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Reviewed By: Genie666 On: January 16, 2009 13:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love this story!! Talk about original... If I coulgive you 100 I would. Plz update it soon... will Kagome really leave? Or will Inuyahsa find her in time???
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2009 00:11 EST
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Oh God! I loved it. This is great! I hate to think what is going to happen next. Kagome becomes a pawn of Keiko? Inuyasha finally realizes what a mistake he was making... Will Inuyasha and Kagome ever get together again? Well, I think so considering that a man by the name of Takahashi was kicking Hojo aside at the beginning of this story. I just hope that Inuaysha can redeem himself and I hope Kagome can forgive herself for running away and taking his rosary off. (Though I must say I was hoping that she would take off that damned rosary. Too bad that Inuyasha actually wanted her to use it--which shows the level of his desperation!) Now I must wonder about the spell and the potion. It was apparently to bring back her memories. Ahh...but it was too bad that Inuyasha didn't tell her the truth--if he did she would have understood where he was coming from. Ah! Such angst! Please deliver us a happy ending! And please write again soon.
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Reviewed By: caitypeach22 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 23:30 EST
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I am sincerely taken with your romantic tale of adventure and angst. You've sewn in many facets of the plot and characters that makes this story almost novel-like. The depth of the emotions and psyches of both Inuyasha and Kagome urges your audience to laugh, cry, swoon, and curse at them. Not many authors can acheive this, so you are truly gifted! And don't worry about not having enough reviews. My stories are the same, but the reviews that get posted are the ones with the most meaning and insight. May inspiration grace your imagination!
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2009 03:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope he finds her soon! :3
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 18:25 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful story, I'm so glued to it I just can't stop reading! XD
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Reviewed By: Haily [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2009 03:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 1 is awesome! I'm hooked, you got your self a fan. Keep up the wonderful work! :3
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 21:42 EST
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Oh, don't get me wrong. I do love the concept of the potion because it gives a angst feeling because I don't know if it will do more bad than good. I love that Miroku chooses his words carefully. (After reading Chap. 11, I went to reread the rest of the chaps again.) Miroku and Sango, of course, do not hold any grudges against Inuyasha and vice versa. I don't know how much Miroku and Sango believes in Kieko's words, but even so, they have worked and traveled with Inuyasha. Everything seemed to fall together with Shippou and Kirara. Sango and Miroku couldn't since they obviously still have feelings for Kirara and Shippou and obviously Inuyasha. I love your story concept. Please keep on updating. Don't let your readers wait long. Everybody understands that everybody has other lives besides writing fanfics, but don't wait so long to update that you lose readers or fans of your story.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 19:19 EST
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Really enjoyed reading it. Very interesting concept
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Reviewed By: SailorEarth [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2009 17:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your story. I suspected that your story would have been a continuation story from the end of the manga. I just couldn't figure it out because of Keiko and other things like Inuyasha himself. I wish he hadn't made Kagome drink the potion, but he is desperate. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: New Fan On: January 03, 2009 18:19 EST
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I still don't like Inu right now. He has hurt Kagome deeply and it will be a while before she get over that. When will he realized that she is no longer at the castle? Update soon.
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 11:39 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for updating so soon. Again a great chapter I'm glad Kagome got away poor thing I was crying with her. As for Inuyasha how will he fix this, most of all will Kagome forgive him? Again great chapter keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Aozora_Tennyo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 03:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! I love it!!! =D It's been forever since I've found a fanfiction that has had me on the edge of my seat like this one has! It's 3:46AM and I can't believe that I've stayed up this late just to finish what you have up, lol. I have a feeling that words are being twisted to mean things that mean otherwise? Or something to that affect. Like.. yea. She is who he thinks she is but she doesn't know that? If that made no sense, I'm sorry because I know what I'm talking about, lol. ^____^;; Good job!
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: January 03, 2009 03:29 EST
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GAH!!! so sad, yet so good. poor inuyasha, wait poor kagome, it's so suspensful at the situation that niether of them knows eachothers real true background, so things get really intence, which is why i love this story, i can't wait until they come to conclusions with eachother, I'm so excited for that to come. this story is truly amazing, i can;t say that enough XD i have to say i really appreciate that u update so frequently, i love it!XD. can't wait until the next update. YEAH FOR GREATNESS!!!!!
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Title: Oh snap!
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2009 01:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I admit it, you had me fooled, even though you do have this story listed as 'Continuation' rather than 'Alternate Universe'. *Bows down to your greatness* I had to go double-check that bit in the first chapter about her memory loss...and then Miroku's surprised reaction when she introduced herself...you sly dog you! This isn't an AU at all (although I was still loving it when I thought it was). Now I'm super-duper pumped even more so for the next chapter! And then the next, and then the next! No wonder Inuyasha got so angry when she said what she said after their lovemaking.
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Reviewed By: Ohm Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2009 23:42 EST
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Dammit, I think I know where you're going with this, and between the last chapter and this one, you've totally got me bummed out, lol. From the way you're writing so far, it appears a happy ending is coming however, so I'll stick it out...
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