| "You Lose, Miko!" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jenn @))* On: December 03, 2010 08:52 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very well written and has a good storyline to it. It makes me laugh sometimes and is developing very nicely. Please continue to update. |
Reviewed By: Elfgurl96 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2010 12:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good. I liked that last chapter. It was kinda funny with Eri and Kurama. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: KATIE 83 On: February 21, 2010 09:23 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this story! Not only was it well written and well thought out, but it was just a really good idea and so much fun to read!! When will you update again?
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Title: More please!
Reviewed By: Pyra Sanada [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2009 15:40 EST
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Please please please update this one soon! It's a great story!
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Pyra Sanada [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2009 14:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story so far!! I can see why this story won an award! The interactions between Kagome and Hiei and Kurama are hilarious!
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Reviewed By: Kurai-kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 18:31 EDT
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oh wow i really love this story plz update when you can i will be looking forward to more of it
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Reviewed By: az On: September 13, 2009 03:47 EDT
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this is a really great story! please update it soon!
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Reviewed By: ryuuhime88 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 20:28 EDT
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tee hee i love hiei kag fics.... and yours in no exception please update soon
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2009 17:32 EDT
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*hops up n down* Loves it loves it loves it! *runs off to draw Hiei/Kagome scenes*
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Reviewed By: ktshabatie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2009 01:46 EDT
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Congratulations, Dyquem! Your story You Lose, Miko! has been nominated by the Inuyasha FanGuild for Best Crossover for the first quarter of 2009. If you would like to track the progress of your story through the rest of the nominations, seconding, and voting process, or simply find out more about the IYFG and perhaps join yourself, you can find everything you need to know on our website: www.inuyashafanguild.com If you have any other questions, don't hesitate to contact our moderators at IYFGModerator@gmail.com. Congratulations again! -- IYFG Beta Group
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Reviewed By: Lizy On: April 29, 2009 00:17 EDT
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Wow, I'm really glad you uploaded this. I'm always looking for new YuYu-Inuyasha crossovers, but I seldom find anything worth reading. This is (for a change) well writtten, and actually has a good plot. I really enjoyed it. Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 18:41 EDT
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This latest chapter was such a treat! I had to read it 3 times before writing up this review. ^_^ The humor throughout this just bubbled over and put me in a great mood. (And the eye candy was yummy, too. ^_~) I loved the way the cliffy played out. Hiei froze and Kagome felt strong youki at the shrine and just assumed the worst. Little did she know Hiei froze because he was puzzled/pissed to recognize Kurama there. And Kagome unintentionally stroked Kurama's ego when she mentioned his youki felt really strong. I could just see the smile spread across his face, while a frown creased Hiei's brow. LOL! Good for Mama for confronting Hiei! He gave her something to think about, though, didn't he? And I think you brought up a point that was true through the manga. "She's a powerful miko, onna. Youkai will always be drawn to her. She must train or you will lose her." Youkai ARE always drawn to her, and I don't think it's just for the Shikon no tama, either. Then when the flowers are pointed out to Kagome, Hiei was ON! He absolutely cracked me up. Don't touch those. Kurama's plants bite." He made Kagome and her Mama very cautious and a little suspicious. Kurama was able to reassure them, though--at least about the flowers. *snicker* THEN Hiei piped up with "It WAS considerate of Kurama to bring your mother flowers; very appropriate, too. He IS over 1,000 years old." LMAO! Now THAT gave both Kagome and her Mama cause for pause again. And it got even BETTER!! I never would have believed it, but it did! Trying to explain away his age, Kurama had to tell them what he really is and how he came to be an avatar. "He stole a body like he stole Shippou's picture?" Kagome was so horrified by the thought. ROFL!!! That whole part was just brilliantly done. Kurama's explanation was really good, too, btw. ^_~ He did manage to salvage a bit of the day with his smooth "Without Youko, I would never have met you." Kitsune through and through. ^_^ Then we get to encounter the eye candy with Kagome and her friends. Your descriptions of the guys were fabulous! And I loved the way you gave a cultural slant to their ogling with "prime Kobe beef on the hoof." LOL! I was just waiting for Yusuke to stick his foot in his mouth by spouting out something about demons or the Makai any minute. I think it is VERY likely that he would be the type to do something like that because he just doesn't think about the fact that everybody doesn't run in his circles. I also liked the way Kurama was affronted by Eri's assumption that they could call him "Kurama-kun," too. I really, really loved the way everything got quiet right when Kagome was asking them to stop talking about her non-existent love life. THAT was so real--how many times has something like that happened in real life? (Way too many!) I giggled at Kagome's musings about whether or not Hiei's pants would fall down if she used her miko energy to burn off those belts. Next time we chat, remind me to send you a link to a great pic. ^_~ I love it that Hiei didn't even acknowledge the other girls when he walked up to the table and Eri introduced herself. Very IC. "Your eyes--You have amazing colored eyes. Where did you get them?" "My mother." Kagome thought she hadn't realized he such a sense of humor, but I don't think he was joking. LOL! This chapter was just such a pleasure from beginning to end. Thank you so much for entertaining us!
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Reviewed By: my3rdeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 06:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice...but why i got this funny feeling about eri??it's seem like she become something,you know like rival or jealousy friend.are you planing something about eri character?wow...nice!me like iT!
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Reviewed By: ice vixen x (not signed in) On: April 26, 2009 01:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great as always. Glad to she kag's friends got to see the beauts she gets to play with. lol. I was really glad to see hiei came for her too. it is funny that kagome got mad about the who spirit thing when kurama had gone there to get on her good side. keep up the great work... ^_~
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 00:21 EDT
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I really like this, thanks for breaking the cliffy. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Will we find out who the cringer in the restaurant is in the next chapter? Also just an FYI but I think honorifics are like name-chan, etc instead of name space chan, etc. like Genkai-sensei.
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