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| "Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2011 10:32 EDT
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Holy shit! Okay, well it looks like some of the power of the jewel went into Inuyasha after all, even though Kagome thought she'd stopped it in time. We have both the flickering light that shouldn't have happened and Inuyasha's experience of feeling heat from the kiss travel into him, down his throat, and that ache in his chest as evidence. But as he's laying there dying, I wonder if it's the power of the jewel that's going to save him, or if he's just going to transform, like lilyyasha said. Maybe the power of the jewel will give his youkai side a little nudge, if he's never transformed before? It certainly sounded like neither of them thought he had the ability to turn full-youkai, to either save his life in such situations or otherwise. If Sesshoumaru doesn't know he can transform that would be awesome, for his full-youkai self to show back up for revenge. Not powerful enough to control the jewel, ha! Take that! Super looking forward to the next chapter! :-) | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: April 27, 2011 07:20 EDT
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Damn. Can't wait for chapter 10... | Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: April 27, 2011 02:46 EDT
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Looks like IY's demon form is going to make an appearance.....Sesshomaru is in for the asskicking of a lifetime ;) | Reviewed By: secret35 On: April 26, 2011 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! why did you do that XO lol you need to update ASAP! like now, its too fantastic!!! XD!!!! | Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2011 18:45 EDT
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Oh my... *fans self* that was just.. a yea.. :P | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: April 26, 2011 15:10 EDT
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Awwwwww! wonder what the next chapter will bring! This story is amazing, i love it! Please keep up the great work and update soon! Definately looking forward to it! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2011 00:18 EDT
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Hot damn! I noticed a couple of typos here and there but for getting this beauty out to us without further delay you are forgiven! Glad you had her figure out the hanyou/human thing so fast; we don't need a long drawn out manipulation when we want to get to the good stuff! Sigh...denial is such a powerful thing. Kagome knows damn well what she feels for Inuyasha. Hell, she was even fantasizing about him during sex with Sesshoumaru! Don't tell him that or he'll never let her live it down... But I can understand why she keeps on trying to convince herself it should be impossible. What she doesn't know, yet, is that Inuyasha was one of the other four who could have been her mate, so if she can break free from Sesshoumaru she could legitimately be his. And I agree with Inuyasha, Sesshoumaru is not her true mate because otherwise she wouldn't crave another, and Sesshoumaru wouldn't crave Kagura. Hell, even Sesshoumaru knows that he's not really Kagome's true mate, having put off mating her as long as possible before finally caving for the good of the world. Not that he'll let her go without a fight, possessive bastard. I agree with Shizuka Kaze, Kagome almost definitely will forget to bathe in her haste, and that'll be our cue to sit back and watch the fireworks, LOL. Keep up the awesome work! | Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze(nli) On: April 25, 2011 18:13 EDT
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Oh, w-o-w... I'm speechless! Is it just me, or did it just get really hot in here? And all that without a single article of clothing being shed! Great job! And wonderful potrait of Inuyasha and Kagome; you keep them in character but still manage to add a unique twist to everything. How can Kagome not recognize the bond between them? She should have more familiar with the Prophecy than anybody else... Oh, I can't wait to find out how Sesshoumaru reacts when Kagome returns to the castle and he smells Inuyasha all over her. I'm guessing she's forgotten to take a bath in her haste. Let's wait for the fireworks... | Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2011 22:45 EDT
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Oh, God I'm completley hooked. I swear, I feel like this story was customized for me... it has plot, sex, Sesshoumaru/Kagura, power play, etc all written to perfection. One question though: can Inuyasha change to human whenever he wants? That would be so cool, he can ensnare Kagome with different characteristics that are all him, but something tells me he's going to be in a world of trouble when she finds out. *evil cackle*. That last chapter was seriously hot! Please update soon! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2011 14:57 EDT
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Wonderful update! Even if it turns out Kagura and Sesshoumaru hadn't actually done anything - and why else would she have been there? - he should know better than to allow her at the house. Out of respect for Kagome, even if he just wanted to talk to Kagura he should do it elsewhere. And the nerve of her! Knocking Kagome out of that tree. Did Sesshoumaru even care or wonder about how Kagome was all scratched up? Bastard. I am a little confused though, when 'hanyou' Inuyasha mentioned being Sesshoumaru's brother, because I thought he was pretending that he wasn't related? He already admitted as a human to being Sesshoumaru's brother, which J Luc Pitard is right in that it shouldn't be possible, though if Kagome didn't think to question it then hey, lucky for Inuyasha. But how can 'hanyou' Inuyasha have Sesshoumaru as his only brother, and 'human' Inuyasha have Sesshoumaru as his only brother, without the two Inuyashas being related to each other as well? I suppose...if on the one side they were half-siblings through the same mother, and on the other side half-siblings through the same father, it would technically be possible, but wasn't the suggestion of "none that I claim" to the question of siblings in reference to Sesshoumaru's promiscuous father? Surely his mother hadn't slept around with anybody else. Ah well, but I'm thinking too deeply on it, I think. It's good if it doesn't make sense if you did that on purpose because Inuyasha is going to get caught in his lie as it dawns on Kagome. At any rate, I still love this story regardless, and I'm super looking forward to the next update! | Title: WooHoo!
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2011 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am SOOO loving this! Yea, I am!:P Love the premise of it and the way you've written Yash is simply awesome - the rotten Lil stinker, lol. And should be interesting on how he wins over the Lively Miko, in both his forms, and right under his dear brothers nose, too. Lol.. ah yesh, am total lovin' it! Until next install, update when ya can! ;) | Title: Tory
Reviewed By: Tory [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2011 11:14 EDT
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Thank you all for the wonderful reviews! J Luc Pitard, yes, throw in an idea that you'd like for me to MAYBE put into one of the chapters. I'm not promising to do it if the idea doesn't speak to me in the way the story needs to go...but I welcome any ideas my fans want to see. Keep in mind I'm not promising to add anything. If I do, I will put in a note giving the credit to whomever and if I don't, then I don't. But thank you all! You all make it easier to write this story! | Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2011 10:04 EDT
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Poor Kagome! The idea that Sesshoumaru has a human half brother is... not exactly possible seeing as he's a full demon, but since both of them accepted it, she's not questioning it? I love their interactions, both the human and demon side of Inuyasha playing their mind games with Kagome. I imagine both will end up falling deeper in love than they expect. Then everyone will have some major choices to make. Hopefully, it will all end messily (can I put in a vote for a moresome scene, before all is said and done?) and then happily ever after with K/I and S/Kagura. Keep on keeping on!! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2011 07:29 EDT
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Let the games begin, indeed. Even though he's still a pervert in his human form, something tells me his little plan is going to end up backfiring. Oh, he might actually seduce Kagome, eventually, but if he's going to be having regular contact with her on his human nights, I get the feeling he's going to wind up with more than he bargained for. Of course stupid Sesshoumaru would have to go and be all possessive. He doesn't love Kagome, he doesn't even really want Kagome, and he had put off Mating her as long as possible before finally relenting for the good of the country, but yet she's 'his' and nobody can take her away from him. Typical. Still, I think when Inuyasha eventually steals her away, if he can just stop and think for two seconds, Sesshoumaru will realize that giving Kagome to Inuyasha will mean that he and Kagura can have their own happy ending. I am definitely also a Sess/Kagura fan, so I love that little side plot, as well...primarily for the sake of the couple, but also because it provides evidence that Kagome is not truly his after all, despite the fact that the Mating took. She's not really supposed to be his Mate, even though she presently, technically is. But of course, we can't just hand her over to Inuyasha while he only wants to score her and then probably move on once he gets bored. He's got to inadvertently fall in love with her first. Really looking forward to how this is all unfolding! Keep up the awesome work! | Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze(nli) On: April 15, 2011 06:22 EDT
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Ah, yes, let the games begin! | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
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