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| "Prophecy" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] | Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze(nli) On: May 02, 2011 17:48 EDT
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Hi, thank you for taking time to answer my question - I was super curious about that. Just to note, nli stands for 'not logged in'. | Reviewed By: dbzflirt On: May 02, 2011 17:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this story! It's been so long since I read something that I enjoy. I find myself extremely excited when I see an update for this story. Keep up the good work. Anxiously waiting the next chapter. | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: May 02, 2011 11:32 EDT
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Honestly even with the cliffhangers I'm always satisfied with each and every chapter you write, and yet at the end of every one I'm always wanting more. This story is great. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2011 08:18 EDT
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Woo-hoo! So much new information...oh yeah and an awesomely hot sex scene! But before I get to that...so Kagome would eventually die if not Mated to her True Mate? Does Sesshoumaru know that? Ugh, and I hate it when these mystic know-it-alls are always like 'you must discover this on your own'. What if she doesn't figure it out and dies, huh? Would not telling her be better then? LOL, anyway, something tells me that's not going to be a problem. She can't be unfaithful in her body, right? Isn't that what you've said before? So that thing she felt snapping, breaking and fading was her bond with Sesshoumaru, presumably. Good thing Inuyasha is her True Mate. I'm assuming Naraku is also one of the Chosen since he could draw out the jewel's power, and I'm sure we haven't heard the last of him yet, so that'll make for more drama soon enough. I got a little confused on the time line, though, because...and dismissing the Freudian slip of 'full moon' instead of 'new moon' because a lot of fanfic writers make that mistake for some reason...you had said that it was only a few days after his first human night that he wanted to meet with Kagome again, planning on pretending to be the 'human' Inuyasha while keeping to the shadows but of course she knew it was him and that whole challenge of the kiss ensued. Then he was laying there half-dead for what...three days? Then he was at Kaede's for like two... Shouldn't his human night still have been like two and a half more weeks away? I mean, I just figure maybe he was laid up for that long, but Naraku never came back in all that time? Well, I guess that makes sense because we've known Naraku to disappear for large spans of time before, so yeah, no worries. Even if that was just a boo-boo on your part I don't care, because this story is so flippin' awesome! I wasn't sure going in if they were actually going to end up going all the way, but it makes sense that she just couldn't stop himself and that he didn't have a mind to stop himself either, what with them being True Mates and all, even if she doesn't know it and he's in denial. I can't believe Kagome forgot something so important! That only one of the Chosen are her True Mate! I can get how the prophecy lessons were probably boring when she was a child, but that is a rather important bit of information to have not been paying attention about! Ugh, makes me want to smack her upside the head and say 'wake up!' Hehehe, and she knows things aren't right with Sesshoumaru, that they don't act like how Mates are supposed to act, and that he's fucking Kagura on the side...or at least was. Come on, Kagome! Put it together! LOL, so anyway, awesome work like always and I'm super looking forward to the next chapter! :-) | Reviewed By: S On: May 02, 2011 06:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Like the other readers, I'm addicted to this story! So many twists and turns! I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome realizes that Inuyasha is her true Mate :) Your story is amazing! | Reviewed By: lilyyasha On: May 02, 2011 05:44 EDT
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Can't wait for the next chaps! :) | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: May 01, 2011 12:32 EDT
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Loved this chapter! I felt alot of suspense! | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2011 23:35 EDT
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I hadn't been expecting a sex scene, per se, though I had been expecting a cute, awkward moment with blushing and inappropriate comments. But then, I guess waking up just in time to get attacked kind of spoiled the moment. Glad Sesshoumaru showed up, I guess, since he probably saved Kagome's life, though since it's clear he plans on killing Inuyasha again I guess that means the drama's not over yet! Looking forward to the next chapter! | Reviewed By: Shizuka Kaze(nli) On: April 30, 2011 09:46 EDT
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Yeah, there's the turning point! Speaking of which, does Kagome how that there are four creatures that the Jewel had chosen that could mate her? | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2011 23:05 EDT
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I agree with xFinalActsGirlx, your stories are totally addicting! Once again you surprised me, which is a good thing! It's fun guessing at what's going to happen next, but it's also fun being wrong because the author was less predictable than it appeared. Beautiful new update! Oh boy howdy is Sesshoumaru going to want to kill him again after this night is over! LOL, or whenever it is that he finds out Inuyasha is still alive...and covered in Kagome's scent. At least Tetsusaiga is protecting them for the time being. On a side note, I guess I'm sort of glad that Sesshoumaru is trying to do right by Kagome...but come on, fluffy! Why torture yourself? Just give up one of your two women and then you get to have the other one free and clear! The one you really want! Hopefully he'll come to that realization before killing Inuyasha again, although something tells me Kagome won't let that happen. Either Kagome won't or the jewel won't. And on a more amusing secondary side note, super looking forward to seeing what happens when Inuyasha wakes up! ;-) | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: April 29, 2011 22:09 EDT
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All of your stories are really addicting! Every time I see that there's been an update I do a little happy dance! :) | Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: April 28, 2011 10:06 EDT
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I looooooooooove that you update so soon!!! I enjoyed this recent chapter as i the others! I just hope that the next chapter clears up whats going down with the Inuyasha situation. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2011 01:55 EDT
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Yay! A new chapter! I guess my fears have been laid to rest that what happened to Inuyasha hurt Kagome too badly if this is the next day, although that also means Inuyasha didn't go on a crazy full-youkai rampage storming the castle. Perhaps the power of the jewel merely prevented him from dying, so that he passed out for a time but will wake up later surprised that he's still alive? I never thought Sesshoumaru was the bad guy, per se...it does indeed sound like he's doing everything for the greater good, despite his possessiveness. He knows that Inuyasha is Kagome's true mate, so that's a good thing, but it seems to me that he's primarily rejecting that union because he thinks that Inuyasha, as a hanyou, is not truly strong enough to control the power of the jewel. I guess it'll take Inuyasha coming back from the dead and some kind of crazy bat-shit happening that he controls to convince Sesshoumaru that the Prophecy knows what it's doing, LOL. But I'm really loving how this story is unfolding, and how dare Kagura! I get that she wants Sesshoumaru and she's pissed off about Kagome and the Prophecy because if it weren't for them Sesshoumaru would be hers, but that doesn't give her the right to attack Kagome so openly, and good for Sesshoumaru sticking up for Kagome. Whether he likes it or not, she is his mate, at least right now. ;-) | Title: Evil as you are beautiful!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2011 17:44 EDT
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Really terrific chapter. Your pacing is good, with Sesshoumaru's response being swift and terrible for both of our lovers. I could see his youkai saving him and matters taken out of his control. Love the way they remain in character with Kagome trying to stay loyal, Sesshoumaru being honorable- despite that he doesn't want the obligation any more than Kagome- and yet still an asshat. Inuyasha's different, but still recognizable. He just has a lot more self confidence regarding Kagome and her desires than we're used to. Redux: Loved this chapter and eager for more. | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2011 14:21 EDT
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Oh crap...another thought just occurred to me. I don't know why I didn't think of this sooner. But Sesshoumaru had been able to feel what was going on with Kagome and Inuyasha, sort of, because of his connection to the jewel. Because the jewel's power had flared up within Kagome or whatever and they are connected, right? Because he'd had that swore red spot on his chest. What if...with Inuyasha getting run through (straight through the heart no less) Kagome feels it because of a new connection that had formed as a result of Inuyasha getting some of the jewel's power despite her attempt to stop it? What if Sesshoumaru goes back home to find Kagome doubled-over in pain or unconscious? I mean, I have no idea what you're planning, so you go ahead and do whatever you were going to, but I have already been caught off guard by more than one curve ball in this story when I thought I'd known what was going to happen and that potential curve ball just jumped out at me. See what you did! It's hours later and I still can't get this story out of my mind! Damn you! LOL, so keep up the awesome work! | | Pages (5): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 › » ] |
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