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| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Title: chapter 28
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2009 13:30 CDT
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we're laying the floor and i feel like i've been beat up-- taking a break. ♣ i take it that the party didn't go too bad for her. i'm thinking that kagome probably doesn't know that her sister is on meds and having mental/emotional problems? i know more people who are on antidepressants and a few on antipsychotics- it's better people know, not only for support but just in case something happens... ♥
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven (not logged in) On: September 17, 2009 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soaking up the sun, while ive been soaking up the rain?? thats not fair lol anyways, seen that you havent brought up Sota, i was starting to think that you made him grown up and made him WR, but then again he really doesnt have any white to begin with... maybe its Sesshy or even his dad.... LOL awww its killing me!!!
| Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2009 20:55 CDT
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MMMM...I know where this is going...
| Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 16, 2009 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Didn't expect another update so soon! Woot, super exciting about the move in scene then ^^Poor Kikyo, I know someone in her kinda situation- the younger sis getting all the glory. Oh I know, this summer has been so busy! I meant to get so much writing done and i didn't! That's ok, I thrive on the waiting ^^ And I will wait! Oh, super congrats for your nominations, you deserved it! Can't wait for the next chappy as always!
| Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 14:26 CDT
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Woot! An update! Don't worry, sluggish updates is expected at this time of year, what with all the stuff going on (I myself am swamped with work, classes, and homework). But it's nice to see this updated! By the way, the suspense is killing me. And goddangit, when is Kikyo gonna meet Inuyasha? With the intensity of their meeting that you're giving us, I'm beginning to suspect White Rose really is Inuyasha. Hmmmmm... Thanks again for your wonderful story!
| Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 15, 2009 13:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shucks, and I thought we finally going to see Inu! I'm convinced now he is WR, but hey, I'm maybe just hoping for more drama (I'm a total junkie for it hehe). Lovely to see an update on this fic, I missed it! Good luck with the next chappy, keep up the great work ^^ (and for once, I didn't feel hungry, because I actually had chocolate cake before I read this fic! Freaky :P)
| Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 14:31 CDT
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Wow did not expect it to go in that direction... I am really curious to see what is gonna happen next. Sorry I was a bit behind and had to read the last few chapters all at once.
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know...I've been thinking this for a while now, but I'm REALLY beginning to think it. I think...*whispers* white rose is Inuyasha! Listen, I can't beleive how much you update every day! Even if the chapters are short, it must take it out on you! Don't worry, I'll be waiting patiently for whenever you choose to update! Take your time, and don't exhuast yourself! Enjoy your summer! Meh, I hate power cuts! Loved this chappy, as all the others! And chocolate cake...mmm. I'm just about to go out for dinner, and you know, if there's chocolate cake, I'm soooo having it! (You can tell I've totally not got a sweet tooth, right? :P) I'm glad Kikyo on medication- hopefully that will help her pull through! But if white rose is really who I think he is....eeeks! *meltdown!* Just wanted to comment on Lydia's review: Yes, maybe this Kikyo is more sympathetic and such. However, this story isn't cannon- it's AU, seeing how Kagome and Kikyo are sisters, Kikyo isn't dead, etc. So i think Kikyo can be portrayed however the author wants her to be ^^ Okay, that's my rant for today! ^^ Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan x
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2009 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
take as much time as you need, we will be all here waiting ^____^ and i wonder how Kikyo will act when she goes and meets the 'couples'... and hmm an A?? hmmm trying to think here... you didnt use Bankotsu, have you?? the hell your using Hakudoshi lol wait you going by the anime or the manga??
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 21:19 CDT
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she couldn't just say--'i'm not up to crowds right now, how about we meet over coffee or dinner or something?' i'm sure her sis would be agreeable. ♣ well, you can update less often, i'm sure we'll live with less frequent chapters-- just don't forget!! ~♥~
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh. Well that explains a lot!! Poor Kikyo. I wonder what happens now? And this party. Hmm. I've had bad and good experiences at new year parties, so I have a feeling something hellava big is going to happen!! Wahhh! If it's white chocolate chip, I may pass out :P But I really need to try out those recipies, i'll let you know how I get on hehe! No white rose in this chapter! Aww. Hopefully we'll be seeing him soon! Of course I'll keep sending you the good vibes ^^ This review isn't going to be as long- just heard the news about Michael Jackson, I'm in deep shock! Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan p.s. thanks for taking the time to email your reply ^^
| Title: I don't write a lot of reviews. I'm lazy :P
Reviewed By: Lidia On: June 25, 2009 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually do Kikyo stories. I don't hate Kikyo, I just don't like her. That whole wandering around stealing souls and talking to yourself for five episodes out of the season sort of bores me to tears. So naturally I find her character pretty irritating. I have tried to give Kikyo stories a try. They usually suck. This one is actually good. Not my favorite story but I'm surprised I've read this much considering when I read Kikyo's name I tend to shy away from reading at all. But a good story is a good story and you have one. Be proud. I actually find that Kagome's kind of a selfish bitch in this story. In that last chapter when she asks what happened. Let's wait until Inuyasha and she get married. Then let a couple of thugs beat him to death, leave her with nothing, and see how many parties she wants to go out to. The Kikyo you write is too lenient and forgiving with her. But I guess that's a change from the usual bitchy Kikyo. :P
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 17:47 CDT
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medication only does so much, takes the edge off, makes one like a zombie- especially the anti-psychotic meds, then once you get used to the effect they up the dosage. well, if she can't, she can't-- no use in overstressing her already precarious hold on reality. -- she really should tell her sister, mental illness has less stigma when people are open and honest about it. there is nothing to be ashamed about. ♥
| Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 16:36 CDT
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Thank you for responding! Sorry if I came off rude or ill mannered at first, but I was trying to demonstrate how your story pulled me in even though I didn't think I'd like it. But, anyway, gosh dang the story's getting really interesting now! I am itching to see how Onigumo responds to all this. Itching!
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like my friend is away coz shes seeing things but nothing what Kikyo is.. anyways i ccant get to see Wicked.. stupid parents lol im tyring to go through the names in my head, but i dont know how you will choose for White Rose lol but sticking with Sesshomaru =P
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 20:13 CDT
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i prefer the term 'reality challenged'. ♣ one hopes the guy can help her-- or explain why she's ready to be shipped off to the funny farm. ♥
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 19:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, another update!! You spoil us, you really do. And make me feel guilty, seeing how i haven't updated in a month (you do it the smart way though! I spend a month writing a chapter thats about 8000 words long. Sooo much harder to edit and get up ^.^;) Well, I'm really glad I read this fic, you really have opened my eyes to Kikyo! I'm pretty much a neutral too, its just rare to see Kikyo in a good light in fanfiction (and if she is, she's always major OC!) Oh don't worry, I will definitely be sticking around! And omg, sticky buns? Yeah, I'm gonna have to start eating sugar while I read your updates! ^^ It's 1.14 am and I'm now craving buttermilk cake! (my tummy actual just rummbled there :P) Well, I'll keep sending you the good vibes, and hoping your dad gets better. I know how it feels a little, my dad had surgery due to problems with his back, and he couldn't move for 6 months. It's not a nice thing to experience your parent being like that! So, to the chappy! Onigumo...wow, really hope he can help Kikyo! And it's interesting how the white rose and Joe have merged. I think Joe is Naraku, so its pretty interesting how Onigumi could be the key to helping her stop seeing her dead husband, seeing how they are linked in the manga. And poor white rose! He seems startled by Kikyo's presence! I think he has a little crush :P And the imagined white rose is so possessive, its so cute! Okay, I'm really rambling now (usually my reviews are along the lines of, 'loved it! can't wait for update', so I don't know what's gotten into me!) You don't have to reply to this online musing, I think I'm delerious with hunger for cakes you are describing! :P If Kikyo ever makes cookies I *will* be licking the screen! Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan x p.s must try that muffin recipe soon! XD
| Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You know, at first I saw this story and dismissed it completely. An American setting, a kinda creepy stalker-like premise, first person perspective (just my personal pet peeve). But then I started reading it and I found myself really enjoying the story. Really enjoying the story. The way you've brought the story out is ingeniously interesting and enjoyably different. Thank you for the story! :)
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know its funny that this story is kinda hitting home at the moment.. lol anyways i wanted to go to Wicked.. *growls to self* .... *eye twitches* i need to know who White Rose is! its killing me lol and so Kikyo is 'seeing' her White Rose and 'seeing' Naraku right??
| Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 04:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My mouth is watering for a cup cake and its 10am ^^ Loved the update! I really can't wait to see if Kikyo can be fixed! Aww, I'm sorry to hear you're having rough time. *Good vibes* heading your way! Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan x p.s. i liked AR posted at the end of the chapter ^^
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 00:40 CDT
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yeah, when my ex was abusing me~ i told no one. (he's dead now) --not good to live in secret. ♥
| Title: Craving muffins!
Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah, that's it so far?? I've been sitting reading this all night, gobbling it up like Kikyo's blueberry muffins! I have to say, what you did with this fic was very clever. I'm not so much a Kikyo hater (I just find her easy to play the baddy when i write!) and I would never have looked at this fic if you had stated outright it was a Kikyo fic. So great job with that, because I would have kicked myself if I had missed this gem! You have great writing talent- your story flows so naturally, the characters emotions and feelings interlink with the plot so beautifully, it's like a detailed and perfect weave in a scarf. I really hope Kikyo and the white rose get together! I can't wait for the next update! Glad to hear your dad's surgery went well, and hope everything is going ok in real life! There's nothing worse when readers forget the author has a life outside their story! ^^ Awaiting the new chapter with patience and anticipation, your new fan, Kawaii-Keke-Chan x
| Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 12:03 CDT
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i'm sorry, i really am. i was thinking (after i read someone's review)- remember when kikyou was reanimated in canon?-- well her 'joe/bob' was reanimated-- and then i couldn't stop laughing-- i don't know why i found that so funny (i guess maybe something about 'turnabout is fair play'?) and i am sorry. i need help too! ♣ so happy she's seeking help- the first step to getting well is admitting you have a problem. ~&hearts~
| Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hang on... is "Joe" her White Rose? or is she seeing him... O.o aghhh im confused..
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