| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 23:07 CDT
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Oh! Nice story! Kikyo's pov is rarely done, so I give you props for originality! Yay! Cooking is always a plus when it comes to love! I eagerly await the next chappie! Was Naraku Kikyo's former husband? Is the mysterious poet Koga? Ginta? Hakkaku? ......yeah....ixnay on the last two. Muso?......even more impossible.....-.-; Oh....how about Hojo! That would be a laugh. Somehow I can't imagine Kikyo and Hojo together. Well enough of my babbling! Greatly written chapter and I patiently await for the upcoming updates :)
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 23:07 CDT
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Oh! Nice story! Kikyo's pov is rarely done, so I give you props for originality! Yay! Cooking is always a plus when it comes to love! I eagerly await the next chappie! Was Naraku Kikyo's former husband? Is the mysterious poet Koga? Ginta? Hakkaku? ......yeah....ixnay on the last two. Muso?......even more impossible.....-.-; Oh....how about Hojo! That would be a laugh. Somehow I can't imagine Kikyo and Hojo together. Well enough of my babbling! Greatly written chapter and I patiently await for the upcoming updates :)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA.... i failed lol anyways ill keep reading, seeing that you didnt made Kikyo into a bitch XD and now i see it... Kagome doesnt come in the store when Inuyasha is there... b'awwww dont make Inuyasha cheat on Kagome! *looks around* Ooooo dear god... should of had shoved Kikyo with Koga lol :D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 18:48 CDT
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doesn't his 'messy hair' give it away? good stuff. one wonders if the little sis has started seeing 'him'-- if she had told sis she was interested in 'him' or made some overture toward 'him'... ~ ♬
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Reviewed By: BD On: April 17, 2009 13:51 CDT
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(Sorry for not signing in, Opera is being a little bitch) I really love this story. You've managed to capture the audience all without having used a single name of the Inu-Yasha cast. I'm very impressed with your abiltity to put together a feeling that we are so familiar with the characters and yet we still don't even know who they are! And now for my guesses! Kikyou is the store owner, Kagome is the younger sister, the customer is Inu-Yasha... I have no idea who the ex-fiance is/was.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm.... oki i think i got another idea XD the poem you put in there made me think a little more :P it could be Kagome (owner), Inuyasha('the guy') Kikyo (sister) and Koga (ex).. seen that all we know is the 'owner' is just guessing that the 'guy' is writting poem.. but in a weird way i see Sesshy writting and Rin the owner.... god im just going to shut up now... lol
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm...some more puzzle pieces. LOL I have a few ideas about what might have happened between the sisters. One of the interesting things about this story so far is since we don't know who the characters are for sure yet we don't load them up with preconceived ideas based on the characters in series. Anyway...looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2009 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sad as it is... i get the feeling its Sango, Kagome is the sister and Miroku is thw writer.. though i dont know who would be Sango's ex husband... i could never see Sango and Koga.. but im always usually wrong lol :P but Ooo god how long are you going to make us suffer?? lol
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the format you are using...the short chapters are like little flashes of memory...the pieces of the puzzle. I'm really wondering what happened between the sisters. I hadn't noticed too many tense problems but there were a couple times I got mixed up with the pronouns. I had to reread a couple of passages...I know it's really hard without any names tho. Awesome writing!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2009 07:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo i like ^____^ killing me trying to figure out whos who XD
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 22:22 CDT
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well joe-bob, it's an interesting little mystery of who's who. ♥
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intriguing. Interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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