| "A Matter of Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 19:16 CST
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JUst because it's an awesome story.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 19:15 CST
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Just because you deserve it.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 19:15 CST
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Just because I didn't review the other chapters.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Cute chapter.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 04:50 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally agree that they should continue to argue, they haven't had personality transplants after all. Even the most mature of people argue and those two love to argue, they will argue for the love of fighting. I too will be sorry to see Shippo and company decamp for at least a little while but the two need alone time together so they can rebond. I think that Inuyasha will agree to a human wedding but he might have it wait until after the baby comes so everyone doesn't think it is a shotgun wedding. I can't wait to see what is coming next.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 04:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update - good writing... things are going well... really sweet of inuyasha to be so attentive to kagome... kinda funny how they acted when they were out shopping... and nice that they spent some time with kagome's family... will inuyasha give kagome a human wedding... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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STILL LOVIN THE STORY!!! CONTINUE PWEEZE!!! JA NE
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 23:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I like that you are recreating the closeness they must have shared as mates while taking it slow considering her condition and the fact that it has been so long for him. I also liked Shippo's comments in the kitchen, that was very true to life for him. He would be embarrassed about noticing his "mother's" arousal. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*standing ovation* I sat down and read every single chapter today and I am seriously in love with the tale you are weaving. Your take on the 'what-ifs' of the Inu-cast is spell binding and uniquely portrayed. You never cease to amaze and hook your audience with the twists you've sewn into the plot. I am truly enthralled to read your next installment! Much luck! ~Cait
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 13:36 CST
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usually i don't read inu/kag fics, im more of a sess/kag myself, but i like this one. i can't wait for more! inu/kag authors have a different style to them than sess/kag. oh, and what ever happened to naraku? is he going to appear later in the story? FL
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Title: very good
Reviewed By: megumu192 On: February 09, 2008 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, and digging the real history of certain things is also great! I love history and I always will, its my minor, I understand about college papers too, so don't stress out okay. Just do you best and everything will be fine. God Bless
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that inuyasha & kagome are together again...really nice that all of them are getting along in inuyasha's place... wasn't sure if inuyasha took of his ring but in the end he did and kagome finally saw inuyasha her hanyou again... really sweet... wonder if kagome, shippou & itakura will meet inuyasha's housekeeper... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 01:05 CST
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So glad they're growing closer (in more ways than one). K is really keeping him hopping, with her hormones in overdrive. I'm dealing with those now, from infertility treatments, and so can relate! Very well done.
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Reviewed By: Antwangel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2008 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this story is one of the most amazing stories I have read so far . I love it how its that whole conflict thing with the well closing and inuyasha thinking that Kagome sealed it or something . And I love it how he's trying hard to show Kagome that he still loves her and she's like not sure . Ay ! Its hard to explain but I just really love this story . Hope to read way more !! 8]
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: megumu192 On: February 06, 2008 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good, can't wait to see what is going to happen from here.
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