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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2009 02:19 EDT
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Damn that persistant bastard! He just ruined a fluffy moment! Wah! Why did you have to cut it just when it was getting good?.........oh well... amazingly awesome chapter. Best I've thing I've read since school started. Thanks for uploading and patiently awaiting the next chappie. *yes, patiently waiting*.............
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 12:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got caught up - and I'm really loving your story - which is saying a lot because I have been rather disappointed with fan fics as of late. I do think you should wrap up the stoy. If you have other ideas - do a sequel! Can't wait to see how it plays out next chapter - especially when Inu sees her in that kimono! I know it's going to be great! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Miss Megan On: August 10, 2009 01:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh lord, please keep this going as long as possible lol I adore this story so much. Your writing is fabulous; it's so easy to get into! Haha, I don't know how many times I've re-read this story while waiting for new chapters to come out. Please, don't let this one end in the next two chapters ;)
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Reviewed By: Laur On: August 08, 2009 12:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, I'm tearing up from this. The end of the chapter was so bittersweet. I have missed this story so much. My favourite fan fic by far. I want more (and as said by Magenta and Columbia in Rocky Horror: more, more, more!)
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 01:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, we want more! More to come. Definitely. Lol. Wonderful chapter. (I always knew his mom was a smart woman) If you do have to end it soon-ish, we'll understand... But that doesn't mean we have to be happy about it! Lol.
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Reviewed By: nowyouseemenowyoudont [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 21:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more, more, more more more more more. i think i'm going crazy, this is really good please post more soon! in the mean time i'll try and be patient... but that's impossible for me -_-;
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhh! Evil chliffhanger! Lol! But I wonder what inuyasha will do when he sees her again. I can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
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Reviewed By: IDoInuyasha31 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes..a new Chapter. First, congrats on the exams. Always nice to get them done, though I can't imagine why you would have writters block..hummm LOL Yep I guess I am a degree Veteran and I am now crazy enough to go back and get yet another one starting this fall. I'm starting a degree collection since I can't find a job :) On with the story. I have been looking forward to reading this ch ever since I read the last and you did not let me down. I think this has to be my fav ch so far. I was crying like a baby when Kagome was saying bye to Inuyasha. I loved that Inuyasha mom had the knowledge that Kagome was the person to take care of the odler Inuyasha. Oh and the items she gave Kagome..didn't see them comming. I can't wait to see how inuyasha reacts when Kagome comes back, esp. with the kimono. OOO I can hardly wait. Though he is a guy it might take him time to figure out that and with the trying to save Kagome thing happening. If you haven't already guessed I say continue you writting of this story. Your ideas have been great so far and there is no doubt they will continue that way. P.S. I would like to put my order in for one child Inuyasha to be delivered to me ASAP :) He's just sooo cute.
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: August 03, 2009 23:04 EDT
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Please keep the ideas dont end it too soon XD. i have to say the last chapter is sad. but i just can't wait until the next chapter, this story is amazing i can't wait until all of them are complete just dont end it in like two chapters, this story needs to continue please and thank you secret
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: jfeulner [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 20:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again another amazing chapter. First off, congrats on passing all of your exams, and we really can't blame you for the writer's block, of course it is the summer, and its time to relax and not think of school!! anyway. I would love to see more chapters to this fanfic, definitely try out those ideas. Hope to read more soon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 17:58 EDT
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TT^TT NO!!!! that was a sad cliffhanger! That was really really well written. I want to know what happerns know. *wails like a litte kid* can't wait for the next chapter. Hope your writer's block eases up. You really made my day. That was so absolutely wonderfully well written!
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Reviewed By: psyco_chick32 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 17:13 EDT
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Eeeeee! Lil' InuYasha is so PRECIOUS, getting all jealous of... LOL Himself in the future! *snickers* Awwww I want a mini-Yasha all of my own to snuggle! Izayoi is a very wise woman indeed *nodsnods* I squeed aloud when he jumped into the fight against the boar! Ooooh now I wonder if InuYasha's been waiting for her return... and will recognize the kimono and realize it wasn't Kikyou! Eeee and with Izayoi's "Please take care of InuYasha" OMG *claps* PLUS I just realized she's holding him so if InuYasha is waiting he might scent himself (as a child) on her... eeeee! GAH NO I NEED MORE!
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Reviewed By: Kagome_rocks On: August 03, 2009 15:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was kinda sad but loved it update soon
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Title: I've missed you so!
Reviewed By: Laur On: July 03, 2009 13:37 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I lost my computer! So I finally am using a public one and I saw that there are new chapters since the last time I could go online. YAY! The last one was adorable. I hope all the tests went well. Enjoy the fireworks!
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Reviewed By: Angel At Risk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2009 11:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter! I loved the smell comment. It's like he's in the you have cooties stage all boys go through. Very wonderful!
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