| "Polarity" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Title: polarity
Reviewed By: iceberg On: May 06, 2009 06:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a good story to read and will scouts be able to cure ranma of the neko-ken. will he be able to transform to sailor polaris?
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Reviewed By: LOWTEN [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2009 11:32 PDT
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is it me or did you jest get reoga to drink a Pan-Galactic Gargle Blaster ????????
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Reviewed By: Jerrac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2009 23:30 PDT
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Good chapter. Would have been kind of nice to see a different kind of reaction to Ranma's story than the usual tears, but it wasn't over done, so good. Loved the ending. That was a twist I didn't see coming at all. :D
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 13:51 PDT
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Never play poker with a Mime? Try playing poker with one of the dark gods of the Exterminatus now universe, the Deceiver (Kevin) is a pain in the ass. Anyway, continue to update, ja ne.
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Title: Cloud1014
Reviewed By: Clouddancer1014 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2009 09:22 PDT
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---Nice . . . always liked the Jupiter/Ranma pairing (not my favorite, mind you, but close to it). Keep up the good the work! And be sure to cause as much chaos as you can when Ranma leaves Nerima!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2009 11:16 PDT
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Please let it not be a bomb in the turkey, that's a pain in the ass to cleanup, ya know, turkey blood and meat all over the place, it's like a meat gyser, it's a bitch to find every piece and wipe it down. Not to mention needing a new fridge...Anyway, loved the latest couple of chapters, but I would REALLY love to see an update first and foremost. So, update soon will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: FWR On: April 04, 2009 10:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah...Another chapter with no transformation and another sort of cliffhanger. You are a very very evil person... With that out of the way this is an excellent story and I look forward to reading more of it :).
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 03:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent like always.
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Title: Chapter 7 review
Reviewed By: Dragon Man [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 14:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiryu Shouten Ha FTW! I love the variation with the dragon! I also love Ranma's interactions with Saturn, I can just see Ranma busting the heads of some bullies picking on Hotaru later!
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2009 12:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once agai, excellent job.
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Reviewed By: Sopchoppy On: February 11, 2009 13:32 PST
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Enjoying this story so far, looking forward to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Black Dragon6 On: February 09, 2009 15:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
More than a tad cliche, but well-written and enjoyable. As things go forward, though, I'd prefer more action and/or jokes and less of Ranma feeling sorry for himself. It seems like the bulk of the "poor Ranma, his life really sucks, it's time he took control" is over as far as the plot is concerned, so I'm quite interested in where this is going next. Also, I'd personally like to see something unique done with the inevitable meeting with the moon cats. I mean, usually it just involves Ranma freaking out, telling everyone why, and then having everyone feel sorry for him and badmouth Genma, but you've had enough of that so far. Just a thought.
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Reviewed By: Otakkun [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2009 04:34 PST
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Just a quick thing, I usually don't nag on details about the fics I read, but really, Kasumi calling Ranma "my son" as he jumps out of the clinic was a bad idea. It just felt out of place when I read it, my first reaction being WTF!?? I'd reccomend you to just delete those two words from the chapter and everything would be on par with what you've done so far. If you feel the need of building a mother/son relationship between them, go ahead, but give it some time. Older sister/brother relationships are easier to accept for the reader, as it makes a whole more sense at first, even without further explanation, but going so far as to create what you're trying to pull needs some extra work inside the fic to pull succesfully. I hope you give this some thought.
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Reviewed By: Lerris On: February 03, 2009 18:52 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a nice couple chapters...
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Title: Looks good
Reviewed By: TJG On: February 02, 2009 21:21 PST
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Nice story. I hope that Ranma uses the full power of the Umisenken and Yamasenken in the fight. Particularily to avoid being hit and to bypass the armor.
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