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Reviewed By: d.c.rayburn On: May 10, 2008 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is amazing i cant wait for the rest!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for this scene, and you end it here! Oh, you are mean ;P Seriously I can't wait to see how Kagome and Inuyasha deal with this situation. I have a feeling that Kagome isn't going to school today and she definitely isn't going to the dance with Houjo tonight. Inuyasha will be happy that the secret is out though so he doesn't have to watch what he says and can be open about his feelings for Kagome. Souta and Kagome's grandfather are going to be floored by all of this. It should also be interesting to see how Kagome's grandfather deals with having a spiritually strong monk around. It would be interesting if they started trading sutras before Miroku realizes how weak jiichan really is. I can tell I am going to be giggling for some time over this story as the chapters come.
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Title: Reunions
Reviewed By: KPawel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 21:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It had to happen. But, scents of lemon aside, this is still an enjoyable fiction! As soon as I read this chapter, my mind started wandering to how Kagome might deal with Eri, Arini, and Yuka (her "friends" who were always trying to get hook her up with Hojo) if those three were her descendents!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 19:22 EDT
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assuming that kagome and yasha have a home somewhere where they lived until she came back to the shrine it wouldn't be a problem to move sango with them except she will have to tell mama the truth. it is really cruel to keep her grand babies from her even if they're older... just because kagome's afraid of confrontation. . . funny chapter. ~ a delight, ginny
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 14:46 EDT
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very cute new chapter. I love the introduction of the "pup" intresting cliffy! are they going to have a "normal" life or is there going to be some evil that they will have to fight to save the world again? Just curious.... keep up the good writing!
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: May 10, 2008 14:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO!! Never fails. You seriously crack me up everytime I read one of your stories. I so look forward to updates from you.
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Reviewed By: Ryo5492 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2008 23:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg its so goodXD i love your fanfic!!! having sango miroku and kirara come through the well was a nice touchXP oh but sometime during your fanfic you should introduce inuyasha and kagome's kids!!! id wanna read all about themXP im so excited=D please hurry with the next chapter=D
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Reviewed By: Nick F. On: May 08, 2008 10:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully humorous as always. Sango and Miroku time-jumping definitely needs to be talked about. Can't wait till the descendants come meet Mrs. Higurashi..Souta's gotta be the youngest uncle ever!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret (logged off) On: May 07, 2008 21:25 EDT
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I LOVED IT lol i loved the light thing lol please update soon!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome has turned evil, or at least into a pervert, for doing that to Rin. How long is Kagome planning on waiting to introduce her mother to her grandkids and great-grandkids and great-great-grandkids and ... well you get the picture. I am still snickering some over Fluffy and now I get to imagine Jaken's reaction to Rin jumping Sesshomaru in the car as Jaken drives. Another round of hilarity. This was an expected but fun solution to where Miroku, Sango and Kirara ended up, now how this transpired is left to discover. It is good to see them all together, I can't wait to see Sango's and Miroku's reactions to all of Kagome and Inuyasha's children. They will be glad that they played a helpful hand in getting the two together though, even if they didn't plan to. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 18:06 EDT
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good new chapter!! can't wait to see what happened to sango and everyone!!!! what Will rin's reaction to kegs old best girlfriend be? and WHY????
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 08:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha a sex addicted ey XD bloody great!!! and just got me thinking... 14 kids?? then where are they??? and OMG their altogether again!!!
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Reviewed By: Yuffie's_Clone On: May 07, 2008 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY hope that Kagome chews Hojo and her so-called 'friends' out.Who knew that Kagome is such a sex-fiend lol.I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche-NSI On: May 07, 2008 01:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that explains what happened to Miroku, Sango, and Kirara. Falling through the well and then not being able to get back. Rin should know better than to play such games. Kagome can be very sneaky when she has to be.
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2008 01:06 EDT
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Okay, that was such a great twist that I HAD to review. I LOVED the "Hey, how'd you get here, we had to get here the LONG way" comment. Absolutely priceless. *applause* Well done, update soon!
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