| "Peace Treaty" Reviews/Comments [ 216 ] |
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2008 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!!!!!!!! He can't do that! Please, Please, Please, udate soon!
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 12:21 EDT
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I absolutly LOVE this story, it is amazing, you HAVE to update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 19:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so sad and then AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanna steal this Sesshy!!!!
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 14:58 EDT
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Darn. I forgot something. I hope you don't mind this, but I have seen it appear in other stories and take a turn for being boring. In an effort to bring more depth to my characters, I studied those who were masterful at introspection. Now I'm afraid that my stories will become more telling than experiencing for the reader. It's a tight rope and I've been told that one story is losing its impact. So, I'm trying to allow my readers to experience more than explaining things to them. I've noticed that there are areas in your story that could use less telling and more action to show what is happening inside of a character. I don't have the fic open right now, so I can't give you examples. Take a look and see if there are places where you can have a person's action display what they are feeling as opposed to telling it. Please don't beat me up. You have a great story and I'm only trying to help with the only area that I think could use a little improvement. I'm having to watch for the same thing with mine. Snow
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 14:15 EDT
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I am finding this story quite believable, interesting, and enjoyable to read. The suspense is what I like the most. Kagome's penchant for self-destruction is disturbing because it is very out of character, but I can see how her history would bring it about. I can't wait to see how you manage to make Sesshoumaru take the beads from around her neck. It will be exciting, I'm sure. Oh! I'm not sure if you realize it, but you can revise a chapter just by going into the edit option on a chapter and reloading it. The other settings can be left alone. When I saw all of the notices of new chapters, they only seemed to be revisions. That's why I mention it. Thanks for the great chapter and for updating so quickly! ^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 14:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhh, that's so nice. Although, the whipping was a bit harsh. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Title: Best Story Ever!
Reviewed By: kagome45556 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2008 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never read a story quite so thrilling. I implore you too write more soon. Please, for my sanities sake!
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 16:32 EDT
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thanks for such a quick update. i loved it!!! im glad things got started between the two...sux to be they spy tho...i bet sessh is ticked lol...update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 13:33 EDT
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I'll bet that its someone Kagome knows, trying to save her.....hehe....as if they could save her now....XP.....hehe....but if it isn't a friend of Kagome's I would like to say my second guess is a spy for the counsil memebers that did not agree to the tredy.....ya those are my two best guesses....XD....I sooooooooooo happy that they are actrully getting along, it wont be much longer untill they trully become mates...=-=...only a mater of time...XD....I don't know why but I have a strang feeling that its Sango that is the spy....I don't remember Kagome mentioning her but I just have that feeling.....most likly wrong though ....can't wait for the next up that this is such a great treat that you update so regularly...XD...it makes me soooooooooooo happy you have know idea....never in all the stories that I have read have I found one that updates like you and that I really like ................Oh and the only think I can see that could break up the courting fest between Sesshy and Kags would some really dynaptic invasion upon the castil maybe Kagome getting captured or something.....hmmm....well I can't wait to see who it is that has thought it ok to spy on the lord of the westest's hummble abold.....XD.....................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: GummiPanda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 13:18 EDT
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Whoa, Sesshy was denied. Again! Poor thing. Haha. But at least Kagome's being more trusting! Things shall digress very steadily from here on out, I believe. [: I love this fanfic to many tiny pieces!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 10:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It sucks to be the spy!!!!
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Reviewed By: GummiPanda [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 22:48 EDT
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Haha. This was an excellent chapter! I was laughing through the entire thing! Especially SesshoMaru and Kagome's cutesy-wootsy nicknames. And Gina's reaction towards them. I can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe SesshoMaru will get his wish. Sooner or later.
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Reviewed By: Sessy'sgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 22:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY, you upadated, the chapter was ssssssssssoooooooooooo good i loved it. And just to tell you again i love it when Sesshomaru thinks!!!!!!!! keep up the good work, i have faith in you and your story to keep up my good spirets!!!!! GREAT JOB
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Reviewed By: yashkags4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 21:49 EDT
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omg!! this story is amazing!!! i cudn't stop laughing when they were calling each other those names. i've only just started today and im hooked! please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol.. this is so funny!!!!!!!!!
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