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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 01:44 EST
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oooh I love how you ended the chapter. Very dramatic! Although now I really want Kagome to go insane with miko powers and blast everyone. hehe. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2009 00:28 EST
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Bwwwwaaa Ha ha! Oh poor Inuyasha! Now you'll really need to give him two lemons in Heartless. Not that I wouldn't mind seeing two lemons in Sandroid! Yeah! Looking forward to that one. Well, as I mentioned earlier, I hope that Kagome kicks Keiko's butt! And I loved the way Kagome remembered. And my heart is going pitter patter with the way Inuyasha confessed that it was Kagome that he wanted all along. Too bad he STILL didn't say that he loved her. Oh well, I hope he gets around to spilling the beans later. And I hope they rescue their kids. YEAH! Loved it. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 23:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Inuyasha has a new subjugation spell, well can't Kagome just break it since she is the most powerful spiritual human being in the Inuyasha universe? At least it is implied in the Inuyasha cannon and this story is surprisingly faithful to the cannon so...why doesn't Kagome break the subjugation spell, explain this whole conflict is a mistake, find her missing children and then have a whole bunch more with Inuyasha! It sounds like a good plan to me. Well thanks for updating and I hope you are and continue to do well. Your fan, Zach
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: Jackthedog On: January 24, 2009 23:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I was kinda pissed, I thought his dead mate was Kikyo and he was trying to bring her back...blah blah blah, its been done way too many times, but you threw in the twist that its kagome, interesting...can't wait to read more
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Title: um, wow!
Reviewed By: taixi On: January 24, 2009 04:32 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, this most recent chapter (Ch. 12) shocked me so much that I couldn't even review right away. I had to process what happened and then come back to leave a review. I can honestly say that I did NOT see that coming! True, way back when I read Ch. 1, I thought perhaps Kagome had been to the past and then for some reason forgot about her adventures and started her new life. But as the story proceeded, I came to accept that this was simply an AU setting, and in this story, she hadn't actually visited the past before. I completely bought into your hints that Kikyo (rather than Kagome) was the "mate" Inuyasha wanted back. So when I read your one-shot and then this chapter, I was blindsided (in a good way, if that's possible). Great job leading your readers (at the very least, me) down the path of misdirection. And overall a great story!
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Reviewed By: Akuneko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 20:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I very very much love this story. I can't wait to see how it unfolds!
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 01:19 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That was a great chapter! I hate keiko. I wonder where kagome and Inuyashas kids are? You're story is wonderfull! I just hope we get a happy ending. Tragic endings kind of suck the life out of me.
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Reviewed By: nicc85 On: January 22, 2009 00:48 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm really loving this story. so much suspense. can't wait for the next chapter
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Title: ahhhh!
Reviewed By: sarvale On: January 22, 2009 00:14 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my oily crackers! im becoming obssesed with this story. I love the plot, I love the characters (in thir OC sorta way), I love the drama, & I absolutely love the romance, even though there isnt much right now... I hope that Inuyasha catches kagome before she gets close to the betch... but anyways, keep up the good work and update soon, mostly because I chack every day for such update and im starting to get tired...
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Reviewed By: Moonlit Showers [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 20:33 EST
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aahhh now it is all explained. Poor Inuyasha, I really hope he finds Kagome and fixes things with her. I love how this story seemed like an AU at first but how it's really not. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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Title: oriental-pearl
Reviewed By: oriental-pearl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 20:31 EST
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oh my goodness. stupid keiko. never saw that coming. i was just wondeirng how old kagome and inuyasha would be at this point in your story? aaahh i thought that your story took was a differnt version of kagome's return to the feudal era. but nonetheless, everything is awesome. i've been feeling so sick lately and it wasn't until last night that my nose bgan to be clogged up and a sore throat =( your story really cheered me up! now i have to go read a bunch of textbooks. update sooooooon!!! oh yeah congrats on your nominations!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 18:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me tell you something if I could give you an award right now I fuckin would. This whole story just blew me away. After the last chapter I thought Inuyasha was the "Heartless" one but It was Keiko she started all the and I now understand it when he just wanted to hear the comand to sit from Kagome. They ask the reviews to rate the story from one to ten .....100 is my overall rating. Please update soon, please.
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Reviewed By: Jessie Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2009 18:34 EST
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Okay... this review will be short... well, it's not a review really, it's more or like a blurb. I am not at InuYasha anymore. I was scared there for a sec.
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Reviewed By: TuxedoUranus89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 10:34 EST
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Congratulations Karaumea-your story Heartless has been nominated for both Best Characterization and Best Drama at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008! This is only the first step in the process though-all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they're here for anyone who is interested. If you would like to learn more, keep abreast of your story's progress, or perhaps even join the IYFG and participate in our proceedings yourself, visit our website at Inuyashafanguild.com (or search "Inuyasha FanGuild" if you cannot access the link). And feel free to contact a moderator if you have any questions-their contact info is available on the site. Congratulations again! InitialA/TuxedoUranus89
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Reviewed By: Inu_Does_Me [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2009 23:53 EST
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So InuYasha really is just using Kagome to get Kikyou back?! Well that pisses me off. Are tricking me? Is that really whats happening or is maybe Kagome is his long lost mate and not Kikyou? If you won't email me the answer then please write another chapter asap because right now Im ripping my hair out with frustration here!!!
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