| "Heartless" Reviews/Comments [ 136 ] |
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Title: oriental-pearl
Reviewed By: oriental-pearl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 23:36 EST
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you had me doing a mini happy dance when i saw that you had updated so quickly. this was a great chapter! in the beginning of the story i thought at first that kagome had somehow lost her memories of inuyasha. and then in the last two chapters i thought that he might've been talking about kikyo the whole time. but now... the whole osuwari thing... OMG. hahaha. please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 10:47 EST
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I love this story. Chapter 10 what can I say Inuyasha is a "Heartless" S.O.B. I hope Kagome does get away and go home. Will Inuyasha follow her? Will he go down the well? Please update this story ASAP!!!! LOL ;)
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 02, 2009 10:21 EST
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Great chapter. I wonder how Kagome will be able to leave that castle with all those demons and preistess around? Will she be able to go "home" again? Update this story soon.
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 01:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! But will Inuyasha ever fall in love with Kagome? What Inuyasha is doing to her is awfull! I hope she escapes and somehow gets back to the well.
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Title: oriental-pearl
Reviewed By: oriental-pearl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2009 20:07 EST
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hi there! i have to tell you how much i love your stories! especially this one. poor kagome. i can't imagine how she's going to get bakc home wihtout getting caught. please update soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2008 05:34 EST
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there are times one cannot hear through the noise. quite frustrating. ♠ i sense that the keiko has some real bias against all youkai. one wonders if kikyo was either a relative or a pupil and if she was injured because she was somehow responsible for kikyo's death because 'kikyo willingly polluted herself with a hanyou, making herself a whore'. one who assumes the youkai is evil without looking at the heart and without realizing that there are just as many evil humans as youkai, willingly throw themselves into the abyss of evil. ~ i just twisted some nietzsche!--then again, he hated women. ♣ great stuff as always! ♥ ginny
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: December 28, 2008 16:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is beautifully wriiten. this is one of the best story's written so far, it will probably continue the way it's coming along. it's so sad that kagome gave her self away, but who wouldn't when it comes to inuyasha *winks* hehe, but i want to know whats going on in his mind, now that he knows what he's done. OMG I'm so excited for u to update. I can't wait, so please, please update as soon as possible XD!!!!!!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: GoldenDust [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 07:09 EST
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I love this story so much! It's sexy, exciting and full of mystery that I look forward to each chapter as soon as I finish the last sentence! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 05:05 EST
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sorry i repeated one twice so i'll suggest another few: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ao0dHUgCuVw ♣ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AmQm4pOyGzs ♠ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=btUJh640ysk
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2008 04:45 EST
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most people read and never review. i'm not sure why that is. there are times when i don't have time or can think of absolutely nothing to say but i usually try to make the effort. i apologize for those who don't review, they don't realize what reviews and input means for someone who puts their work out there. ♥ mediaminer lets you put up whole URL addresses without having to put spaces everywhere and ff.n will let you get away with only having to put spaces after the 'dots' -- examples: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RERXiliJfdI ♣ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vEpISVfUfQw ♠ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DKtYgylfhzE ♥ http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RERXiliJfdI ♣ enjoy above the music!
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Reviewed By: sexxiigurrll0204 [not signed in right now] On: November 21, 2008 00:12 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww...i love it =] it's so cute! update as soon as you can please! thanks =]
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2008 21:01 EST
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update! update! update! please!
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 21:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, and I mean Wow! This is an excellent story! You must update as soon as you can! There aren't many stories that can pull the feel and energy that yours exert when I read it. I love the passion between Inu and Kags. And, yeah, for Sess showing up. I hope Miroku, Sango, and Inu becomes friends again.
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Reviewed By: inuy21 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2008 21:25 EST
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Oh, Sessy finally appears. haha. Can't wait for the next update ^^
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Title: YO!
Reviewed By: BabaTellsFortune On: November 09, 2008 21:14 EST
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Please keep going! your story is awsome!!
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