| "The Dark Duke" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: bii-chan On: November 22, 2012 08:50 PST
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OOoooooh! you are bad, leaving us hanging. I hope goku kicks vegeta's ass for being so damn stubborn. Great chappie! please,please update soon. |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2012 06:35 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now for the action to start i believe Vegeta is starting to show her cares... can't wait to see what will happen next great job love this story |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2012 05:42 PST
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Omk! Shit is hitting the fan...again..lol. Will they reveal Bulmas secret to Vegeta? Or, will they escape and keep the truth hidden from him, only to be discovered after the babe is born? Hmmm...*smh*, I don't know what you've got hidden up-your-sleeve, but, daaayum, I cannot hardly stand the wait for your next update... I'M SO EXCITED!!! XD |
Title: Love it~~
Reviewed By: KawaiiMeggie On: October 27, 2012 23:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I was so excited to read the newest update, and it definitely doesn't disappoint. I love your cliffhangers and how adorably sweet you make Goku...he's so precious! Hope to see another from you soon. Keep up the great work, dear!! |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2012 01:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of my favorite stories i love the way you write keep up the great work |
Reviewed By: lpwillik [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2012 20:56 PDT
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So glad you are back! You made my day! Hopefully the move went well and you're settling in. I love this story. Each chapter gets me more excited for the next one and to see how everything will finally end up. Take care. And as always, looking forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Kumik0 On: June 30, 2012 10:18 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always great chapter.... The idea you came up with of bulma's predicament on the ledge made me laugh... Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2012 23:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. You can clearly see things from Bulma's pov. I love how you show her confusion and insecurities toward her's and vegeta's relationship. The scientist in her is always over thinking everything. I would love to read how vegeta is feeling throughout this whole ordeal. I can just imagine the plethora of varying emotions running around in his head. Anyway, I'm very happy that you updated, and look forward to a new chapter next week. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2012 00:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find myself giddy with happiness everytime I get an alert that you posted a new chapter. It is truly a treat. I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2012 22:30 PDT
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:-) I just love when Vegeta "feels" emotions!!! Its just too cute to witness him struggle with it. |
Title: awesome
Reviewed By: kramarczuk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2012 13:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story!! i am always waiting for the next chapter and you never disappoint! thanks so much for writing this, you are a great writer! hopefully you keep writing for a long time because this story is developing wonderfully. This story is great when i need a break from studying for finals |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy its ME On: May 05, 2012 09:47 PDT
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Hahaha, did I mention how I love your story? And you style, come to think of it. May your Grandmother rest in peace, and may she rest happy knowing how she inspired her granddauddy to write such compelling romance. ;) |
Reviewed By: Dare2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2012 16:36 PDT
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Finally Bulma and Vegeta understand their love...well somewhat, the ending just took me by surprise, cant wait to see how all this will play out. keep it up :) can't wait for your next update |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2012 22:27 PDT
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I enjoyed the update ... Only, is Lilacs with child? Oh my, that would be ... I honestly don't know!!! Disastrous? Wonderful? If she is, I cant wait to read how you spin it! That old hag!!! Now it will seem like Vegeta is just doing what she wanted by seducing Bulma. And I can just imagine how Bulma will react when she finds out ... Oh ... Cant wait for next update ... |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2012 10:05 PDT
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Oh. My. Gosh. This story is amazing. The kind that relentlessly draws you in leaving no room in your head for anything else other than the characters, the story...and just the plain awesomeness of it. Seriously, big hats off to you. Heh, besides the sourching hot moments between Vegeta and Bulma(which I love more than you know;P), the way you have them interact together while carrying out this spy business is so exciting! I'd love to see them pair off against a situation where they are forced to come together to win. :) Also quick note, I love how you write in V and B's awful communication skills. Makes the parts when they really "talk" so much more satisfying. Keep up the good work! All of us are eagerly waiting for your next update! :) THIS STORY RULES |
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