| "Peace Treaty" Reviews/Comments [ 216 ] |
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko((offline)) On: October 14, 2011 09:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D What a treat! I am happy that things are looking up again. it was so dark and sad before. :)(not that I didnt enjoy it) I love your story, and am always happy to see an update |
Reviewed By: AmandaMae On: August 19, 2011 00:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are a very talented writer and I've fully enjoyed this story so far. I always look forward to your updates and I cannot wait to see what the next chapter contains. Keep up the amazing work! |
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2011 03:56 EDT
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I always had a feeling that Gina swayed the other way, but I didn't think Tina was the same....or maybe I did and just forgot, not really sure its been a while since you've updated but I sure as heck am happy that you did....This story is one I could come back to over and over again....the only part that really tore me up was the longest night...and that was for obvious reasons.....I'm so glad that Kagome was able to save Inu papa, but I wonder can she heal limbs too? Because not having an arm has to suck big time.....sigh and Sesshomaru its about time they are going to talk about this....it never works out well for those who wait to explain in these kinds of situations....I wonder if they will have to go threw the mating ceremony again since his youki is missing....will it even work a second time? Idk but I await your next post eagerly. Nyuka |
Reviewed By: Nan_de_mo_chibi_Otoko((offline)) On: August 13, 2011 23:20 EDT
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Omg thank freaking god! I swear if he didn't wake up I would have been soooo bugged but thank you so much for the fabulous update |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2011 07:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to ask in reference to this: Taka eased into the feathery touch. “I guess I will have to send a message to the Sisterhood tomorrow and ask for orders. I hate to leave Kagome right now, but I serve at Lady Kaede's discretion. Maybe she will let me stay for a little while longer.” Gina's fingers dipped lower and caressed the gentle swell of her chest. “I hope so.” Taka froze, then turned, trembling. She feared both Gina's intentions and being wrong about her assumption. The beautiful Inuyoukai's face told her she was not mistaken. “Me too,” she said, no longer afraid. Am I reading in between the lines correctly or have I been watching too much Torchwood and other tv shows recently??? |
Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2011 07:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another fantastic chapter... |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Fan of Yours On: August 10, 2011 20:51 EDT
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I think you're a great writer and more importantly a great storyteller. I can't wait to read your next installment. This has been a truly awesome read. Kudos |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2011 02:32 EDT
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You are the best thing next to god! Hahahhaa...thanks for the chappie! ^^ |
Reviewed By: mojopp On: August 08, 2011 21:55 EDT
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OK, so I've just finished the first paragraph of your latest chapter, and all I can think is, "Damn, this is good writing." If you ever publish something, I hope you'll share it with your fans! |
Reviewed By: Sutlesarcasm-formerly signed in On: August 08, 2011 21:33 EDT
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Yahoooooo, what a night indeed. Yessssss, she saved the General, is still pregnant, is still alive, are you sure she isn't part cockroach youkai? LOL. I am so glad you are posting again. Hopefully life will let you post more often, I love your writing style! Kags and Sess are both wonderful charactors in both this story and Dancing with Sissors. Keep it up, post soon, and excellent chapter! |
Title: =O
Reviewed By: Azn_Tofu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2011 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're an amazing writer please update soon!! =D |
Reviewed By: kooky27 On: July 01, 2011 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it please update soon you are so talented :) |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Awesome On: June 30, 2011 18:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your muse stays with you. Your story has been a wonderful read so far. Thank you for sharing. |
Reviewed By: Senyorita On: June 28, 2011 23:04 EDT
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Wow! I didn't sleep last night because I read it all from beginning until the last updated chapter. Now, I'm craving for more. |
Reviewed By: *zetsuii On: June 25, 2011 05:46 EDT
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Ooooo sooooo good!! I need more. I am so happy she didnt die abd totally forgot about tenseiga. Well done. Cant wait for the next chapter...soon I hope |
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