| "The Dark Duke" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2012 18:01 PST
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Lol, I really enjoyed the flowers thing ... So what does the old hag know about BV's little love tryst or does she just want to bitch and moan about the ball? Is Piccolo one of the good guys or is he one of Frieza's henchmen or doe she have some of his own deep dark secrets? Ah, sooooo much to look forward to ... but for now, I just cant wait to see how Bulma feels and reacts to Vegeta after their little encounter in the garden! ;-D |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2012 23:29 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so excited when I received an update alert for this fic. I'm bummed that we didn't get the b/v confrontation regarding their little tryst. I loved how u integrated some of the other dbz characters. I hope to see another update soon. I want find how bulma will react to everything. |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2012 18:04 PST
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Oh, I just loved the lemon in this one!Finally. I'm assuming that Bulma is a virgin, am I right? I'd really like it to be confirmed and for Vegeta to realize it too as that should shut that sexy mouth of his up ... well for a while at least, until he finds something else to fuss about! Can't wait for the next update!!! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2012 19:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was a good chapter! I don't even smoke and I feel the need for cigarette. I wonder how this will affect their relationship. I have a feeling vegeta's going to try push bulma away, and act like he doesn't care about her. I hope we get another update soon, because I am hooked on this fic. |
Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2012 10:37 PST
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Haven't had a chance to read in awhile, been busy busy busy. I'm absolutely loving what you've done so far. So many writers ignore the environment and the mood so that they can just jump into the action so I love how you're taking the time to paint the picture so wonderfully. Though I have to admit, I'm more than looking forward to a little bit of BV action. Big flips indeed, and it looks like Vegeta has all but admitted that his feelings may be a bit closer to love than lust. Also, here's hoping that Bulma puts the pieces together and figures out the truth about 'Viridian' before he takes advantage of her. Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2012 18:16 PST
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You're evil!!! Lol, just kidding. I enjoyed the chapter and get why you ended it of the way you did. Veggie-kun needs more than Goku and Bulma's innocent relationship to keep him jealous (like a shared kiss between Bulma and Viridian, who really is the Frieza's green spy Zarbon, just an idea) and I love it when he gets all jealous and possessive! Also, I liked how you gave him a reason to ask Bulma to dance, through that old hag!, because I really couldn't see him just asking Bulma to dance for the heck of it! And I didn't feel like it was just a fill in chapter, so good job on that! Plus, you have us all anticipating the next chapter were his Grace and his Lady will have their - no doubt filled with sexual tension and underlying attraction - dance!!! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2012 19:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe, why did you have to end it there? I hope you update soon. Great chapter! |
Reviewed By: Nesshii On: January 22, 2012 21:27 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes we are excited! Let's get this dance party started! lolololol.... |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2012 02:46 PST
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We are really getting to the juicy parts now! Cant wait for BV interaction next ... |
Reviewed By: preciousjade76 On: January 14, 2012 16:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! I just love this fic. Even though this chapter didn't have any b/v interaction, I still enjoyed reading it. Hopefully we'll get some b/v interaction in the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2012 07:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a happy girl. First Catgirl updates soon.her fic Vengeance, then in the same night you update this fic. What a wonderful treat. Loved this chapter. Hope to see another update soon. |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2011 19:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first fanfic I've read for the past...wow, past two+ years. And I simply had to say how happy I am for finding your fic first... it's made me remember why I love DBZ so much. The interpersonal relationships between all the characters...especially the old favs is SO FREAKIN FUN TO READ! I hope Bulma continues to show her dominant side to Vegeta... love those scenes. Eagerly looking forward to more from you and Merry Christmas! :) |
Reviewed By: lovesreina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2011 09:14 PST
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I loooove this fic!! I look forward to every update, and I'm glad that you seem to update in a timely manner (something I could very much learn from you, lol!). You're doing justice to the historical romance theme. While I love the scenes with the B/V sexual tension, I also kind of want to see Bulma and Vegeta have some more normal conversations together and get to know each other more on a personal level. We know how lust can take over us physically, and that's always very apparent in most B/V fics, but some of my favorite interactions between Bulma and Vegeta in any fic are ones that are just battles of the minds. You've had a little bit of this but I'd love to see more. I'm also looking forward to reading about Vegeta being Bulma's "sponsor"... Helping her to find a suitor while being super jealous? Will there be a rival character? And does Vegeta get to beat him up in the end?! Haha, I love the cliche, so I'm more kidding about that last bit (regardless of how much I'd like to read that... LOL). Keep it up, can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2011 06:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update. It's my bday this weekend, so this makes a nice bday surprise for me. Loved the chapter, but I want more b/v interaction. Preferably steamy interaction, lol. Btw, is Zhelonie going to be Picolo? Have a great thanksgiving. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2011 09:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. Hopefully things really start heating up between b/v, instead of in vegeta's dreams. I love historical AU storylines, and this by far, is one of the best ones I've read. |
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