| "Darkness Fades to Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 180 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kryptoinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am enjoying this tremendously!!! Two mated inu demons under one roof......let the heated domestic bliss begin (*wolfishly grinning*)! I love how it's progressing as well. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm just glad that the boys were able to get to Sango and Kagome in time. And the fact that Miroku and Sango have gained longevity and quick healing is a definite plus, as is the fact that Inuyash can now control his youkai side. They are going to need all of those advantages to defeat Cernonnus. That guy is a piece of work. Sesshoumaru DEFINITELY has his work cut out for him becasue of what that jerk did to Misery. And that is going to be so tough on him. Sessh is already too arrogant and domineering. Those are the last things a woman like Misery would need. Tough road ahead....for all of them. And I can't wait to read more. By the way, I hope that Shippo gets a girl, too. I really like him, and he's now the third, fifth, and seventh wheel, lol. So, I'm rooting for him.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 11:35 CDT
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i only discovered this wonderful story yesterday, and you've already updated! i loved the action in this chapter. i must say, your take on the mating was very pleasing to read. i think the character you've developed in misery is very well done. she does seem to be able to handle sesshoumaru quite well. thank you for an entertaining story, and i will be looking forward to future updates
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo HOT HOT HOT!!!! i love it! its getting to interesting!!!
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Title: Whoa!
Reviewed By: l80hawk [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your storyline! Your OC is really interesting and her abilities really add to the traditional characters. I can't wait to see how these relationships or bonds develop further. Great job! Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 21:31 CDT
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Wow. That happened much faster than I would have thought. Misery basically claimed Sesshoumaru.....and he let her. It was great. I can't wait to see what happnes next. Both the Inu brothers mated in two chapters?! What a treat.
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 16:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am glad that Misery was given such a power boost and one that balances her mate's power. Sesshomaru finally found someone to protect. Misery finished the job Rin started of getting inside his heart. It is good that Misery finally acknowledged the ties that she has to Sesshomaru and vise versa. I was a little surprised that Kagome stopped Inuyasha from finalizing the claim between the two of them though. I thought they would be the first in the sack or at least a close second behind Miroku and Sango. Now Shippo is the only one left without a mate, I hope someone comes along for him. Cernonnus doesn't know what he is facing when he goes after Kagome and Misery. He not only has to face the two girls but he has to face two very determined males fighting to protect their mates and then Sango, Miroku and Shippo protecting those that they love. Then there is Midoriko and whatever she can throw into the fight. It should be interesting and I am looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I'm so glad that Kagome and Inuyasha are mates; after all they've been through, they deserve to ber happy. And the only way that will happen is with each other. I really enjoyed that part. As for Misery.....wow. We should have known her "recovery" was not that simple. Sesshoumaru has his work cut out for him. And we know that nurturing and being kind are not his strong suits, lol. Overall, he has a good heart, but he definitely doesn't show it. And, unfortunately for him, wearing his heart on his sleeve may be the only way to reach Misery in the state she's in. Great story.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2008 04:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting awy to be mated :P lol and awww Misery!!! T_T
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another chapter! I liked this one a lot, and I truly feel for Misery. I hope Sesshoumaru can repair the damage that spell did to her. So, Inuyasha and Kagome are mates... Ah? But, they still have to consumate it...LOL. I am looking forward to your next chapter. Chanda
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2008 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where did Shippo go? It was good to see the increased closeness of Inuyasha and Kagome. It was also good to see Misery deciding to stay and fight instead of running away. I hope Sesshomaru can heal Misery like Kagome has healed Inuyasha. Misery was fun before and that is the persona that Sesshomaru fell in love with and the one that balances him. I am eagerly awaiting the updates to come that will answer all my questions, eventually. :-)
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm all caught up. I love this story, and I certainly loved your Inu/Kag fluff. Keep up the good work, and looking forward to chapter 17. Chanda
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2008 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, whats going to a bar or a club without a fight. Nice scene by the way. Watch your elipsis (...) Three, is a pause, and four is a pause at the end of a sentence (....). Exp: "What did you just say... I can't believe this.... What nerve!" Well look forward to chapter 16. Chanda
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Title: chapter 14
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe, now Misery has company...lol. I couldn't resist.
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Title: Chapter 13
Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 06:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought Sess would have lashed out, but I'm glad to see him still stunned. A new character, how exciting! Well, I guess I'll have to read more later. Loved the story and yes, I'll review all the chapters I missed. Until I catch up. Chanda
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