they arrived at the party... inuyasha didn't even let kagome meet rin or sesshoumaru... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Ikichira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 14:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(smirk) Story's wonderifferous. So very interesting. What kills me is how Inuyasha and Kagome act, just like back in the day. Please, update soon.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 11:34 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great introduction to Rin. Seeing how devoted to Sesshomaru she is as a child I don't see her being different as an adult. I think it is hilarious that the "great Lord Sesshomaru" doesn't have a son. Jaken must be beside himself that he has to listen to a bunch of "worthless girls" instead of a male figure. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru has developed. I am also very curious as to Inuyasha's explanation that you have been hinting at. I am looking forward to the next installment with bated breath (so hurry up and get it out so I can breathe normally again) ;-D
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Reviewed By: animecraze [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2008 07:18 CST
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Love the story!.....review soon!....or I will hunt you down with a frying pan!...........so we can talk about the story over sum eggs!..lol
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Reviewed By: Psyco_chick32 (not signed in) On: February 03, 2008 03:04 CST
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Interesting, I like the Shippou moment in the kitchen... he's such a great character :) Frustrating part to stop off on right now, but I get the feeling there'll be a LOT of revelations to come?
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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IM STILL LOVIN THE STORY!!! ITS SO CUTE!!! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! I WONDER HOW INUYASHA WILL BE DURING THE BIRTH??? LOL!!! SRRY. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! JA NE!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 16:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... really nice that inuyasha spent his day with kagome... it was a good thing for both of them... will be funny how inuyasha will cope with kagome's cravings... seems that kagome is concerned about having other people know she's pregnant and single... her friends can be nosy... will kagome run into hojo when inuyasha is around too... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: tsubaby On: February 01, 2008 06:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good this far... I really love it... Hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 00:16 CST
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memory must be unbelievable when one lives so long remembering details from 500 years ago, i can't even remember what i had for breakfast today. . . ha-ha-hee (or something like that) and blowing in and out real fast is the only breathing i can remember(then again the last time i needed that was over twenty years ago) one of them was to keep you from pushing until the doctor tells you that you're allowed to... i just screamed my head off and the doctor made fun of me (he was a friend of the family). . . you have brought back some interesting memories, i don't know if i should be glad or not. =P. . . i enjoyed that chapter, yash should learn a pregnancy massage or something (would show him to be thoughtful and caring) ~ a pleasure once again, ginny
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice bonding between the two. I liked how she got out of the baby shower. So when will Inuyasha propose to Kagome? I can't see her grandfather allowing them to continue together without saying something to Inuyasha about making an honest woman out of Kagome.
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