| "The 500 Year Engagement" Reviews/Comments [ 222 ] |
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Title: Sashami! lol
Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2008 00:32 EST
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I understand all about forcing yourself to get back in, and the anxiety that brings. But don't worry, while the chapter was a bit slower than some of the others, it was still great! The flow was consistant and the different scenes during the same timeframe came off without issue, so pat yourself on the back, listen to some Nightwish (lol) and keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 23:54 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update. The comedy was there even if you feel you forced it. I think it was hilarious that Mr. Sato and Kano tried to pick up Sango and Midori. Everyone's problems would have been solved if they had succeeded though. The girls would have made mince meat of the guys and if there was anything left Inuyasha and Miroku would have finished the job. I am confused about something though, where is Midori's mate? If she has kids then they have a father, so where is he, did something happen to him? Why would she be interested in Hojo if she already had a mate? Hojo is nice but immature. I can't wait to see what happens next, especially if Sango and Midori find out two girls go missing after being in that club. Will they put two and two together or not?
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2008 21:24 EST
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*sniggers* Oh god. I about fell off my chair when I read the line about Sea Youkai serving Sashimi. Do it again! Why is it that power hungry freaks aren't always the brightest lightbulbs in the bunch, and those that are smart, don't have the street smarts god gave little green apples?
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Reviewed By: anime~rocks~1010 (didn't log in again!) On: December 26, 2008 19:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY UPDATE!!! Hahaha... I have been waiting for the email signaling an update for a long time now. I hope the "problem" is fixed already! I was thrilled to see this new chap... I wonder what plan the war council has for Sato and Kano?? Well, I'll be waiting for your next update again, and I hope it will be soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 14:10 EST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, and currently owned by authors/artist, Inuyashaloverr and KnittingKnots, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedfics.html (Fiction) http://feudal-pulpfiction.net/fa/nommedart.html (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ Inuyashaloverr & KnittingKnots Owners/Administrators of the Feudal Association ***Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
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Title: wonderful^^
Reviewed By: Woulv On: November 17, 2008 09:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it and plz hurry and write the next chapter, my heart sinks a bit everytime i cheak it and nothing new is there >.
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Reviewed By: JATY On: November 10, 2008 20:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!!! What happened to the updates, huh? Come on, more chapters!!!!! Please?
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Reviewed By: JATY On: November 10, 2008 20:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!!! What happened to the updates, huh? Come on, more chapters!!!!! Please?
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: 7879kagome On: October 17, 2008 20:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story cant wath 2 reday mouer
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Reviewed By: anime~rocks~1010 (didn't log in!) On: October 07, 2008 10:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya! I received notice a new chap was up but I just had the time now... Alright! The review of the show was pretty funny, as well as the 'peeking' of Kagome's mom! Anyway, great story going on and hope you update soon! Cheers!
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 21:27 EDT
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Glad to see the story still going on ^^ I got scared for a moment that you had dropped it for some reason >< Can't wait for the next chap, though!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2008 17:45 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good:) u don't need to apologize it just shows that u are a very good friend to your friend:) (hope that made sense) keep up the good work! i'm glad u updated!
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2008 19:17 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am not surprised that Mr. Sato lost two more girls, but I hope someone starts to notice that any girl that goes off with him disappears. They did get smart about the caterer switch. At least Kagome and Inuyasha are suspicious. The fight between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru for entertainment was funny and a good way for them to blow off steam. The interaction of Miroku and Sango with Kagome's grandfather was cute, especially the story in the paper that had him cowering. The story was well done, I liked how the reporter was the only one left. I can't wait to see what happens next and Sesshomaru's reaction when he finds the renegades, especially since they had threatened his mate.
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 23:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ah please write more this is really really really REALLY good! keep up the good work!
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: 09780785kagome On: September 13, 2008 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey love the sorty keep up the good work, cant wath 2 redy mouer
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