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| "A Balm for Social Failure" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 ] | Title: Porn and Cookies...lol
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 07, 2008 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaay! Updates! XD My monitor died so I was story deprived for a couple of days. ^^' Once again you've blown me away with this wonderful, amazing story! Im always in a rush to get home from work to see if you've updated! I like the way you had Light referring to Misa as a prop, and right now that really is her main, how do I put this?, purpose? in the story other than a source of conflict. I give you kudos for making Lights dad out to be the very perceptive man that he is, though I thought he would go into denile about his son being gay as he did in the series with him being a kira suspect. But you paint a very plossible picture which is what I love most about this story, well done and looking forward to more!!!
| Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you must've updated right after I wrote that review for last chapter, cuz I don't remember it being there, haha. But what the hell?! I thought Light totally wanted to get in L's pants! Just last chapter Light had a wet dream!! But now he's acting as manipulative as he was before he started lusting for L! Now he's like "it's all falling into place" and he's ignoring L! It makes me sad, cuz L's sad. But it's nice to know that Graham was there to make L feel a bit better. It's nice to know there are people who want to talk with you just for the sake of talking--but I'm sure L doesn't see Graham as a friend. especially when Graham tried to/succeeded in molesting him in front of Light, haha. Which reminds me again of what I was complaining about before. Where has the passion in the LightxL gone!? It seems that those 2 and a half weeks don't follow the saying "absence makes the heart grow fonder." AND I HATE MISA!! Now that she's also in the fic, and she already has the death note and Light knows it too, everything's gonna get more complicated. Poopy. I liked it better when it was just simple Light and L. Misa always complicates things, and she's an idiot, too.. Now this fic will drop a few IQ points just because she's in it!! Naw, I'm just kidding, I'm sure this fic will stay awesome =) Update again soon! I'll keep leaving awesome reviews if you keep putting up AWESOME chapters!
| Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I must say, I've dealt with plenty of Death Note fanfictions before. It takes plenty of intelligence and balls to write a very witty--and canon!--fanfiction about Death Note (because it's a very complex series). But this story is creative and real, but also sticks to the story and every character is.. well, in character! No OOC here XD So I congratulate you on this exceptional fanfic and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update as soon as you can!! I want to see how L and Light's relationship develops! I want L back, damn it~! Update soon and I'll give a much better review =]
| Reviewed By: PyroKat On: August 25, 2008 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the dream sequence!!
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 25, 2008 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating, with every chapter you story gets more addictive! Wonderful work, though I do feel bad that L is that bad at social interaction that he scares Masuda, though its kinda funny all the same. ^^' Cant wait for the next chapter, heres waiting and reviewing ;p
| Reviewed By: RawrKat On: August 23, 2008 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Loves this!! *patiently sits and waits*
| Title: Well done!
Reviewed By: Killer_Muraki [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 00:11 CDT
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Superb! I very much enjoy the fact that L is in character. Most fics I've read either, or both, Light and L have been totally out of character. You've done a swell job and I'm sure the more you write the better it will be. Thank you for sharing your story and I do hope more is to come, and soon! Until then
| Title: AWSOME!!!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: August 17, 2008 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can safly say this is the best Deathnote fic i've read, but that doesn't carry alot of weight since this is the first Deathnote fic i've botherd to read. ^^' It's not that I dont like Deathnote, Ive watched the entire series, but that none of the fanfics here have ever caught my intrest. Not only you captured said intrest, but you've held it there too! Wonderful job! You keep the characters in character and offer a plotline without anything totally outragouse that could, in theory, 'possably' happen in the realm of Deathnote and describe what would be going through the character's minds if it did. Beautifully written and compelling. Im one happy yaoi fan girl who cant wait for the next fantastic chapter, with my ever oozing praise, Passsing Reader XD
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