| "Peace Treaty" Reviews/Comments [ 216 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2008 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE LOVE LOVE the Gina chapter, and what i love most about it was the end when Sesshomaru is thinking. OMG its so good. Please update soon, and you are such a good wrighter!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 21:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting better and better!!!!! I have missed a few chapters because I was away during the Easter and I am glad to have so many good chapters to read!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nadene On: March 24, 2008 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your story. It runs smooth, not to fast, not to slow. Good detail so that we know whats going on and your character personalities are starting out good. I look forward to your updates.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 20:19 EDT
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hehehe....I can't stop laughing...hehehe...this is too much...I love how Kagome is erritating Sesshoumaru like this its just too great...if thats even possible...XD.....I like Gina, she will be good for Kagomes domination over Sesshoumaru I can feel it...XD....and what Sesshoumaru said at the end about women being unreadable is just to true....hehehe...I love that you are a regular updater it really makes me look forward to checking my e-mail for the updates it just love it....XD....Ya know I think this is really going to work....I can't wait to see when and how they start to fall in love its just going to be too great....I know it...XD...........Nyuka
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Title: Sess is cool!!!
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 16:48 EDT
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I like your Sesshomaru! He's neither cold hearted bastard nor a wimpy dog! (pun intended!) Can't wait to see where your going to take the story next!! Draca xx
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 14:59 EDT
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this is a great story! i wonder what everyone will think when they find out how well kagome can really fight. will they find out when someone tries to kill her?
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 17:30 EDT
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That was nice or Sesshy to giver her some time....XD....I don't know how Kagome would be able to handle what she thought he would do................I though it was so funny when Sesshoumaru used her own words against her when she was like 'I wont be an accoplice in my own rape' and then hes all like 'I wont be an accoplice in your own suiside' ....that was just so great..........hehe.....I'm so glad you are updated regularly and I hope you continue with regular updates I would be oh so happy....XD...................Lots of happiness.......Nyuka.......X3........Meow
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2008 23:42 EDT
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Sesshy thats not nice making Kogme miserable....Not that Koagme isn't makeing it miserable for Sesshoumaru too....I wander when they are going to find out that they actrully do care about eachother. It would be so great if like Sesshoumaru woke up and saw all the demons she killed that would be so great to see he is facial expression...then again he would probalbly still have and imotional mask on....XD.....I hope you continue with regular updates....XD...........Nyuka....X3
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 21:22 EDT
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Oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhh What does he mean by that hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm? Alone at last.....hehe my my I can't beleive this story its so koo.......I'm guessing if their is and Inuyasha in this story it will be Kagome and Sesshoumaruk son rather than Inu no tausho and Iziyoi...Is Miroku, Sango, and Shippo going to come in to the story too?...well even if you weren't planing it I'm sure the story with be fill with all sorts of fluff to make up for it....XD...I can't believe Kagome gots bead of suggugation on, at least she isn't plumited to the groun like Inuyasha always is....XP.......Well I hope you update regularly.....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 20:51 EDT
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this sounds like it's going to be great!
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG its so good, can't wait for you to update, and plz if you were to ever listen to the request of a mear reviewer, let Kagome win if she ever fights Sesshomaru or any other demon since she is suppost to be as powerful if not more then Midory. PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 19, 2008 21:46 EDT
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yay for a strong kagome!
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Reviewed By: av On: March 15, 2008 11:46 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is really awesome so far... i'd really love to see where you take us with it as there seems to be a depth to it and its characters :>
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