| "Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Somber On: April 15, 2011 01:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotta say, this story has got me hooked! Loooove the whole Kagura/Sesshomaru tryst going on! I know it's kinda more about Inuyasha and Kagome, (which is a pairing I love and really like the diffrent why you're having them come together... and that Inuyasha's a bit...naughtier in this fic lol...) but I'm also I huge Kagura/Sessh fan and find there isn't many good fics out there with them together so I', really enjoying this! Pleeeease keep up the awesome work! Can't wait for another chap! |
Reviewed By: Somber On: April 15, 2011 01:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've gotta say, this story has got me hooked! Loooove the whole Kagura/Sesshomaru tryst going on! I know it's kinda more about Inuyasha and Kagome, (which is a pairing I love and really like the diffrent why you're having them come together... and that Inuyasha's a bit...naughtier in this fic lol...) but I'm also I huge Kagura/Sessh fan and find there isn't many good fics out there with them together so I', really enjoying this! Pleeeease keep up the awesome work! Can't wait for another chap! |
Title: SoulSistersWriters@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: IluvInuFanFics [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2011 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find this story interesting to say the least. Keep up the great work and I love the way InuYasha is...messing with her. =) |
Reviewed By: inuyasha-obsessed167 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2011 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How to describe what I'm thinking? I just love this fic! The plotline is intriguing and I absolutely adore Inuyasha's naughty side. Their banter has me continuously smiling and laughing (luckily my roommate has headphones in). Can't wait to see what Inuyasha has planned for Kagome and how that all plays out. I know it was already said, but do just watch out for spelling and such. I'm sure you meant "racist", not "raciest". Do continue with your style of alternating between perspectives though. It truly does add an intimate connection to the characters, which I always love in a good fic. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Mystified Starlight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2011 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this fic so far! Please write more soon! :) |
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2011 17:30 EDT
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OMG, I just got to the end of chapter five and now I'm REALLY hooked! What's Sesshoumaru going to do to Inuyasha! Is there going to be a war! And what will Kagome do when she finds out the truth about who Inuyasha really is! AND I WANT SESSHOUMARU TO BE MATES WITH KAGURA DAMMIT! Update soon please or my brain's going to implode from the curiosity! |
Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2011 17:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOh, forbidden love or sex with complications...sexy. I REALLY like how Sesshoumaru and Kagura have their little power play in the bedroom and I'm curious to see where Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship is going to go, especially with Sesshoumaru there. Also, I'm SO glad you put Sess and Kagura together, because they WORK and not SessRin...ew. I'm hooked! It's rare for me to find a fic I enjoy but the sex scenes are hot and power play and backdrop of responsibilities are interesting. I would only say be mindful of your working. It's conscience, not conscious. It's an easy thing to miss, but annoying thing to read, so to keep readers coming, try to work on that, because this story is too intriguing to leave because of that kind of small thing. Looking forward to new chapters. Peace. |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2011 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I'm not confused, I think this is going awesomely. Clearly, Inuyasha can suddenly, somehow just sense that he is meant for Kagome, although somehow I get the feeling that happened a bit too easily so probably when he turns hanyou again he's going to initially chalk it up to his lame human emotions and try to convince himself he only wants to fuck her. Still, he knows about the prophecy, one point...he was one of the four who could do it, two points...and we already know from Sesshoumaru's thoughts that if she were unfaithful to him it would screw everything up unless somebody else mated her. Well then, problem solved! I shall still thoroughly enjoy the rollercoaster as it all unravels. =) |
Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze(nli) On: April 08, 2011 20:26 EDT
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Wonderful! I am pleasantly surprised by the quickness of the updates and the thoughtfulness involved. By splitting events and their conclusions into different chapters you manage to weave a intricate plot affected drastically by Force majeure, i.e. Act of God. The split between what Kagome and Sesshoumaru deem appropriate is already to be seen. Difference of opinions regarding core values is usually one of the reasons couples split up, or in this case, mates. The Prophecy is a bit unfair to Kagome, though... anyway, just out curiousity, while the Prophecy statest that Kagome cannot have physical relations wiht others, but what does it say about her heart? Anyway, I'm looking eagerly forward to the next chapter. Good luck writing, and I hope to see an update soon! |
Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2011 10:46 EDT
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I like the set up and the playful attraction between Kagome and Inuyasha. Well written and the world building is coming together. When Shippo commented about their similarity, it might've made more sense for him to comment on their scent first, and then their looks. Looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2011 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had to come over here and check this one out. Wow! So glad I did! Now I'm totally looking forward to seeing how this one unfolds as well. I mean, it's pretty obvious where you intend upon taking it, but still, I shall certainly enjoy the ride! |
Reviewed By: inu_gurl91 On: April 04, 2011 13:15 EDT
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im so happy that there's already a new chapter!!! ^.^ ur awesome |
Reviewed By: inu_gurl91 On: April 04, 2011 12:07 EDT
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please do keep updating as soon as possible, im excited 2 see how events play out, are u keeping the "brothers" relation or...?? |
Title: Tory
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2011 11:04 EDT
Comment/Review:
It's a Uralic language. I went online to a word translater, like, to translate english words into another language but I didn't like how they came out. Then I remembered a certain language from one of my favorite authors so I looked that up. I didn't want to use french because that just doesn't suit Inuyasha. I'm still looking into the romanian language. I don't know how the word is prounouced though, sorry. Thank you very much for the review. It encourages me to keep writing this story! |
Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2011 05:24 EDT
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Very nice Especially the banter between Inuyasha and Kagome, the whole UST. I am curious, how is the word csitri pronouced, and what is it's origin. Simply from the characters, however, the word looks delicate, fragile, and has a certain bite to it. Does that make sense? Looking forward to an update |
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