| "Peace Treaty" Reviews/Comments [ 216 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 00:45 EDT
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OMG it has been forever but it was worth the wait...i cant wait for the next chapter since I know its going to be intense so update soon...you wrote this really well so i have no complaints...but I neeeeddddd more please XD update soon XD
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 18:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely chapter!!! I loved the end part with the ring it's so sad!!!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2009 08:44 EST
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You just wanted the mental image of Sess holding a baby. It was a sweet image though. I can't imagine Sess believing that Kagome killed his father, but we'll see as the plot unfolds.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2009 22:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol... Sneaky thing, getting Sesshy to told a baby... pup... great chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: January 30, 2009 20:50 EST
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oooo update soon cause I have missed this story soooo much...I might have to check out your other story since your work is soooo good...keep it up and I cant wait to read the next chapter XD
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Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 13:35 EST
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Wow - i'm actually pretty surprised that youkai in your universe age only 3-4 hundred years... That's pretty interesting.. By the way - can i have your deviant art account? Mine is ZdrnkCab... (it's a sucky name i know >
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 02:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor Kagome.... she could possibly die from old age before her children were even grown up... the whole thing sucks... Fantastic Chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Morvelaira [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2009 18:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another lovely chapter ma'am. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2009 16:08 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying this story. The characters are interesting to read about and I can't wait to see what happens next in this and the other one you are writing. Keep up the good work, and update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 02:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad that you're finally back at writing this fic. I love it so much. Sesshoumaru and Kagome are a beautiful couple. And I am glad that Lady Seibo and Lord InuTaisho are such wonderful and understanding parents and indiscriminative to boot! I eagerly await your next update soon.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 23:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAAA!!!!!!!!!!! glad to be home (not glad that my parent decided to change my room around, and move EVERYTHING... but VERY happy to be on the internet again!!!!!!!!! GREAT chapter!!!! I know how sesshy feels...
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii On: December 31, 2008 01:14 EST
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WOw is has been forever since I read this story so I restarted and I am finally caught up...I have to admit it is an amazing story and so well written...i am so happy that you updated because now I cant wait for things to happen...man i hope Kagome gets pregnant cause I would love to see a little sesshy on the loose XD but anywho...keep up the great work and update soon ok...we are all waiting anxiously for it
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Reviewed By: Lizzie Welling [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2008 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I know the inu birth was important for frame of reference when Kagome later gets pregnant and gives birth to Sesshomaru's pup. I frowned every time she felt his abscence. Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 09:55 EDT
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thank you for the update, i wonder if youkai could deliver cesaren since they heal so quickly
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 00:55 EDT
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I enjoyed this chapter immensely, even if there wasn't much action. It was nice to spend some time with Kagome, as it were, in her natural state. ^_^ Things in the outside world seem to be heating up though! I'm sorry to hear you won't be updating this for awhile, but thanks for what you have posted. This has been a very unique AU and we greatly appreciate your writing it! Cheers!
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