| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 06:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bursts into laughter* "Want me to put your clothes in the dryer?" Oooo thats great! i cracked up laughing LOL and good luck for ya dad =)
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked how you changed it. I think it made it a lot simpler to understand, great job!!! Oh and I do hope things get better with your family. Dad having heart surgery does not sound too fun...
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2009 00:11 CDT
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HE HE HE HE HE HE HE HE HE
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: inulover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful fic. Beautifully written. I was worried at first because I thought it might be a Kag/Sess fic which I generally steer clear of. (I tell one of my friends who prefers them that they'll rot her brain. But I'm just kidding)Anyway, this concept is orginal and interesting you had me talking to myself,(something that worries my roomate) I can't wait until the next update.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 19:25 CDT
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*blush* kyaah! oh gods that would be so embarassing to say :D Very nice chappie indeed. I thank you deeply for taking the time to write us an update. Yay update! The rain, the smells, the strong wafting senct of coffee is definitely a great visual!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2009 19:04 CDT
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ah, it's been pouring here too. ♣ i wanna knooww!! i'm gonna whine. =P ♥;
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2009 01:16 CDT
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I just read the last four postings sorry I am behind. I love them. Now I am thinking that the WR is either InuYasha or maybe possibly Sesshy. Maybe Inu and Sesshy live together in manhatta? and he is getting the extra coffe and scone for his brother? Just a thought... I can't wait to read what you actually have in mind... HUGS!!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 16:00 CDT
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i'm thinking that if her obsession is yasha, kagome would have mentioned "what a conincidence! yasha comes here on saturdays and sundays, maybe he's seen your guy!" ♥ lol
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2009 04:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol its like me when i see/read Kaname-Sama XD and a bad pen pal?? awww we all get lazy once in a life time XD Ooo were in our 2nd term... we start at Feb and finish in oct.. but were in autumn and it already feels like winter T_T its what all stories have these days.. Kikyo = bitch so it adds to my hatred towards her lol and oo god why do i think that Kagome is just going to walk up to White Rose and ask him out for Kikyo XD
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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ya Kikyo letting Kagome take over her love life does sound scary!!! lol... can't wait to see what you have next...i am really looking forward to how you play this out!!! oh and yes i am talking about Savwah Fehrr...sorry i guess i forgot to mention it...but i only have 2 stories up so i guess it just slipped my mind!!! :b
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 18:12 CDT
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*laughs* really great story you got going. I just can't imagine Kikyou turning to a melting glop of goo over a man. Still the way you describe the characters and the dialogue (which is so hillarious) is so interesting. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i giggled when Kikyo started to think about her White Rose XD too funny :P and OMG did she just said that to Kagome?? blah i cant wait XD and actually im in Australia :P and if i do take it, ill try to keep Kikyo in the light :P
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Title: loving it!!
Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 02:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just have to say that i love this story!!! it is amazing...but i keep thinking that kikyo's white rose is InuYasha...its just these little things you drop and it correlates with Kagome...but i hope not!!! i wouldn't want to see heartbreak and sadness cause i know that would be the case for like everyone involved...also i just wanted to thank you again for reading and reviewing my story "Was It Worth It" a while back...i am working on a new story so if you have anytime to check it out and give me some advice that would be amazing!!! Anyways can't wait to see what will happen next. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2009 00:44 CDT
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sounds like a bit of a crush is turning into a somewhat unhealthy obsession. for all she knows, the guy's married-- or gay. "If he was bringing this to another woman, I knew that I would have to rectify the situation before it got out of hand." methinks she has graduated to unhealthy obsession. o_O
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im sorry i didnt review the other chapter... school kinda caught up with me >.> 20 days left?? till what?? wait hold on.. you must be on the other side, so that means your going into your summer holidays!?! NOT COOL!! a interesting chapter?? OOOoooo i must read XD and Oo ill love to try and tackle it lol, but its got to be after that one im doing... killing me lol anyways Oooo thats how they met, must be some bad memories for Kikyo... and bloody hell! this is KILLING me... maybe its Onigumo.... *starts to think*
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