| "The 500 Year Engagement" Reviews/Comments [ 222 ] |
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Reviewed By: KPawel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2008 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ACK!!! I totally FORGOT about the diarama !! Still chuckling over that.. imagining being trapped in a bonkei :))
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Mr. Sato is a fool to go to a remote location with someone you are blackmailing. And when that someone is Sesshomaru he is an even bigger fool. Between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru there won't be a man left alive and if Miroku, Sango, Kirara and Kagome get involved who knows what will happen. I didn't add Rin because I am not sure of her fighting ability but I maybe should not have added Kagome since they are fighting humans. Kagome would not want to see the men killed while I think Sango would have less scruples about killing evil men. It was good to see Jaken hasn't changed over the many years and is still the officious little twit he was in the Feudal Era. I can't wait to see how it all works out.
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Reviewed By: Garret On: May 31, 2008 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hm... Blackmailing Sesshoumaru seems like a good idea, if you want to die in a messy way. Prepare too met your maker Sato and im sure that Sesshoumaru is gona squeese out from him who provided the pictures too, before melting Sato and his thugs to a steeming soup. About time it gets solved btw so we can go on with the rest of the story. (i dont mind a good story but i HATE blackmail)
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Reviewed By: KPawel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 17:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... Sato-teriyaki! I wonder how long it takes top cook the slime out of it, though? :) It will be nice to see the old Sesshoumaru came out and play ;))
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 07:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha!! Nice chap!! Kagome's really improved her miko powers, huh? It would be nice to see more of those powers. And Sesshy would be oh so mad!!! Especially since his wife's included too... I hope he does something about Mr. Sato, like slow torture... Like tying him up them showing him some men... haha!!! That's probably gonna hurt! Anyways, keep up the good fic and please update as soon as you can! Thanks! Till next time, anime-rocks-1010
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 03:54 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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hahahaha if Sesshy knows about this.. he will go kill them personly :P
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Reviewed By: Sara_bell_from_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 23:28 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update. The story is wonderful. So update please! This story is very creative.
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Title: Lord of the Universe
Reviewed By: Ultra Kohuna On: May 29, 2008 23:12 EDT
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O.O oh my! i just read the whole thing and in love it!! how often do you update? i want more!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am having difficulties to stop laughing. It was soooo funny what Kagome did to those men. All the men are going to want to get Kagome to fix them. And I hate to think what will happen to them when Sesshomaru finds out about the pictures. Kagome shouldn't have stopped Inuyasha or Rin from telling Sesshomaru, he would have found the camera and stopped the pictures being taken. There are other women who could become victims of the photographer. Miroku's reaction to what happened was great, first he was concerned about the girls' safety but then he was excited about what they were doing. Using Miroku as an example was a good way to explain the men to Sango. She understands what they wanted and thought thanks to the pervert she is marrying. Now we see what happens next and maybe about ji-chan's date. I can't wait.
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Reviewed By: KPawel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 15:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! NEVER get Higurashi Kagome mad at you! You never know what your mind or body may wind up as;) Now.. all we have to do is wait for "Lord Ice-cube".. gome nissai.. Lord Sesshoumaru.. to find the suicidal-idiot who left the camera in the dressing-room!! (and - Kagome doesn't need to worry! I mean.. COME ON!! with all that water around Japan.. once Rin can make Sesshoumaru-sama see reason, I'm sure there are MANY areas bodies (and body-parts) can be disposedf of where they wonb't be found ;))
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 13:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO! Fantastic, as usual. I love Kagome's sense of justice but she is too soft hearted. Those guys deserve Lord Sesshoumaru's undivided attention for the amount of time it would take for him to kill them. You could always let him find out on his own. Maybe someone in his R&D department could come across the pictures and let him know. They could be researching lingerie and how it looks on various women and stumble across it and decide that the boss might want to employ the women as models. Can you imagine the blow-up if he suggested to Kagome that she could pose for one of his catologues? Or the reaction if she countered with the idea that she only would if Rin did too?
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2008 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what I am more surprised about ji-chan on a date or Sota getting off on the pictures of his niece, Rin and Sango. This is hilarious. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are going to go ballistic at pictures of their mates in lingerie on the internet. And Sesshomaru is going to really go mad when he finds out they were taken at his place. The guy who arranged the pictures is not going to live long and if any of the girls go missing the guy who plans to sell them will be dying quickly too. I am curious on where this is going to go next. I am also very curious as to who ji-chan is dating.
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: May 27, 2008 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's exciting to see how the seedy guys are going ahead with their plans now. Wonder how sexy those lingeries are to get such reactions. And poor, poor Souta. He's an uncle many times over and still such an innocent kid. Then again, I really don't want to think too much on what those "rubbing" sounds are. Really can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 20:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY GOOD STORY. I AM DEFINITELY NOW A FAN.
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Reviewed By: Hentai Strumpet [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2008 20:28 EDT
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VERY HILARIOUS.
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