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| "A Balm for Social Failure" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Title: http://www.fanfiction.net/~hwoarangswife
Reviewed By: Thelly On: November 10, 2008 20:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear missy, You have written one of the most enthralling and utterly entrancing death note fanfictions that I have ever had the privilege of reading. This story is so good....I'm actually unable to formulate any other word than "Wow". It has blown me away. Let me just say that you have done an excellent job. The characters are completely in-character. L being the shrewd, vulnerable, and quirky smart-ass we all know and love. And Light being that smug,arrogant, yet sexy ass beast we know he is. honestly, this is the death note fic I've been waiting for!!!! I've read so many good ones...but this...this is a gold egg you have here! see, I always wanted to read a death note fanfic in which it L was completely overwhelemed with Light, A story in which Light is extremely sexy, and pursuing L with a predatory intent. I wanted to see Light really seduce L, and this story is really the answer to my craving. I can thank you enought for this. This a truly wonderful piece you have written If I had an account here, you would be my first favorite author, because this is greatness. I want you to know that If nobody else lets you know how much they appreciate this I will. It will dishearten me if you abandoned such a great story. I'm looking forward to what happens next. I basically died during the tub scene. Light was too much, so was L with his damn moaning! I guess what I'm trying to say is "keep making your fans die a sweet death with this awesome fanfic!" Cause its good....in a bad way good! lol Lots o love and mind fruits to power the plot ~Thelly~ p.s. sorry if I freaked you out, I get carried away when it comes to either yaoi, or good yaoi fanfiction.
| Reviewed By: Shimio [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 20:47 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a fantastic way of writing. You stick to the charactor's personalities but twist them enough to make this an awsome fic!! I can't wait to read the next chapters! That and this is the best f*****g DN porn EVER!!!
| Title: I Can Never Look at Bathrooms the same way...lol
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: November 03, 2008 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I just about died laughing. I guess L finally got his bathroom scene lol! I actually half expected L to start looking up gay pornz sites for research tehee! Now all you need is a scene with Light ans L in a comprimising position under a table as Mr. Yagami walks in *snicker* A great and fun read as always. Perfectly played out and beautifully written. I love how each character fights one another, but ultimetly succumes in order to move forward. I look forward to the next chapter as always, so until then, ja~
| Reviewed By: just readin' On: November 02, 2008 20:19 CST
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i'm not normally a fan of yaoi...but you hooked me on this one. wow. sexy as hell, and great humor and verbal sparring. this is so much fun to read. can't wait to see what turn you decide to take on this.
| Title: Go L!!!! XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 26, 2008 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Im quite happy with the turn of events. :D Its kinda nice that L got some of his own back at Light's father. Making him practically beg to be in close proxsimity to his son. Im sorry for any spelling errors in my review and if it seems rushed. Gotta go to work ^^' But I still wanted to show my gratitude. Cunning as always, can wait for the next chapter! Until then~ ;p
| Reviewed By: Romea On: October 19, 2008 23:04 CDT
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I love Light! And L! No hate points for Light. Yagami-san is just a worried parent but he's also closed minded if he's against gayness so much. I don't not like him though because getting Light and L together would be no problem without him and then where would the story be? I think this chapter was just a little boring because the story didn't seem to advance very much, other than the cameras, but maybe I just need to impatiently wait for the next update to get it. Thanks for such an amazing story, btw!!
| Title: Hmmm....
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 18, 2008 18:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I still have to say that Light's father fustrates me the most, though not as much in this chapter. Im suprized Matsuda diden't jump on the 'lets survay Light' band-wagon lol. Your story plays out like a game of chess, and I can't keep myself from asking 'who's going to make the next move?' On another note, it seems like all the steamy goodness happends in the bathroom as L pointed out. If L does indeed get his shot at 'bathroom time with Light' I will die laughing.
| Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Hosooie On: October 18, 2008 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read how u havent been getting any reviews n i most apologize. i love this story and i have read every chapter.but i am a lazy artist n havent taken the time to review. but as an artist i totlly know how u must feel...so here i am saying..I LOVE THIS STORY! Keep up da good work..n let them jump each others bones SOON!
| Title: :)
Reviewed By: iammecya On: October 18, 2008 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sure hope L and Light get together, I wanted that in the series too. Series was never the same after they killed off L, it should have been Misa that died! Good work!
| Title: Fustration
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: October 14, 2008 10:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Light's father makes me want to bash my head open. In fustration. It actually gives some insight as to the 'why' of Lights unstable mentality (according to the series that is). I always thought that it was the DeathNote that made him go beserk, but here you hint that some of the blame maybe in his home life. Always having to be the perfect son, setting examples, and set on a peddistood sooo high its no wonder that he cracked under the pressure. You make me want to rewatch the whole series with this bit of insight. I feel kinda stupid for no noticing it before. ^^' Gloriouse! As always im happy and egar to read, though I think the rest of mediaminer is asleep...All well ^^' Can't wait for the next chapter, so until then, ja!
| Title: Amazing fic!
Reviewed By: Nicknick On: September 28, 2008 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great plot, and it's great that it's hard to know what's coming next. I LOOOOOVE your humor!! This story is hilarious! Just a few small grammar/punctuation errors, but they are few and far between and don't damage the flow of the story. Excellent job keeping everyone in character, too. Keep it up! =)
| Title: Yaaay! Updates! XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 27, 2008 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your my hero! Nobodys been updating really and I was starting to get serious withdraws ^^' I just about creamed myself when I saw you updated (im kidding of corse, that'd be a new level of opsessed *sp?* even for me!),but thats what I felt like doing regardless :p Wonderful, brillient, and enticing! Lights' really got his hands full when it comes to his father, and im starting to wonder if Misa (however annoying) will start to add her own mix of complications to Light's life. In regards to how your doing: AWSOME! for me anyway :) Cant wait till the next chapter, untill next time, Ja ne! XD
| Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW OMGSH!! CUDDLING! And awesome limey action. I was surprised, yet not, at how soon the real yaoi started. Cuz they HAD been away from each other for a very long time.. so I guess it's logical that when they finally met up something momentous was gonna happen XD L's so cute when he thinks furiously like that. Even Light can tell, haha. But damn that was great! I just kinda feel bad for L, though, cuz he's pretty self-conscious, and he was wondering about Light's true intentions.. Strings attached, heehee. I like the part where Light was like "I never wanted to be friends, because I knew I'd always want more" or however that line went. I NEARLY DIED FROM A FANGIRL HEART ATTACK I was so happy XDD I want to know what happens when they wake up now! You know, the whole "morning after" thing. I hope L doesn't get freaked out (like he probably will).. I hope Light holds him close throughout the night :D L and Light cuddling is the cutest frickin thing EVER. Please update again whenever you have the time!
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 15, 2008 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is, I love this story. You actually threw me for a loop this time. I thought all us readers were going to have to wait till a Ch25 came out for things to get this hot and steamy! I am pleasently surprized though, it flowed naturally and smooth while still keeping the charaters their respective selves with a few more, shall we say, hidden desires ;p Overall im one happy yaoi fan-girl whos been pleasontly blown away one again with a resounding BOOM! Much fun, and please keep up the glorious work! XD Heres till next time!
| Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2008 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd take the porn any day. Though cookies sound pretty good right now.. LOL MATSUDA LIKES LIGHT!! That is the most horrendous and hilarious thing I've ever seen/heard. I feel so bad for Light XD But on a more serious note, jesus frickin christ it's getting dramatic! By the way, I love your style of writing. Like, you know how I said it takes great intelligence to write Death Note fanfics (unless it's just pointless smut, like a one-shot or something)? Well I enjoyed reading this chapter because it was EXTREMELY witty. But not too smart so that idiots like me would be lost :D The Battle of Minds at the end there with L and Light was like.. mind-blowing. Fast-paced, that is. And it's amusing how smart Light's dad is. Just now he's starting to figure out that there could potentially be something between L and Light!! OMGSH! And did that last line mean Light is going to go look for/try to stalk L?! Wow, Light must be pretty desperate to see L alone. But.. but maybe that's what L wanted him to do! Since they were both acting (somewhat), maybe L secretly wanted Light to follow after him! Haha, my favorite line from this chapter: "Observing Matsuda was like watching a two year old discover its toes." I wonder how Matsuda got onto the police force in the first place.. I'm so mean, haha. But omgsh! Near the beginning of the chapter, I totally thought Light didn't care about L anymore! But then later Light was thinking "IT WAS SO HARD IGNORING L!!" so I was satisfied. And then the reaffirmation of Light's intense attraction to L also made me very happy. But those weeks that Light and L spent away from each other before Light came back to headquarters.. Did L contemplate his relationship with Light during those weeks, like did he discover he would do anything if Light asked him to? Or did he just go into hiding and try to build up those walls around his heart (and mind) again so that Light would have a tough time knocking them down? Why does L think the desire they have for each other is so wrong?? Arg I want to know what happens in the next chapter!!~ Will it finally be the confrontation I've been waiting for my whole life?! Okay maybe not my whole life but.. I just really want to read the next chapter XP
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