| "Polarity" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anony On: November 29, 2009 16:48 PST
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---Oi, what's taking so long with the updates? Readers want to see more!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2009 00:29 PST
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WEEE, UPDATE! Fun stuff so far, and I look forward to the next one. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 22:12 PDT
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Penguin Monarchy? You need to explain that one, I think. Anyway, awesome latest chapter, and one that has definitely shown how much you've improved in explaining combat from your first story. Of course, still more needs to be written. So, update again soon, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: ClkTwr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 06:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have enjoyed OHWP by you and when you told me you were going to work on "Polarity" I decided to give it a try. I was rewarded with a brilliant adaptation of these stories and I am enjoying it thoroughly. I do like that you bring Konatsu into the fight as I have rarely seen him in any role other than an afterthought to Ukyo. I also like that you didn't throw everyone into the free for all rumble immediately. While holding Colonge or Happi back is a bit traditional I believe it fits with her desires to swiftly bring Ranma to heel. I admire your style and the direction you have taken thus far. I look forward to the end of this tale and can't wait to see where you take "One Half a Wing and a Prayer". In the mean time I have only one thing I dislike about this story, the chapters are to short and come to far apart! That is really only due to my enjoyment of reading though and no fault of yours. With all humility I request that you post the next chapter soon, I visit this story weekly hoping to find a new part. Continue your excellent work. If you would like a pre-read or proof-read volunteer I would be more than willing. mseidel@yahoo.com
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Title: more!
Reviewed By: damocles7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 20:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loving this tale of yours. (as well as your other works) Keep it up!
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Title: Mighty good
Reviewed By: Vassago-Toxicity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2009 01:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, this is extremely good character development that can easily get me to believe he would actually make the choice to wear a fuku. This is what I want to see when somebody writes a fic where Ranma has to adapt to the life (or body) of a girl, or has to use the girl form to do something like beat demons. This kind of character development makes it believable! This is definitely going on my favorite fics list.
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Title: :o why no 11?
Reviewed By: Spud Jebus On: July 01, 2009 08:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
duuuuuuude, like, duuuuuuuuuuuuuude... nuf said. i dont know if i want to beg you to continue this or 1/2 wing both stories are really good and keep leaving me wanting more, its like its my cocaine, i need my next fix before i go insane
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Title: You can do better.
Reviewed By: Vassago-Toxicity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 10:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Immensely better than those cruddy fuku fics I mentioned in the previous review. In fact, this is going on my list of "BEST FICS EVAH!!!" in the top 10. I don't think I've ever read a more scrumptious piece of character development and wonderful plot in the form of fanfiction in years. I'm off to read the rest and then I'm going to devour your other fics.
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Reviewed By: Vassago-Toxicity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 04:34 PDT
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Apart from the fact that I really dislike Fuku-fic's because it'd be nigh-impossible to get Ranma to wear one (especially one as girly as the SM ones), I'm going to continue reading this and give it a try. Mostly because this doesn't seem like the Utter Crap that most fuku fics were in terms of character development. The ones I've read (or read parts of) just kind of...gave Ranma a fuku and had him wearing it. Never had any real justification or character development for it. Manly man with tons of male pride that hate's his female form, turns into feminine embodiment of female power...in the space of 15-50 words. Not exactly character development. Let's see if you can do better than that.
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Reviewed By: CLoud1014 On: June 26, 2009 12:17 PDT
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---You better update this soon! I do not like cliffhangers that involve someone's life hanging in the balance! Happy writing, and update soon! PS: How long before you reach the sequel? Or is it the SM/OWAP cross?
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Title: borgrabbit
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 09:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You ARE an evil b☺☻♥♦♣d.Please update at your soonest. Like the tiger.
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Reviewed By: PhiloWorm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2009 07:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
An overall solid concept for a fukufic. You manage to blend and shape the common clichés in a very interesting way. Your idea of a "dual nature" within Ranmas powers seems rather fitting, and it also compliments the gravity based powers of Polaris if you want to take a look at the methaphorical side of the equation. Gravity is in most supernatural lore linked with the void (also named Chaos, Space and Time), the stars and chaotic energies. Thus allowing the curse to create a "chaos seed" that can be used by Ranmas male aspect, factoring in the Neko-Ken to boot, is a stroke of genius. Not only do you stay true to the concept of equality often found in chinese and japanese lore, namely Ying and Yang. You also honor the idea of Jusenkyo not beeing a place of curses alone, but also a means of causing balance within the cursed (re: giving the curse that most fits the person) as well as the old belief that chaos is everything, including order. As far as I see it, you are setting Ranma up to be the perfect counterbalance to the absolute order represented by the so called "ideal future" represented in the Silver Millenium (re: what I know comes from fanfiction alone, the manga/anime is to suggary for me to even contemplate wathcing). Seeing as you are leaving the plot fairly open so far I can with honesty say that I am looking forward to read future chapters and see for myself where this will lead. With my sincerest admiration for a fic well written. PhiloWorm.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous Reviewer On: May 26, 2009 10:40 PDT
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---Baka. Of course we're going to stick with you; when it comes to unusual Ranma Fanfiction, you are the best! Also, I'm still waiting on the sequel to 1/2 Wing and a Prayer (adding Ukyo to the miz should up the chaos immensely, and if there is one thing I like reading about, it's chaos)! Happy writing, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2009 08:43 PDT
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Lol, awesome latest chapter. Now to see some more ranma tiger action, heh. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 11:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome.
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