| "Peace Treaty" Reviews/Comments [ 216 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 05:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the end of the fights... another good chapter.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2008 00:28 EDT
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kagome kicked but and no longer has the beads, what a great chapter
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Reviewed By: Kurisuchin On: July 20, 2008 21:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fricking sweet! I absolutely loved it! Keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: blackrose626 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story! The depth of each character is amazing. It is like I am there listening to their every thought, and feeling their every emotion. The plot is one that I have never read before which makes it all the more exciting. The detail with which you described each battle scene was incredible. Keep up the good work. Please update soon I cannot wait to read the rest of this story!!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 12:26 EDT
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Holy cow! She actually won against all those youkai? That's hard to imagine. She must have been trained much as a slayer would've been. Poor Sesshoumaru, having to watch her get injured like that. So, he destroyed the beads? What about the treaty? If someone forces the issue and the beads are replaced, will she die? Makes me wonder if Tenseiga is still around. Hell, she saved one of their own. Now there will be a real struggle. She saves a life then humiliates youkai by defeating them. Such a quandary. I hope that wasn't a bad political move. There has to be assholes waiting for the moment to make trouble. Sesshoumaru is so sweet and Kagome is so strong. She was right, though. Best to have gotten that shoulder fixed immediately. I had expected the beads to stay in place until a true battle required their removal. Gina was great. You really make her and the other original characters true three dimensional personalities. The contest scenes were well done. I could follow the moves. Thank you so much for not using Japanese phrases for moves. I wouldn't be looking them up for a description that could have been done in English to begin with. I appreciate that very much. I'm really squee happy with this chapter and can't wait til the next! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2008 23:30 EDT
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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.......noooooooooooooooo oooooooooooo......I'm screamen here......noooooooooooooooooo.....you finaly update and start the turnament the thing I've been waiting for since it was mentioned and you leave a dang cliff hanger like that....whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.......aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!......I this not koo you hear me not koo...what is Kagome going to do with a bumb arm...the stupid guy...the stupid cheating Demon lord.......Ya know what I think...I think it would be koo if they let her remove her 'collar' so she could heal her self....ya that sounds like a plan...come on she can't be out already I waited to long for her to be out already...she has to kick their *sses....so she can prove to fluffy the capable warrior she is........I still can't beleive he got her...but then she was up against a whole asortment of new....bigger guy...smaller ring...big guy with speed and a brain...it was not what she was used to so its understandable but still not fare....................please please please update this soon so I can find out what happened this is eating me up inside.....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ......Nyuka
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 23:52 EDT
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holy shit! that was an awesome chapter! i implore you to work hard on getting the next chapter up soon!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 19:42 EDT
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Wooooo!! The ass-kicking begins! I wonder how Sess will handle her injury. He'd better let her keep fighting if she's able, because otherwise neither she nor I will ever forgive him. ^_~ I can't wait for your next chapter to see how it pans out! And poor Gina--she DOES have to take care of injured Kagome, after all...and I imagine deal with a prickly inu mate in the bargain! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 09:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
owwies...
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Reviewed By: puppypal27 On: July 14, 2008 02:53 EDT
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Awesome chapter!! I'm so excited to read more. Keep up the great writing.
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Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 00:15 EDT
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Well now we have to wait a while for the next chapter to see how the tournament continues. I'm wondering how Sesshomaru is going to react to the fact that her arm is hurt. I was at the edge of my seat practically reading this chapter. I was amazing. Please update as soon as you can!!!
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Title: Amazing!
Reviewed By: starlit333 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 00:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like one of your other reviewers, I haven't read a fanfic in the gods know how long. This is quite a refreshing one to read. There's so much originality in it and like nothing I've ever read before. I enjoy the fact that Kagome is going to spar with warriors of the other houses and I'm DYING to know how that turns out. The writing quality runs so smoothly in the fanfic so far which is always a great thing. I love the fact that there is high vocabulary, also. Please update soon!!!
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Title: Please update soon!
Reviewed By: Sango-san On: July 07, 2008 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of the three stories I have read by you this is by far my fave. Enjoy your trip Amiga and post as soon as you can on this story and your others too! Lots of luv ~Sango-san~
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Title: Hard to put down
Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 05:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my first time reading a fanfiction in months...maybe a year and I am quite joyous I picked this one. I used to read fanfictions none stop and originality of this story is a beautifully shocking surprise. I look forward to the next chapter and I hope it is soon forthcoming.
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: June 24, 2008 23:48 EDT
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Another great installment! I am glad to here that the next chapter will be up soon. I got so used to you updating every 3 or 4 days that when you did not post for awhile I thought something was amiss. I am a HUGE fan of this story and I am wondering when Tensegia will be used...will it be Kagome or will it become hers?
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