| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lainita [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2010 20:10 CST
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thaaaaanks for your hard work!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 10:17 CST
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so the spider is still interested, and now he's either hurt or angry. one would think that he knows of her mental illness and his resemblance to her late fiance, he should accept that 'they' would never work. still... ♥
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2009 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
n'awwww she thinks she met someone!! N'AWWW
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2009 01:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hes sooo going to disappear in the morning, after i read the 'hes mine now.. right?' and i liked it =] it wasnt like the hardcore lemon, that can sometimes be soo wrong LOL but HAHA a guy who is always at the club who doesnt have condoms... he must be a lonely guy... XD anyways how many chapters left 4?? thats right, im counting down until i know his name XD hmmm T..... T.... BLAH only Tashio comes into my head lol
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 06:08 CST
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that was quick! i know they had seen eachother around for eight months(?), but she doesn't even know his name... or he isn't real and she's been dancing by herself. ♣ thanks for the warning, you'll hear from me for the chapter after the next. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 05:59 CST
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sorry dear, i have a tendency to skim over descriptions (i know, bad habit. but i've been reading fan fiction far too long and too many bad fics that contain entirely too much purple prose describing characters i already know, along with clothing, furnishing, and decor that most descriptions just get a cursory glance, even when the prose is far from purple). so you see, when lead characters on which the story is based have white hair, and her love interest is called 'white rose'... i guess assumptions are bad if one doesn't pay attention to all the clues. ♣ i'm really behind, on with the next chapter! ♥
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2009 05:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
geez making me want to be in MR. T's arms LOL but bring on the lemon!!! been waiting for this LOL and *jumps up and down* OMG YOU TYPED HIS NAME?! BAWWW!!! in what 5 chapters... *shakes with excitment* soo cant wait now XD but how weird... i cant wait for a Kikyo lemon... never thought ill see that day XD
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2009 22:27 CST
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Yay, you're updating again! And woot! Exciting things are happening! What a good time to come in too, (chapter 41). I get to wait in wonderful anticipation. YES. I will enjoy this! Thank you, once again! :D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2009 00:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm have ive been right in my guessing?? lol and T... just T.... that doesnt help!! lol and Oooo is our lemony next?? =]
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Reviewed By: lanita On: November 21, 2009 08:51 CST
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thanx for updating!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 08:25 CST
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Black hair, tan skin, chocolate eyes. why was i expecting white hair? umm, maybe because you called him 'white rose'. --tell me, what color hair does inuyasha have? ♣ you really got me good there! ♥
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 07:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you dont know how much this is driving me nuts!! but OMG HES THERE!!! OMG OMG OMG!!! Oo i hope you will update soon.... and its still killing me to know who it is LOL
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2009 04:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i didnt got to read the new chapters... ive in the middle of my exams lol, just finished one today and my last is next monday, and all the emails piled up LOL anyways black hair, tan skin, chocolate eyes.... and no one is demons etc etc in the story?? hmmmm what colour was Inuyasha's hair again?? im determined to work this out LOL and omg their going clubbing?? OMG i soo want to know what happened XD
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2009 14:40 CDT
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Clubs aren't always the best ideas. Too much tangible drama oozing all around. But, then, this story wouldn't be exciting without all that drama. Thanks again for a wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 18:00 CDT
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one wonders why they didn't just let the answering machine get it... o.0 -- is he avoiding kagome's sister? ♥
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