| "The 500 Year Engagement" Reviews/Comments [ 222 ] |
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2008 01:04 EDT
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please update soon i love this i wonder what kagome is having boy or girl and what's it's name going to be? i wonder what Kano has in store? keep up the good work! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Brandospands [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2008 18:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again awesome job with the newest chapter :) I cant wait to see what Kano is planning next and what is school gonna be like on monday lol hope to see more :D
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Title: Loving it.
Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2008 13:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rely like this story. I hope you will do more with it and I look foward to seeing Kagome doing more with the school. I realy want to see Iny lose it to Hobo though.
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Title: love the story
Reviewed By: kagome167784499 On: July 22, 2008 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story,iam galide inuyasha and eferyone eals is okay, can't wath to ready wath heaapins next
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's amazing that Kagome gets aroused even after that getting eaten and losing breath episode... Just goes to show her drive is very strong! Wonder what the plan on land is?!? Well, cute chapter! anime~rocks~1010
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 02:53 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo Kagome got smarter with ya barrier XD and her demon blood makes me laugh XD
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 21:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually I can't wait to hear what Sango and especially Miroku say to Kagome and Inuyasha about their swimming "party". And I don't even want to think about what Rin and Sesshomaru would say (actually yes I do, I think it would be hilarious). I like what you did between Kagome and Kano much better than what I thought happened for two reasons: one, it extends the story by keeping Kano alive to battle longer (true Rumiko Takahashi style there), and two, it is just funnier. Poor Mr. Sato keeps losing girls, first the secretary then the budding actress. Actually I feel sorrier for the girls than I do for Mr. Sato. Shouldn't the police start looking for these missing girls, it might be interesting to see how Mr. Sato handles being suspected by the police in the disappearance of the two girls and counting. Another thing I am curious about is what Midori has been doing while her parents have been busy, has she been with Houjo or her mother's family, or both? I am looking forward to seeing where you take us all next.
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Reviewed By: Kellybug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! What a nioce lay-up! I must admit, after I read Kagome's first lines, I was thinking, "She hasn't learned much in 500 years!" But, THEN! She turned the tables of Kano!! Look who got caught in the fish-trap ;) Yes, a Miko's barrier makes a great bargaining-chip!! :))
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Reviewed By: anime-rocks-1010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2008 09:56 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me again... WHAT HAPPENED TO KAGOME??? Uwahh, what's with the cliffy?? Hahaha Inuyasha showed hi horn dogness again, I see... And what exactly did Kirara do to Miroku? Did she bite "them"? Funny and nice chap and please update... Thanks and cheers! anime~rocks~1010
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Reviewed By: hanyou4ever On: July 11, 2008 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! What happened to Kagome? Write more!!!!!! The suspense is killing me!!!!!
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Title: cool title
Reviewed By: 674kagome On: July 10, 2008 10:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plaisce don't like off kagome, inuyasha, sango or mriouk., and there kid or inuyasha's and kagome's pups. but the sec deaimo you can. but outhere than that love the story, can't wath to ready mouer.
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Reviewed By: kagome231 On: July 09, 2008 11:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have better not killed off kagome, but outher than that i liove the story , or her and inuyasha pups
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 09:28 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA Kirara got Miroku?? OMG thats funny!! i loved that part!!!!
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Title: Boring...???
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what Kellybug's problem is, but ANY good story with *actual* story content needs a little buildup now and then. I thought this chapter balanced perfectly, so that the characters had a moment to catch their breath and at least attempt to relax, before jumping right back into the next crisis. The ending was perfect. Kagome has obviously erected a barrier or something, so I'm not worried for her safety, but it will be interesting when everyone moves in to rescue her, and discovers her bottoms are missing. LOL. I wonder if Inuyasha will think to keep her swim shorts handy with all the other ruckus going on? At least it's in the middle of the night, so no one is around but her friends.
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Reviewed By: Kellybug [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 20:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Except for a couple of flashes of brilliance, I was reminded of why I generally dislike (hate?) hentai-fics: If they have ANY kind of story at all - they become ... stupid. THIS was the stupid-chapter :( Kirara's actions were amusing, mainly because Miroku's reaction was so realistic, and I especially loved the cans of Chicken-of-the-Sea (and the explanation of Sea-Youkai was VERY much in Sesshoumaru's character)! But - other than that - the chapter was boring :( Not up to the rest of this story :(
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