"The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu (not logged in and i'll lose everything i typed if i logged in now)= On: April 26, 2009 21:14 CDT Comment/Review: NOO! don't put such pressure on me. it would be better that you didn't mention reviewers than bring attention to the single one-- or better yet, put up your replies from other sites. yeah, make 'em feel bad for not reviewing when apparently so many other people did. PEOPLE SHOULD REVIEW, DAMNIT!! ♠ now that that was out of my system... ♣ so yasha got to be the hero, and now he's very protective of her. ♦ i always thought that as the manga progressed the depiction of kykiou had started to soften although she was still determined and a bit cold she quit trying to kill kagome shortly after she took her shards. i think she realized that kagome would never stand in the way of yasha's happiness even if it meant losing him. i think there is a biblical principal that says to be nice to those ridiculing or persecuting you and it will heap hot coals on their heads... or something like that-- that's what kagome did with kikyou *shrugs* ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 21:51 CDT Comment/Review: well, i can only think of a small few that i would describe as 'white rose' in 'iy' but i'm not opposed to pairing kikyo to someone in another anime... um-- enishi from 'rurouni kenshin' would be an interesting replacement for naraku, or 'narato's kakashi... (hey, this is fun!=D) ♠ seriously i'm happy the yash/kag is back together and i like the fact that you're not portraying kikyou as most fan-fic authors do. it's nice to see her as something more human than a soul sucking female monster in a human girl disguise. ♥
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 11:38 CDT Comment/Review: seems like yasha was a bit worse for wear since the breakup. it was nice of kikyou for facilitating the reunion and possible reconciliation. one hopes she isn't too squicked out by having 'feelings' for her sister's love-- that seems like a whole 'nother can of worms. ♥
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 11:12 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Just wanted to tell you I'm still reading and still enjoying! Kikyo really is trying to make up for how she reacted which was a little extreme. I'm suprised Kagome dumped her relationship with Inuyasha so quickly! I know Kikyo is important to her but to do that without even talking to Kikyo and trying to work things out before taking that drastice step...porr Inu must think he's pretty unimportant right now. I hope she can convince him to give her a second chance.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 05:49 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: well thats good ^____^ and i n'awww at the end :P that was sweet of Kikyo to do :P i kinda died when i read that Kagome broke up with Inuyasha... sounds like my cousin lol doing things without thinking first LOL anyways OOo i got a idea... do this story in Kikyo's view, and then do through Kagome's eyes watching Kikyo and Naraku ^__^ and i know what you mean... im behind in homework aswell XD
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 04:27 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *giggles* fluffy guard dog :P so im guessing were going to hear Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship?? and plus, are their demons in this? or just normal humans?? anyways im surprise (even if its Kikyo) that i can sit here and read it XD after all the stories with Kikyo being a bitch lol
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 17:54 CDT Comment/Review: at least her sis takes precedence. ♦ one likes the 'coffee shop' atmosphere. i especially like when the place has live music or poetry- sip an iced latte- listen to some folk/jazz tunes... ♣ so are you gonna post a recipe for the chocolate death? >=P ♥
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 06:16 CDT Comment/Review: Wow, that was pretty harsh of Inu, especially considering that they he was saying it to her sister. If they are supposed to be close .. he might consider that his rough reaction could cause a rift in their relationship. Would he hurt Kagome like that? I would say both Kagome and Kikyo are to blame for the issues between them and it is between them to deal with it. Will it come to that point that someone will have to choose? oh... that would be very angsty!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 03:54 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oooo snap! lol Kikyo got a big mouth full of it from Inuyasha :P i always go N'awww when Inuyasha goes all protective over Kagome.. too cute :P anyways i shall think that it is Sesshy :D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 18:52 CDT Comment/Review: nah, just a lame attempt at humor. there are a few times i can guess a story's outcome but i usually like to find out as it progresses. as i said before, i don't care who's with who as long as inuyasha is with kagome-- ever. ♥ it's good that she realizes that he's at least protective of kagome and wants the best for her (also seems he comforted her the night before too). ♥
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 03:13 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: hmmm oki seen that ive known to read stories about other characters, i think that the 'him' is Sesshomaru ^___^ *giggles* it seems that i dont think i can hate this Kikyo :P
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 23:10 CDT Comment/Review: Yeah.....well sorry on the double reply. My fault for double clicking but that's besides the point. I have to say though, there's two glaring mistakes that I noticed... in Exhalent, liking diner, and not that it isn't understandable or anything it's just a comment....*ducks* please don't get mad. *peeks* nice chappie though! :D
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 21:48 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hey...just caught up on the last couple chapters! Honestly I wasn't thinking Kikyo/Kagome...I was thinking either Kagura/Kanna but Kanna's character just isn't...um...anything let alone bubbly! LOL! I also thought about Rin as the sister but didn't know who the main charater would be in that circumstance. Kikyo as the owner makes sense tho...she is the tragic character...the one who almost had love, almost had all her dreams only to have them dashed. I was thinking that the strife between the sisters was maybe because the younger sister 'stole' the receipies and sold them. That idea was reinforced slightly when she asked to look at the receipies. Now that the characters are revealed I think the "him" is Inuyasha and the trouble between Kikyo and Kagome will be that she is taking him away from Kikyo in every way...even the scones. Also, he is the first ray of light that started to shine back in her life...like she was starting to get her soul back...now Kagome has that as well. And I'm probably totally wrong! LOL! Really enjoying your story!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 14:04 CDT Comment/Review: one hopes she won't be too depressed/angry if her 'white rose' happens to be her sister's beau. he should have a brother who would be her other half >=P (cut from the same cloth) ♣ i'm sure kagome knows she didn't mean it and will come back with a peace offering to make her sister feel all loved. maybe a big stuffed 'dog'? ♥
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Title: from one diehard yash/kag to another Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 03:48 CDT Comment/Review: actually i could care less about anyone else's love life (i am so shallow and one dimensional-- with blinders on). ♣ i hadn't reviewed since i was out of state caring for a sick relative. sorry. ♥ kikyo's perspective huh? i always thought she would be perfect with sesshoumaru- both stoic, unemotional (emotionally constipated), and so proper. really if she was taller with white hair... >=D ♥
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