| "A Matter of Trust" Reviews/Comments [ 85 ] |
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 03:20 CST
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I am SOOOO happy with the way you portrayed the birth of the next generation of Inuyasha. It really came all together in the tale you were weaving to get to this point. It was very satisfying! And I love the banter and passion between Inu & Kags. Its relatable and amusing all at the same time.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 01:21 CST
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Hahaha, no keychain can save you now! No, really, that was an EXCELLENT wrap-up of that issue. Showed InuYasha's good-side without making it a "Days of our Lives" spin-off. Well done. :) The birth was very well written, too. Note: Nezumi actually means "rat", but close :) It's a fitting description for a maid ;) I'm glad I'm not the only picky reviewer out there... a lot of people beg for reviews, and my logic is "if it's good, you'll hear from me..." The only other time I review is if something is HORRIBLE, and I'll do that to point out why. But I'm kind of bluntly honest like that... I especially liked your characterization of Sango. Very appropriate :)
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 22:31 CST
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oh dear, the only thing you got wrong is that they wait until you are already having the uncontrollable urge to push and they make you wait even longer until they allow you to push. it feels like you are defecating a bowling ball and all your body wants to do is push it out, like uncontrollable spasms. "don't push yet, we have to strap your legs up in these restraining brackets... don't push yet the student nurse and the janitor haven't stuck their hands up there to see how dilated you are yet." . . aww, sweet baby girl! . . . a pet peeve, i personally nursed my babies everywhere, no matter who was around. when asked by a couple who had a baby around the same age if i wasn't embarrassed to nurse in public my reply, "why? aren't you embarrassed feeding your baby a bottle? this is natural and i know what i eat so i know what i'm giving my baby, not some soy/whey based synthetically fortified garbage." and i proceeded to finish walking around the zoo with my son at my breast. (radical activist here) ~ a pleasure, ginny *innocently kicks soapbox behind her*
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Reviewed By: DARKENED DEMONESS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That was amazing!!! That was as close to the real birting process as you can get it. *sigh* *sigh* I can't wait to have kids but that wont be for a while. Anyways I still LOVE your story please continue!!! Ja ne
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that inuyasha cleared everything up with kagome first... really sweet... and now they have a baby girl... good thing kagome's mom and rin were there in the hospital... nice to see that seeshoumaru has changed... sad that it's gonna end... will there be a wedding... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... lots of emotion and drama... but the baby is coming... wonder what happens next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 19:34 CST
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Another fine chapter. Full of tension and humor. Glad they resolved their fight, and all went well with the birth. Only thing that seemed off, was K's going from her water breaking, to packing. Seeing as she had some time, I'd think she'd want to clean up a bit, change clothes first. Not a big deal, just something that occurred to me.
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Reviewed By: Ikichira [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! So sorry for having not reviewed for a while, but I've been caught up in my own troubles. You know how THAT goes. (rolls eyes) Man, I was like O.O! when Kagome started accusing Inuyasha! You can tell when a bitch is pregnant, huh? (shakes head) And those stupid-ass friends of hers, building up that crazy delusion. Methinks somebody's hormonal!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 14:44 CST
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Poor K, the hormones! Poor IY, the hormones! I think things b/t them will always be a little bit volatile, it's just in their natures. Will be interesting to see how IY takes the delivery, not to mention K.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gee...what's the old cliche...'with friends like that...'! Poor Kagome! Inu should tell Sess to kiss off! How would Sess feel if he'd been separated from Rin for 500 years! Hopefully everything will smooth over with the baby coming!
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Reviewed By: animecraze [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 07:47 CST
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Yaaaay!!....the baby is finally comming...can't wait to see how things will change now!....update soon!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 04:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh no! *growls at you* I ought to sic Sesshy-sama on you for not answering the maid questions!!!!!!!! WHY!??!?!?! *stomps around a bit* Well, baby coming now... I GUESS there are more important things to worry about... *le SIGH*... :) Doing a great job. I have to be honest, I kind of felt the last chapter was a filler, too, which is why I didn't review. I'm a picky reviewer, sorry!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 01:57 CST
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at least he was there, what would she have done if her water broke while she was on the ladder and he wasn't there? . . . what kind of friends would sew that kind of doubt into her head like that, one would imagine that they would be encouraging and supportive!? (at least until they had solid proof, hire a p.i.) one feels the same of his brother overloading him with work so far along in the pregnancy! he needed time off to reconnect... the jerk. . . ah labor, never again, twice was two too many. enjoying your delightful romp into pregnant insanity. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 00:20 CST
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i enjoyed the reminiscing and it was a sweet chapter. funny thing about the crazy ofuda wielding old guy attacking shippo and mate. ~ delighted, ginny
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Reviewed By: FluffyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 21:00 CST
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i don't get the sess/sango pairing either. miroku sango all the way. i don't follow the manga, i don't have time right now. lol. i barely have time for my stories. i understand about papers and parents. they can be a hassle. oh and don't forget being one of fate's favorite toys. lol FL
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