| "Darkness Fades to Dawn" Reviews/Comments [ 180 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally agree with Misery and the only way to get the guys moving off the block is to make them think that they might lose their girls. Of course giving Miroku that many choices he might decide on another woman and Inuyasha might start thinking he isn't good enough for Kagome again but it might work out for the best. I thought Shippo and Misery were a couple but I can see Misery with Sesshomaru and this scheme might work for him too. It might get him to show Misery that he thinks more of her than she realizes. I am looking forward to what happens at the beach and club.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The girls are playing with FIRE planning to get Inu jealous! LOL Can't wait to see his reaction. Really enjoying your story!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love their new weapons and I think their reactions to them were all very true to character. I knew Inuyasha was going to end up on his butt at least once from the new gun. The new information on the jewel was interesting too. It is a good beginning to the explanation of why Midoriko is still around in the jewel. Inuyasha is going to have to declare himself soon or the others are going to push him into it. Inuyasha's automatic protection of Kagome when the guns started going off was perfect. Did Inuyasha show all of his attacks or just Wind Scar? Of course Inuyasha's attacks are stronger when Kagome is really in danger and I can't wait for Misery to see the extra power kick in. I like how Misery also picked up on Kagome's kind heart and her desire to protect her friends and is giving her a way to do so. This should be interesting and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 07:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW me likey ^^ 'Lover Boy' HAHAHAHAHA
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 14:44 CDT
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thank you for such a quick update. this story is really good.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That chapter was great, I especially loved the part were Inu fell on his ass.... It is defiently weird to see them holding modern day equipment. Love it! And like always, looking forward to the next chapter! Chanda
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
n'awww Inuyasha hugging Kagome again... its just soo CUTE!!
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 14:39 CDT
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this is such a cute story! =]] update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Sayuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 14:26 CDT
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I love the on-line shopping part. Can't wait to see Kag's reaction to Inu in leather!:) Love the fluff and the fact that Inu wants to be close to Kags - that'll help heal her heart more than anything else.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just keep falling more in love with your story. You are doing a remarkable job, and the Kag/Inu fluff is nice addition as well. I certainly excited to read your up comming chapter. Chanda
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shippo really knows how to get around Inuyasha doesn't he. Just mention that Kagome would like it and Inuyasha would jump through most hoops. Kagome's reaction to Inuyasha dressed will be interesting. And Miroku's reaction to Sango in a bikini will be hilarious I am sure. I liked that they realized that they would need clothes for the modern era and purchased what would be necessary. It is good to see Kagome start to come out from the dark cloud that she was under from the death of her family. What mischief is Buyou and Kirara up to while the others shop? Looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 07:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW me likey ^^
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 04:19 CDT
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this is a great story, i just found it and cant wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2008 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the update! The shopping online was too funny. I cannot wait until your next update. And your welcome, I love to review a good story. Chanda
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Reviewed By: Sayuriko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2008 14:07 CDT
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I meant to leave a review earlier, but wasn't signed in... really dark and intense - I really felt Kagome's anguish in the the first couple of chapters. Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
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