| "The Cafe In Manahatta" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to tell you I'm still reading and still enjoying! Kikyo really is trying to make up for how she reacted which was a little extreme. I'm suprised Kagome dumped her relationship with Inuyasha so quickly! I know Kikyo is important to her but to do that without even talking to Kikyo and trying to work things out before taking that drastice step...porr Inu must think he's pretty unimportant right now. I hope she can convince him to give her a second chance.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2009 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well thats good ^____^ and i n'awww at the end :P that was sweet of Kikyo to do :P i kinda died when i read that Kagome broke up with Inuyasha... sounds like my cousin lol doing things without thinking first LOL anyways OOo i got a idea... do this story in Kikyo's view, and then do through Kagome's eyes watching Kikyo and Naraku ^__^ and i know what you mean... im behind in homework aswell XD
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2009 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* fluffy guard dog :P so im guessing were going to hear Kagome's and Inuyasha's relationship?? and plus, are their demons in this? or just normal humans?? anyways im surprise (even if its Kikyo) that i can sit here and read it XD after all the stories with Kikyo being a bitch lol
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 17:54 CDT
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at least her sis takes precedence. ♦ one likes the 'coffee shop' atmosphere. i especially like when the place has live music or poetry- sip an iced latte- listen to some folk/jazz tunes... ♣ so are you gonna post a recipe for the chocolate death? >=P ♥
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Reviewed By: deipurple [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 06:16 CDT
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Wow, that was pretty harsh of Inu, especially considering that they he was saying it to her sister. If they are supposed to be close .. he might consider that his rough reaction could cause a rift in their relationship. Would he hurt Kagome like that? I would say both Kagome and Kikyo are to blame for the issues between them and it is between them to deal with it. Will it come to that point that someone will have to choose? oh... that would be very angsty!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2009 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo snap! lol Kikyo got a big mouth full of it from Inuyasha :P i always go N'awww when Inuyasha goes all protective over Kagome.. too cute :P anyways i shall think that it is Sesshy :D
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 18:52 CDT
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nah, just a lame attempt at humor. there are a few times i can guess a story's outcome but i usually like to find out as it progresses. as i said before, i don't care who's with who as long as inuyasha is with kagome-- ever. ♥ it's good that she realizes that he's at least protective of kagome and wants the best for her (also seems he comforted her the night before too). ♥
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2009 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmm oki seen that ive known to read stories about other characters, i think that the 'him' is Sesshomaru ^___^ *giggles* it seems that i dont think i can hate this Kikyo :P
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 23:10 CDT
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Yeah.....well sorry on the double reply. My fault for double clicking but that's besides the point. I have to say though, there's two glaring mistakes that I noticed... in Exhalent, liking diner, and not that it isn't understandable or anything it's just a comment....*ducks* please don't get mad. *peeks* nice chappie though! :D
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey...just caught up on the last couple chapters! Honestly I wasn't thinking Kikyo/Kagome...I was thinking either Kagura/Kanna but Kanna's character just isn't...um...anything let alone bubbly! LOL! I also thought about Rin as the sister but didn't know who the main charater would be in that circumstance. Kikyo as the owner makes sense tho...she is the tragic character...the one who almost had love, almost had all her dreams only to have them dashed. I was thinking that the strife between the sisters was maybe because the younger sister 'stole' the receipies and sold them. That idea was reinforced slightly when she asked to look at the receipies. Now that the characters are revealed I think the "him" is Inuyasha and the trouble between Kikyo and Kagome will be that she is taking him away from Kikyo in every way...even the scones. Also, he is the first ray of light that started to shine back in her life...like she was starting to get her soul back...now Kagome has that as well. And I'm probably totally wrong! LOL! Really enjoying your story!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 14:04 CDT
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one hopes she won't be too depressed/angry if her 'white rose' happens to be her sister's beau. he should have a brother who would be her other half >=P (cut from the same cloth) ♣ i'm sure kagome knows she didn't mean it and will come back with a peace offering to make her sister feel all loved. maybe a big stuffed 'dog'? ♥
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Title: from one diehard yash/kag to another
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2009 03:48 CDT
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actually i could care less about anyone else's love life (i am so shallow and one dimensional-- with blinders on). ♣ i hadn't reviewed since i was out of state caring for a sick relative. sorry. ♥ kikyo's perspective huh? i always thought she would be perfect with sesshoumaru- both stoic, unemotional (emotionally constipated), and so proper. really if she was taller with white hair... >=D ♥
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 23:07 CDT
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Oh! Nice story! Kikyo's pov is rarely done, so I give you props for originality! Yay! Cooking is always a plus when it comes to love! I eagerly await the next chappie! Was Naraku Kikyo's former husband? Is the mysterious poet Koga? Ginta? Hakkaku? ......yeah....ixnay on the last two. Muso?......even more impossible.....-.-; Oh....how about Hojo! That would be a laugh. Somehow I can't imagine Kikyo and Hojo together. Well enough of my babbling! Greatly written chapter and I patiently await for the upcoming updates :)
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 23:07 CDT
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Oh! Nice story! Kikyo's pov is rarely done, so I give you props for originality! Yay! Cooking is always a plus when it comes to love! I eagerly await the next chappie! Was Naraku Kikyo's former husband? Is the mysterious poet Koga? Ginta? Hakkaku? ......yeah....ixnay on the last two. Muso?......even more impossible.....-.-; Oh....how about Hojo! That would be a laugh. Somehow I can't imagine Kikyo and Hojo together. Well enough of my babbling! Greatly written chapter and I patiently await for the upcoming updates :)
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2009 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHA.... i failed lol anyways ill keep reading, seeing that you didnt made Kikyo into a bitch XD and now i see it... Kagome doesnt come in the store when Inuyasha is there... b'awwww dont make Inuyasha cheat on Kagome! *looks around* Ooooo dear god... should of had shoved Kikyo with Koga lol :D
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