| "You Lose, Miko!" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShinkanNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2009 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm yes I did enjoy this chapter...I still think that your going a little fast it needs more meat...more in depth scenes...more dialog...but other then that it was very entertaining...
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Reviewed By: delunatic On: March 08, 2009 09:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read more!Kagome is really trying to push Hiei's buttons!
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: March 07, 2009 19:03 EST
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Hoho, I can just see those random attacks coming up now, and Mama Higurashi just in the background ignoring them while Souta cheers them on like its some video game XD
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2009 02:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay- I finally caved. I've been seeing this fic posted for weeks now and only just decided to read it (you know how many other things are on my alert list?). I'm insane to actually even think of subscribing to a new story with everything else I have to finish but hell- I'm probably more 'mental' than Hiei thinks Kagome is. Keep up the good work! -Dusken_Dreamer
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The second chapter was every bit as good as the first. ^_^ I loved the meeting between Kagome and Genkai. Once again, you captured the character's way of speaking very well. And I loved the way you made sure we all remembered the setting is japan with the comment "This apple seemed to have fallen in a different prefecture altogether!" Brilliant touch. ^_~ Her first meeting with Hiei was certainly memorable. I think that was a very likely way for them to meet, too. They both reacted exactly the way I would expect them to. Having Kurama rush in and attack her, too, merely reinforced Kagome's determination to protect the others. That's the Kagome I love. Hiei's comment at the end cracked me up, too. Obviously, these two got off on the wrong foot with each other. Love it!
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Reviewed By: ShinkanNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 00:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...not bad it seems a little rushed but the story has promise...i'll look forward to more
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: PrincessRock323 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 14:58 EST
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Chappie two and three are great! This is suh good story!
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Reviewed By: my3rdeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 07:28 EST
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nice...i can't wait for more.i love hiei and kagome pairing,
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 16:26 EST
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I really like the way you captured my attention with the very first two sentences. "Kagome was going soft. She knew it." It immediately drew me in to see in what way she felt she was going soft: physically? in her schoolwork? In her dealings with Inuyasha or Shippou? I knew this was a Hiei/Kagome piece, so could it have something to do with how she dealt with HIM? It was a great hook. ^_^ My favorite element in this part of the story (first chapter) is the way you wrote her grandfather. I think you captured him perfectly. The dialogue between them and the whole family setting was just so right and very engaging and appealing. Wonderful! ^_^
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2009 02:59 EST
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this is a great story so far, i wonder how koenma will react to kagome
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: February 27, 2009 06:48 EST
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Oooh sounds promising
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Title: Highly interesting!
Reviewed By: milenalupin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2009 15:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very well in character. Love the mutual distrust of Genkai and Kagome, both thinking along the same line: "can't be worth shit if she's recommended by Higurashi ojiichan..." Love the Hiei and Kurama part, too. Go, Miko, get'em!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan(nli) On: February 25, 2009 13:24 EST
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Oh, I like it ^^ This story is really interesting, and isn't too much like all the other Genkai-trains-Kagome ones! Keep up the good work, good luck on your next update!!
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Reviewed By: PrincessRock323 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 20:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for chappie two!
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Title: Add More
Reviewed By: Vampire_Bride [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 12:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my oh me, i'm the first review?! well anyways, i can't wait till you come out with the second chapter!
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