| "The Dark Duke" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2011 18:27 PDT
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Chapter 7: I see that Vegeta realized that he was the only one reacting. Though it's obvious that Bulma didn't react simply out of shock. Both of them seem to be unaware that the other actually has feelings for them, all the better for high tension and I love it. Chapter 8: So not only do we get Chichi in this chapter (speaking Cockney it seems :P ) but if I'm reading this correctly 18 is the widow. Didn't see either of those coming though I guess I should have since Goku needs someone and you brought Krillen along as well. I wonder if Bulma is going to shock the Brits when she actually shows that she's got great manners. That aside I love Vegeta's pain in the chapter. I know that sounds awful but it's true. It's good that his want for Bulma is so strong that he couldn't sleep with the Widow but even better that he finally realizes that for himself. Not to mention that Vegeta's ever active imagination seems to have made things worse for him turning something as innocent as a brother/sister relationship into a secret affair. And it seems that his inner self has already declared Bulma as his own even if he's still only amounting it to lust. It's too bad that he'll be leaving. I really want so more moments between them. Can't wait for more. |
Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: 34surfer On: October 23, 2011 14:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just an amazing fic, I love where u r taking this hope this is updated quickly so we can see what happens next. I just adore this B/V fic! |
Title: amazing
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2011 09:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one amazing tale that u are weaving. I'm totally infatuated with it. I'm glad that vegeta didn't do anything with the widow. He is such denial when it comes to bulma. Also, loved the part where bulma compares vegeta's grandma to the animals at the zoo. Entertaining stuff, lol. Anyway, hope u don't keep us waiting too long for an update. I like the long chapters, so don't u dare change a thing. P.S, Is the widow 18? |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2011 20:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so amazed by how you can weave such a wonderful story. This is like watching a movie. I can totally imagine bulma on deck drooling over vegeta. Shoot, reading your description of him, I was drooling. Lol! I really hope vegeta doesn't sleep with that widow, because I think bulma will be hurt if she finds out. I love the length of your chapters. Don't change a thing, unless u make them longer. Update soon, or might have withdrawls from lack of updates. Lol |
Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2011 09:47 PDT
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Lol, I love how Vegeta wanted to make Bulma moan and groan and shut her eyes and he ended up being the one to do those things. Such a steamy chapter. Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2011 09:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter. Loved the b/v interaction. It was filled with sexual tension. They better get to England soon, or they're going to be rocking the boat. Lol! U mentioned a widow in England. Do I sense a love triangle? Update soon! I'm in love with this story. |
Title: My 2 cents.....
Reviewed By: X0oBuffyo0X [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2011 03:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy! I'm loving the tension between B/V. It's ok to love a particular chapter. If I was writing this, trust me, I'd have my favorites as well. I love Bulma's character. She's so daring. She makes the story exciting! Even though she's a brain, and self-sufficient, Vegeta's always there to catch her. That's so cute! He's protrayed so sexy in this last chapter too(dangerous waves...sorry if it's wrong..hehehe). Climax is building up! I can feel it...lololol. =^.^= Great job with the story! |
Reviewed By: Munny On: August 30, 2011 11:37 PDT
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Wow, i just discovered your story and i'm already hooked ! Please update soon ! You gave V/B a fascinating twist, love every bit of it. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2011 11:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The long journey begins. I can't wait to read more! I hope u update soon. |
Title: My 2 cents
Reviewed By: Nesshii On: August 21, 2011 05:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a huge V/B fan. I love how you put them in a different setting but kept their chemistry the same as others have so popularly used in other fics. I love Vegeta's attitude and Bulma is such a witty girl. The telling of their relationship is such a great read! Please update soon! I hate to be left without material to read. Especially when the story is building up so good! Keep up the good work! Thanks for the creativity! '(^.^)' |
Title: loved it!
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2011 01:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! I loved this chapter! I liked how u had vegeta so calm and collected when he punched Yamcha and then walking away like it was nothing. Priceless! Update soon. I can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2011 10:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeeww I hope there's nothing going on between bulma and goku. I've never really liked goku's character in dbz. It would be awkward if she has relations with him and then his cousin vegeta. Anyway, great chapter! I hope u update soon. Loving this fic so far. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2011 07:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! Why did u have to stop there? Love this story already. Update soon, please. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2011 15:25 PDT
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A British Vegeta? I'd be drooling too, if I was bulma. You are a very talented writer. Your writing really draws a reader into the story. Great job, hope u update soon. |
Title: really interesting
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2011 18:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I've read some of your fics on maddiesan's and really enjoyed them. This story is very interesting so far. I love reading AU B/Vs. Especially period romances. Please continue this story. Love it, love it! |
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