| "The Dark Duke" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: lpwillik [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2012 19:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! And to answer your question...I can't. I'm torn. I love long chapters (especially when the story is this fantastic)! But I also love regular updates (something to look forward to and all). Love it! |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2012 23:55 PDT
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:-) that was hot!!! Vegeta is such a God ... Anyway, I really just cant wait for the next update!!! S ... |
Title: Bad Bulma!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2012 12:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Bulma is being irational. How could Vegeta not know than he took her Virginity? I don't like this Viridian guy he seem shady, could he be Zhelonie? I hate that Vegeta's grandmother she seem almost as bad as frieza! Will Vegeta try an seduce Bulma again or will Bulma try an seduce him? Will Goku and Chi-Chi get together? Keep Up The Writing 'Cause I Love It |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2012 12:06 PDT
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Oh!!! Although I feel really bad for Bulma I really loved the way she kept up the Ice-Princess act. Only as you said, "How long can that last?" Men are such arses - even Vegeta! And that damn old hag! Urgh!!! I hope she chockes on a bone or something! Is Piccolo the other Green man? Will Vegeta listen to the old hag and seduce Bulma - again? |
Title: great story
Reviewed By: Bianca24 On: March 31, 2012 11:26 PDT
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Hey I love your story keep updating soon please and hey you should definitely make a continuation of the teacher I would love to read what happened the second time please I would really appreciated (^_^)v. |
Reviewed By: su On: March 30, 2012 19:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think they can keep their hands off each for long. Lol! I'm in love with this fic. |
Title: NICE!!!!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2012 17:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait to read any encounters of Bulma and Vegeta on the ship!!! Is there going to be any B/V lemons in the next chapter?! If not in the later chapters?! Also is Goku/Kakkarot going to spar with Vegeta?! Does Frieza come into play in this? Piccolo? Rivalry with Vegeta and Goku/Kakkarot? Chi-Chi/Goku? Little Gohan? Trunks? Am I forgeting anything else? Nope I guess not. Anyway I LOVE THIS IT'S SO DRAMATIC IT KEEPS YOU GUESSING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2012 18:01 PST
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Lol, I really enjoyed the flowers thing ... So what does the old hag know about BV's little love tryst or does she just want to bitch and moan about the ball? Is Piccolo one of the good guys or is he one of Frieza's henchmen or doe she have some of his own deep dark secrets? Ah, sooooo much to look forward to ... but for now, I just cant wait to see how Bulma feels and reacts to Vegeta after their little encounter in the garden! ;-D |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2012 23:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited when I received an update alert for this fic. I'm bummed that we didn't get the b/v confrontation regarding their little tryst. I loved how u integrated some of the other dbz characters. I hope to see another update soon. I want find how bulma will react to everything. |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2012 18:04 PST
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Oh, I just loved the lemon in this one!Finally. I'm assuming that Bulma is a virgin, am I right? I'd really like it to be confirmed and for Vegeta to realize it too as that should shut that sexy mouth of his up ... well for a while at least, until he finds something else to fuss about! Can't wait for the next update!!! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2012 19:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was a good chapter! I don't even smoke and I feel the need for cigarette. I wonder how this will affect their relationship. I have a feeling vegeta's going to try push bulma away, and act like he doesn't care about her. I hope we get another update soon, because I am hooked on this fic. |
Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2012 10:37 PST
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Haven't had a chance to read in awhile, been busy busy busy. I'm absolutely loving what you've done so far. So many writers ignore the environment and the mood so that they can just jump into the action so I love how you're taking the time to paint the picture so wonderfully. Though I have to admit, I'm more than looking forward to a little bit of BV action. Big flips indeed, and it looks like Vegeta has all but admitted that his feelings may be a bit closer to love than lust. Also, here's hoping that Bulma puts the pieces together and figures out the truth about 'Viridian' before he takes advantage of her. Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2012 18:16 PST
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You're evil!!! Lol, just kidding. I enjoyed the chapter and get why you ended it of the way you did. Veggie-kun needs more than Goku and Bulma's innocent relationship to keep him jealous (like a shared kiss between Bulma and Viridian, who really is the Frieza's green spy Zarbon, just an idea) and I love it when he gets all jealous and possessive! Also, I liked how you gave him a reason to ask Bulma to dance, through that old hag!, because I really couldn't see him just asking Bulma to dance for the heck of it! And I didn't feel like it was just a fill in chapter, so good job on that! Plus, you have us all anticipating the next chapter were his Grace and his Lady will have their - no doubt filled with sexual tension and underlying attraction - dance!!! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2012 19:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe, why did you have to end it there? I hope you update soon. Great chapter! |
Reviewed By: Nesshii On: January 22, 2012 21:27 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes we are excited! Let's get this dance party started! lolololol.... |
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