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Title: Very well done Reviewed By: Lerris On: November 19, 2008 16:47 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Overall this is a good start. My only problem was that I had printed off a few chapters to read, read them, came back to read a bit more before work, and found out there wasn't any more just yet.. Of course, things have a habit of getting harder after the introduction bit is done...
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Reviewed By: Moton [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 21:46 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: You are right, there are a lot of ranma/sailor moon crossover stories and while many are not so great, a few are extremely well done. This is shaping up to be one of those, I really like the beginning so far. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Chapter 3 Reviewed By: Observer On: November 11, 2008 21:33 PST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This is quite and enjoyable story so far and I am looking forward to chapter four! It is somewhat different from the usual fuku-fics which usually have Ranma replace on of the senshi or go the route of earth or sun. But all in all it is quite nice to read and I'm looking forward to any plot twists you will have in it.
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2008 04:28 PST Comment/Review: Wait, did I just hear what I think I heard? Was... nope not going to say it. Don't want to spoil it if I'm right. I am waiting patiently for the next chapter; this story is very enjoyable. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Title: Chapter 3 Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2008 12:15 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Brilliant. I love your portrayal of the Tendo sisters. I too think that Akane is jealous of Ranma. But I wonder what happened at the end of the chapter. So, Akane set Ranma up? What for? The monster attack (or whatever that portal is)?
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Title: Chappie Three Reviewed By: Sailor mephitis On: October 31, 2008 09:46 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Almost shot soda and crackers out my nose, reading the intro paragraphs. That was inspired. Looking forward to the next chapter, inspite of the seriously heavy foreshadowing. Wes
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Reviewed By: Sopchoppy On: October 25, 2008 07:26 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Nice, I hope you continue this soon.
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Reviewed By: F.R. On: October 19, 2008 08:21 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Very enjoyable thus far. Look forward to seeing more :).
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 19:41 PDT Comment/Review: Hmmm, most interesting. Heh. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2008 17:21 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Great build up to THE EVENT (Ranma's new destiny). Can't wait to see how you'll handle it.
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Reviewed By: GreydonCreed On: October 11, 2008 20:21 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: Good start, look forward to more soon.
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 12:35 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Excellent start to an excellent fic. So what if there are plenty of Ranma/SM crossovers? There's always a need for more. And this promises to be one of the very good ones. I hope you'll post more soon.
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Reviewed By: Questara On: October 11, 2008 10:44 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: A thoroughly enjoyable start to what I hope is a long fic.
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Reviewed By: borgrabbit01 On: October 11, 2008 09:17 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Very fun beginning to a great story. Only criticism is that I want more. Oh. So its not criticism, please update soon with Ranma's expected trials in coming to grips with his feminine heritage. I am curious as to whether you will start pre or post Saffron. Ciao
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Reviewed By: Tuisto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2008 08:36 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: Very nice, I don't think anyone has ever done a "Sailor Polaris" before. Credits for originality, and a decent sounding plot.
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