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Reviewed By: Ranneko On: February 02, 2009 17:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed many elements of the story but I really dislike your characterisation of Akane. It really just does not mesh with her character in the series. I realise you need to push Ranma away from the NWC for this story concept, but seriously, Akane has never in the series been so unsympathetic as you display her here.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 13:20 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great one. I like this version of Kasumi. I don't think I've seen that one before. Hope there'll be more soon.
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Reviewed By: ordieth117 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2009 09:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fun chapter. I like how the senshi demonstrated actual teamwork against War. Far too few fics portray teamwork being used. It seems somewhat obvious that Ranma, being weakened already, will need to transform to win, but that's okay. It should be fun.
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Reviewed By: BukkakeNoJutsu On: February 02, 2009 02:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great stuff!
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Reviewed By: Clouddancer1014 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 16:05 PST
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---I like what you're doing here. Please keep this going; I definitely want to see more! Happy writing, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: FWR On: January 20, 2009 08:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Getting very good now. I like how you're introducing the Senshi part slowly and giving him a choice and such, even though I doubt he'll not give into it in the end. Seems like its going to be a very very good story and I anxiously await for the next part. This part definitely did not disappoint.
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2009 21:45 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What should I say? You know how to write an excellent story.
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 11:01 PST
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I am thoroughly enjoying this. I always like stories that give a good twist on the usual crossovers. One question though: who's your first horseman, the conqueror or plague? The former is what is originally written in Revelations, the latter came from somewhere else. Well, have fun nonetheless. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Reviewed By: TJG On: December 13, 2008 21:50 PST
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Interesting story. Ranma should consider unsealing the Sen Kens and revise them from Ways of the Thief to the Ways of the Assassin as a counter to War.
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Title: Another good update...
Reviewed By: Lerris On: December 13, 2008 20:25 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, this is another good update. It probably wouldn't hurt to post this on the the other main fanfiction site as well, if you want a bit more feedback...
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Title: borgrabbit
Reviewed By: borgrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 19:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, eager to see more! While not exactly a cliff hanger, the foreshadowing is looming monstrously large on a bloody horizon. Nyerk nyerk nyerk. Wes
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2008 15:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2008 09:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Title: Very well done
Reviewed By: Lerris On: November 19, 2008 16:47 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall this is a good start. My only problem was that I had printed off a few chapters to read, read them, came back to read a bit more before work, and found out there wasn't any more just yet.. Of course, things have a habit of getting harder after the introduction bit is done...
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Reviewed By: Moton [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2008 21:46 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are right, there are a lot of ranma/sailor moon crossover stories and while many are not so great, a few are extremely well done. This is shaping up to be one of those, I really like the beginning so far. Keep up the good work.
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