| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! I'm torn. I really, really want Inu to be WR, but I also, really REALLY don't. Because he and Kagome seem pretty serious...and I don't want Kikyo's heart broken. But OTOH, if he isn't WR, who is??? Now I'm craving pancakes! Gah! Can't wait for more, this fic always keeps me guessing ^^
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 22:18 CDT
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shouldn't inuyasha know the she and kagome are sisters. they look just alike and I'm pretty sure kagome said that her sister that works in the cafe right. he should know are he the dumbest fool in the world.
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Reviewed By: lanita On: October 08, 2009 19:54 CDT
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ooo, thats a lesson learned. poor kagome... anyways, thanx as always for updating ^^
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Reviewed By: aprildiamond [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 18:13 CDT
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Okay, please make something happen next update, the story is grinding to a halt. I think we all know White Rose is Inuyasha - make it happen already....
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: October 08, 2009 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahhh! We may be finally getting closer to the Inuyasha/White Rose mystery!!Dun dun dun!!! Can't wait ^^ Oooh, good luck with the wedding, hope you have a great day! Ack, and good luck with Bio, I had to get a tutor for that too when I did it! Btw, seeing how you've named a character 'White Rose' and all...you should check out Yoko from Yu Yu Hakusho...he is literally a 'White Rose'...you'll see what I mean! The fic I'm writing just now has him in it, maybe you could check it out when you have the time ;) Its a IY X YYH cross mind you :P Can't wait for update, but will wait patiently!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 00:11 CDT
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i would have assumed that she would have met him at their holiday party--new years? so guy could very well be inuyasha-- won't that be a kick in the head! *starts singing dean martin youtube.com/watch?v=huKSm0tAvhs ♥;
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 11:58 CDT
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Woo, new update! And some of the drama's been resolved too! Thanks again for a great chapter (I know, not much else to say).
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2009 01:07 CDT
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ahh-- finally getting 'a round tuit'-- reading/catching up (laying flooring, baseboards, and trim)-- sorry! ♣ wow, stuff really happened. bad kagome and inuyasha!! doing stuff like that... ♠ so-- sephiroth/white haired guy hasn't been identified yet. =p am i to assume that the lemon (that i won't be reading) will all be in our 'reality challenged' sister's head? or are you giving her a real one? ♦ just ignore me, it's late and my joints ache. good stuff though. ♥
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Reviewed By: lanita On: October 06, 2009 16:34 CDT
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that was a horrible place to leave us hanging!! but thanx for updating, i love reading this story.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oki so i bursts into laughter when i read 'We had sex' and the 'i-i dont remember!' Oo god that killed me XD hmmm can we know what hair WR has or do we already know?? OOo i hope i didnt missed it >.> anyways about the teachers thing i know what you mean... like i only have 1 more week of holidays then im back to school, 2 weeks of revision and then our exams, but who the hell gives us a freaking test on the holidays?! BAHHHH!! oops sorry about that lol good luck with it =D
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Reviewed By: lanita On: September 23, 2009 15:34 CDT
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love the opening!! hehe thanx as always for updating!
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 11:02 CDT
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Ooo goodness, all these new developments! Drama really is the best category. Excitement! Romance! Sadness! Everything under one big soap opera of a boat. Anyway, thanks for the new chapter!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiKekeChan NLI On: September 23, 2009 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no! Oh no nononononono!! Kagome, you silly girl! How can you not remember! Eeeeks, this is getting more messy by the minute...but I love it!! ^^ Don't worry, college stuff can get demanding, just take your time, it's more important ^^
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2009 03:36 CDT
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OMG... Inu with short black hair.. no tell me it is not true... NNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. Well does that mean he can not possibly be the WR? huh? Is there some sort of twist?
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Reviewed By: MontyCello [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2009 13:04 CDT
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I kinda really expected this, but it's still heart-wrenching to see. This is sad. By the way, how does college seem to you? Normal college or community? I'm going to community so that I can transfer to a (rather prestigious) four-year college after two years, but I'm kinda curious to see what it may be like for someone going right to four-year. Like living in a dorm. Poll: I think that would actually be kind of called for. After all, Kikyo is the main character of this story and a lemon I don't think will be too strange. If you think it's appropriate, then go for it. :D Thanks again for another chapter!
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